《英语四级作文讲练》PPT课件.ppt

1、英语四级作文讲练,应用文(记叙文,书信,广告等) 议论文 说明文(图表作文),记叙文,要求考生写一篇记叙文，描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果，最后对事件进行简单分析。这类题型，通常分为三个步骤来写：,第一段、总结描述,交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点： 主题句,第二段、具体描述,具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果 起因经过结果,第三段、对事件的分析,分析句1+分析句2+分析3,实战演练 Directions：For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Da

2、y My Classmate Fell Ill. 1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况； 2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的； 3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是.,模板,第一段： 开篇句：About _ Oclock one evening in _, _. 扩展句：_. (展开描述一下事件),第二段： 主题句：Without hesitation, _. It wasnt long before _. 扩展句：1、One _. 2、Another _. 3、Our teacher _.,第三段： 结尾句：Is _? Who can tell ? But _. 扩展句：1、When _ ,

3、 people showed _ spirit regardless of _. 2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice. 3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.,范文 About nine Oclock one evening in May, my r

4、oommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot. We took his temperature. It was 38.5. Without hesitation, I dialed 120. It wasnt long before an ambulance arrived. One roommate brought a blank

5、et for him. Another supported him in the ambulance. Our teacher insisted on giving him some money. Is he a suspected SARS patient? Who can tell ? But we didt retreat. When the savage SARS was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.This kind of care between

6、 persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.,议论文,一、对立观点型 二、比较利弊型 三、问题解决型 四、热点话题型 五、阐述主题型,对立观点型1： Some people believe (argue,recognize, think) that 观点1. But other

7、 people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1. More importantly, 论据2. Most important of all, 论据3. In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, w

8、e can predict that 预测.,对立观点型2： People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing, 论据1. For another, 论据2. Last but not the least, 论据3. To conclude, 总结观点. A

9、s a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或 From above, we can predict that 预测.,对立观点型3： There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（争论的焦点）。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion

10、 is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious. First of all, 论据1。 Furthermore, 论据2。 Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。 A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。 As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或 From above, we can predict

11、 that 预测.,比较利弊型,引出主题，陈述正面观点（1、2、3）负面观点（1、2、3)。 利弊对比，并陈述原因（1、2、3）。 陈述自己观点（提供论据并举例），并给出解决办法（展望）。,问题解决型,引出问题（数据或举例，突出其严重性） 分析其成因（1、2、3)。 解决办法（1、2、3)。,模板 These days we often hear that It is common that Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing , For another, What is mor

12、e, since ,it is natural that To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth trying .We should do something such as to improve the present situation ,and I do believe everything will be better in the future .,pollution of environment These days we often hear that (our living conditions are get

13、ting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed .).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing ,(the population of the world i

14、s increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is more , since ( the industrial revolution ) ,it is naturalthat (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms .The s

15、moke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment ).To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth trying .We should do something such as (planting more trees , equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve

16、the present situation ,and I do believe everything will be better in the future .,热点话题型,（1）人们针对XX的态度和举措（2）归纳现状 （1）第一个原因（2）第二个原因（3）第三个原因 （*）重申自己观点及改进方法,模板 In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on The factors for First of all ,Then , there comes a case that Moreover , Especially when Indeed,

17、 these unique points can be collected to remind people that In this way ,we should behave just like .,The impact of Television In recent years , with the development of science and technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV , offering as many as 50 channels .It has caused a heate

18、d debate on (the impact of television on children ). Many parents are worried about the impact of so much televisionon children. The factors for (parents worry is that children are indulged in television and spend too much time on it .) .First of all ,(with somany programs to choose from , children

19、are not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then , there comes a case that ( some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ). Moreover , ( the effect on childrens minds are more serious than the effect on chi

20、ldrens bodies ) . Especially when ( the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them ) . Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that ( they should pay close attention to and take more responsibilities for supervising their childrens TV viewing ).In this way

21、,children will not be influenced too deeply. .,阐述主题型,引出主题并加以解释。 举例（1、2）论证主题中心思想。 结合自身，突出主题并进行展望。,图表式作文,一、图表说明 二、分析图表（原因） 三、趋势预测,It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen /dropped considerably in recent years (as X

22、varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of (多少).,What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, (第一个原因). More importantly, (第二个原因). Most important of all, (第三个原因).,From the above discussions, we have

23、enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic /table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).,套句总结,开头 Recently, the problem of has aroused peoples concern. 最近,问题已引起人们的关注. Internet has been playing a

24、n increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. 互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题,Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face. 如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了. It is commonly believed that

25、 / It is a common belief that 人们一般认为 Many people insist that 很多人坚持认为 With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为 A lot of people seem to think that 很多人似乎认为,引出不同观点:,Peoples views on vary from person to person. Some hold that . However, others bel

26、ieve that.人们对的观点因人而异.有些人认为.然而其他人却认为 People may have different opinions on人们对可能会有不同的见解. Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异. There are different opinions among people as to 关于. 人们的观点大不相同. Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.,结尾,Tak

27、ing all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论 Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that 考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论 Hence/Therefore, wed better come to the conclusion that 因此,我们最好得出这样的结论,There is no doubt

28、 that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits. 毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点. All in all, we cannot live without But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. 总之,我们没有是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.,提出建议:,It is high time that we put an end to the (tr

29、end).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了. It is time to take the advice of and to put special emphasis on the improvement of 该是采纳的建议,并对的进展给予特殊重视的时候了. There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of 毫无疑问,对问题应予以足够的重视. Obviously,. If we want to do something , it is essential that 显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是 Only

30、 in this way can we 只有这样,我们才能 It must be realized that 我们必须意识到,预示后果:,Obviously, if we dont control the problem, the chances are that will lead us in danger. 很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险. No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that 毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会 It is urgent that immedi

31、ate measures should be taken to stop the situation. 很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展. 论证 From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second. 在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.,I cannot entirely agree with the idea that 我无法完全同意这一观点. Personally, I am standing on the side of

32、就个人而言,我站在的一边. I sincerely believe that 我真诚地相信 In my opinion, it is more advisable to do than to do. 在我个人看来,做比做更明智. Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why,给出原因:,This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, Second, Third, 这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, 第二, 第三, Why did ? For

33、 one thing For another. Perhaps the primary reason is 为什么会? 一个原因是 令一个原因是或许其主要原因是. I quite agree with the statement that the reasons are chiefly as follows. 我十分赞同这一论述,即,其主要原因如下:,列出解决办法:,Here are some suggestions for handling 这是如何处理某事的一些建议. The best way to solve the troubles is 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是 People hav

34、e figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题. 批判错误观点和做法: As far as something is concerned, . 就某事而言, It was obvious that 很显然,. It may be true that, but it doesnt mean that 可能是对的,但这并不意味着 It is natural to believe that , but we shouldnt ignore that 认为.是很自然的,但我们不应忽视. There is no eviden

35、ce to suggest that 没有证据表明,如何连接,表强调 still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially. Obviously, clearly. 表比较 like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in

36、 the same manner, equally.,表对比 by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast. 表列举 for example, for instance, such as, take for example. Except (for), to illustrate

37、.,表时间 later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while. 表顺序 first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.,表可能 presumably, probably, perha