高考英语短文改错课件.ppt

1、Pingyang No. 2 Vocational School Catherine,How to do Proof-reading,April 10th, 2007,We all had a good time today. 2. I can return to school now. 3. I like playing piano. 4. I major at accounting.,the,Wrong word,Missing word,in,Unnecessary word,right word,Now here are the weather report for our city.

2、 Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature 3 in the daytime. In the nights, the temperature will fell down below zero. The temperature will be 8 . The day before tomorrow, there will be the strong wind and the temperature will be low. It will fall down to 10 . You had better to wear your warm

3、clothes. If you are a driver, youd better be more carefully when you are driving because the strong wind.,1.,2.,3.,4.,5.,6.,7.,8.,9.,10.,3 steps of doing proof-reading,1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意）,2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分

4、句阅读，逐行找错）,3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones. （检查核对，攻克难点）,改错命题统计,Verbs(动词),Articles(冠词),Prepositions(介词),Adj. but a wise man tries his best to correct his errors. 愚蠢的人总是为自己的错误辩护，聪明的人则力求改正。 4.Dont make the same mistake twice. 不要重复犯同样的错误。,Proverbs,

5、Homework,Finish the exercises on the paper.,Byebye!,一、动词形,1.动词的时态和语态错误. 2. 主、谓不一致的错误。,高考链接： When the air move, we have wind.,moves,二、名词数,指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。,高考链接2： We write to each other all the times.,time,三、还要注意形和副,修饰名词，be动词，系动词要用形容词 修饰动词，形容词，过去分词，整个句子用副词 比较级和最高级的使用,高考链接： It is still hardly for me to

6、write in English.,hard,四、 代词格，细领悟,1.人称代词，物主代词的使用反身代词oneself 的使用 人称代词的主格和宾格不定代词的使用 Both,all,either,neither,none的使用. 6. Whose 和whos， its和 its的区别,高考链接： I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English this term.,us,五、介词短语须关注， 习惯用法要记住,主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。,高考链接： The man is sitting next his son.,to,. 冠词a, an和th

7、e的用法错误 连词but，and，or, so和although的用法错误,高考链接： What a good news weve heard. 2. Im sorry, and I wont be able to come tonight .,but,六、冠词连词常光顾,This passage is mainly about _.,the weather report in our city,Now here are the weather report for our city. Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature 3 in t

8、he daytime. In the nights, the temperature will fell down below zero. The temperature will be 8 . The day before tomorrow, there will be the strong wind and the temperature will be low. It will fall down to 10 . You had better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a driver, youd better be more caref

9、ully when you are driving because the strong wind.,1.,2.,3.,4.,5.,6.,7.,8.,9.,10.,Now here are the weather report for our city. 1. _ Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature 2. _ 3 in the daytime. In the evenings, the temperature 3. _ will fell down below zero. The temperature 4. _ will be 8

10、. The day before tomorrow, there 5. _,is,a,evening,fall,after,will be the strong wind and the temperature will 6. _ be low. It will fall down to 10 . You had 7. _ better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a 8. _ driver, youd better be more carefully when 9. _ you are driving because the strong wi

11、nd. 10. _,a,careful,of, 刷票 晓得大老爷为啥啊呆呆地站在门口壹动别动/以为是自己做错咯啥啊/过咯半天才后知后觉地想起来自己竟然忘记请安咯/于是赶快上前壹步说道：/妾身给老爷请/啊别/妾身给爷请安/由于肚子像壹座小山壹样横在面前/又因为有两各月来/水清既没什么见到他/也被排字琦免咯她日常请安/所以水清对于那各别别扭扭请安礼生疏咯许多/突然行礼又是慌慌张张/以致身子壹各别稳/立即朝地上栽倒下去/眼见着又要摔倒/水清心中暗叫：坏咯/坏咯/又要摔各大屁墩咯/当即吓得手舞足蹈起来/力图平衡身体/月影见状/惊恐万分慌忙伸手去扶/还好/还好/总算是眼疾手快壹把就抓住咯她左胳膊/而她右

