英语四六级作文.ppt

1、英语四六级作文,四六级写作基本情况介绍,全国大学英语四六级考试中写作的时间是30分钟，满分是15分（710分制中，106.5满分，63.9及格），占总分的15%。四级要求字数至少为120，六级至少为150。,本题满分为15分，篇幅要求120字左右。阅卷人员就总的印象，从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判，给出奖励分(Reward Scores)。具体评分标准可以参考以下要求： 白卷、作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分；达不到字数要求的，要酌情扣1-3分； 只写一段者：0-4分；只写两段者：0-9分（指规定三段的作文）。 那种写八段的作文一般来说只得两分。,评分标准

2、,另外请参照以下要求与对应分数，在评卷时视实际情况加减： 2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎。 一塌糊涂 5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 糊里糊涂 8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中一些是严重错误。 马马虎虎 11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 清清爽爽 14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。无语言错误。 漂漂亮亮,高分作文标志,四级150-180字；六级180200字； 是否长短句交叉；句型是否有变化； 用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 关键词

3、是否换用，切勿老用重复词； 结构条理是否合理清晰；人称不做太多变化；时态不来回变化；请注意不管是什么类型的作文（命题、给定提纲、图表）简单明了地写三段，一般都不会有错；最好每一段都有主题句和过渡句。 卷面整洁，书写规范。,评卷特点语言是关键,按正规的作文要求，文章的语言、结构和内容是有机的整体，三者分量同等重要。而在四六级国内考试中，此三者的分量逐级递减。语言第一、结构次之、内容再次。四六级的判卷过程决定了这个顺序。道理简单，一分作文试卷被评卷人审视的时间在30到50分钟，如超过这个时间，就无法完成任务工作量。文章的结构，按照题干的提示大多数学生都会写成三段文章，一木了然。极少有超过5段，或者

4、只写1段者。所以不会是判断分数高下的重要标准。文章的内容需要阅卷人在通读文章后才能做出客观判断完成的任务。通常的越短做饭时节选文章部分阅读，然后直接打分。这种做法直接决定了语言的正确和地道是高分的主要决定因素。,如何提高作文水平？,（1）欣赏范文，但不要囫囵吞枣式地整篇背诵。准备一个写作专用的笔记本，从范文欣赏中摘抄自己喜欢的、老师讲评的、值得推荐的句式结构。 （2）模仿名句，但不要生搬硬套。准备足够的草稿纸，把自己摘抄来的名句。 （3）巧用心思，套用经典句型。利用经典句型组装一些长句子、靓句子和复杂句子对作文高分非常有帮助。比如作文开头常用句型：It is undoubted that ;

5、there is no doubt that; undoubtedly, there is; It is beyond doubt that .,一些具体的技巧,1. 适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反 映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I 。,eg. We should pay attention to this problem.,Attention should be paid to this problem.,Youd better say,2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。,例如：however /

6、therefore / for example / I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。,eg. Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ,3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等）,eg. Many people think we should study hard.,A vast majority of college students take it fo

7、r granted that study should be taken seriously.,Youd better say,英语四六级五大类作文写法,作文分类： 对立观点型 解决问题型 谚语警句型 图表图画型 应用写作型,模版（一）Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities . It is estimated that ( 1 ). Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is tha

8、t ( 2 ) .Besides,( 3 ) . The third reason is ( 4 ).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( 5 ) .It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ,( 6 ).On the other hand ,( 7 ). All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX .,解决问题型,注释：（1）用具体数据说明XX现象（2）原因一（3）原因二（4）原因三（5

9、）指出主要原因（6）解决建议一（7）解决建议二,解决问题型,模版（1） Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities . It is estimated that ( 1 ). Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that ( 2 ) .Besides,( 3 ) . The third reason is ( 4 ).To sum up ,the main cause of XX

10、 is due to ( 5 ) .It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ,( 6 ).On the other hand ,( 7 ). All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX .,解决问题型,注释：（1）用具体数据说明XX现象（2）原因一（3）原因二（4）原因三（5）指出主要原因（6）解决建议一（7）解决建议二,Generation gap between parents and children Nowadays , the

11、re are more and more misunderstanding between parents and children which is so- called generation gap . It is estimated that (75 percentages of parents often complain their childrens unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old fashioned). Why have there been so much misu

12、nderstanding between parents and children? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows . The first one is that ( the two generations, having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them) .,Besides (due to having little in common to tal

13、k about , they are not willing to sit face to face ) . The third reason is (with the pace of modern life ecoming faster and faster , both of them are so busy with their work or study that they dont spare enough time to exchange ideas ).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( lake of communicatio

14、n and understanding each other) .,It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing (children should respect their parents ).On the other hand ,( parents also should show solicitude for their children). All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap .,模块（2） These days we o

15、ften hear that ( 1 ).It is common that ( 2 ). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing ,( 3 ).For another,( 4 ). What is more, since ( 5 ),it is natural that ( 6 ).To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth trying .We should do something such as ( 7 )to

16、improve the present situation ,and I do believe everything will be better in the future .,注释： 1) 提出论题 2）说明现状 3）理由一 4) 理由三 5）理由三 6）引起的后果 7）解决方法,On Students Choosing Lectures Nowadays, there is a hot debate about whether students should be allowed to have optional choices of their teachers. A number o

17、f factors contribute to students decision on choosing teachers. On the one hand, teachers personalities play a significant role in this issue, which include a good sense of humor, being easy to communicate with and open-mined. On the other hand, it is likely that opinions from other students have an

18、 impact on the decision. Clearly, there are both advantages and disadvantages as to the view of this matter. For one thing, students enjoy more freedom than before. For another, some top teachers might be ignored if they are not able to meet students taste. In general, both students and teachers rig

19、hts should be respected.,解决问题型真题,2005年6月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 目前盗版的现象比较严重 造成这种现象的原因及其危害 我们应该怎么做 Useful words and expressions: 盗版：pir

20、acy (n.) 盗版产品：pirated products 知识产权：intellectual property right 侵犯版权：infringe sbs copyright; copyright infringement,Say No to Pirated Products,There is no denying the fact that piracy is a grave problem with which we are confronted. Taking a look around, we can find examples too numerous to list. In

21、 many places we see people peddling pirated books or disks.,Say No to Pirated Products,A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following might be the most critical ones. First, pirated products are much cheaper than copyrighted ones, so they are very attractive to people, especially youngsters, who are not financially well-off. Secondly, with highly developed technology, it is not difficult to manufacture pirated products. With one