12、胳膊/也被牢牢地抓住咯/但别是被月影牢牢地抓信/而是及时迎上前来王爷/月影壹见王爷出手相救/而且此时她家仆役已经并无大碍/于是赶快悄悄地松咯自己手/以免夹在两各主子中间碍事/谁想到月影那各好心松手却是弄巧成拙/刚刚被壹左壹右两各人抓住胳膊/水清有效地保持咯平衡/稳稳地站住咯脚跟/结果月影那各擅作主张突然松手/立即破坏咯平衡/水清由于重心别稳而再度摔倒/好在身在她右侧王爷壹直牢牢地抓着水清胳膊/虽然月影松手导致咯水清二次摔倒/却是因为王爷像壹座山壹样地侧立身旁/并在她摔倒壹刹那/本能地加大咯力气/所以随着月影松手/重心失衡水清跌入咯他怀抱中/庆幸没什么再摔壹各大屁墩/惊魂初定后水清突然发觉现在那

13、各姿势很是别扭难受/又因为请安礼失误而担心挨罚/于是战战兢兢地朝他先咧咯壹下嘴/才开口说道：/谢/多谢老爷/噢别/多谢爷/救命之恩/小/算咯/以后假设您喜欢/就别用改口咯/就称老爷吧/真？/真/那/那/老爷/凝儿/咦？您怎么晓得妾身名字是凝儿？噢/难道是月影告诉您？/是您自己告诉爷/自己告诉他？自己总共也没什么见过大老爷几次面/哪壹次也没什么跟他说过自己名字叫凝儿啊？正在百思别解之时/水清忽然发现大老爷眼睛怎么湿乎乎？然后/怎么会有泪水流下？/老爷/您为啥啊哭咯？谁欺负您咯？/是您/凝儿/那句话将水清说得莫名其妙/她还欺负他？分明是他欺负她啊/可是/那泪水/看着挺好玩呢/于是水清想也没想地就伸

14、出手去抹那些泪水/她先是用食指胡乱地在他脸上涂抹壹气/然后忽然想尝尝那泪水味道/于是又将食指放进嘴里尝咯尝/当即咧咯嘴：/怎么那么难吃啊/他止别住地热泪长流/他想告诉她/泪水怎么会是香甜呢？只有苦涩/咸酸在其中/可是他又别想告诉她/痛苦只有他壹各人承担就足够咯/她现在别晓得啥啊叫做痛苦/有多好/为啥啊要打搅她如此纯真世界呢？第1326章/鱼肉水清之所以想要品尝壹下泪水味道/那是因为她饿咯/现在已经是晚膳时间/王爷到来之前/主仆两人壹边闲说话/壹边等着竹墨送晚膳/结果两各人没什么等来竹墨/却是将王爷迎进咯屋/耽搁咯那么半天/水清肚子都饿得咕咕叫咯/其实竹墨早就将晚膳送咯过来/只是月影没什么让她端

15、上来/毕竟王爷在那里/怕他会有啥啊事情吩咐/此时眼见着水清品尝起泪水/月影当然晓得她家仆役早就饿坏咯/于是小心翼翼、拐弯抹角地暗示道：/启禀爷/别晓得您今天在哪里用膳/假设爷在那里用膳话/奴婢那就/壹听月影禀报/他那才闻到咯壹股饭菜味道/于是强压下心中悲伤/开口说道：/爷就在那里用吧/月影本是虚晃壹枪/借着请示他在哪里用膳方式来提醒他晚膳时间到咯/根本就没什么打着他会在那里用膳主意/毕竟那各院子主子别是得CHONG之时/谁想到她只是随口壹提/王爷还果真就在那里用膳咯/被打咯壹各措手别及/于是月影慌慌张张地回道：/那奴婢让厨房再为爷准备几各菜/别用咯/那里菜爷也吃习惯咯/别用特别准备啥啊/您现在

16、就端上来吧/回爷/奴婢还是让厨房再多准备壹些吧/您怎么那么哆嗦/赶快把饭菜端上来/月影无奈/只得与竹墨两人将饭菜端上来/然后月影负责水清/竹墨负责王爷/忙完净手事项后/待月影将食盒打开/王爷那才晓得为啥啊月影刚才那么坚持地要为他再多准备几各菜/就像刚刚初见变得又白又胖水清那样极度震惊/现在见到满桌美味佳肴/他再壹次被极度震惊/壹共六各盘子/四各主菜两各主食/壹盘酱肘子/壹盘烧全鸡/壹盘水晶鹅肉/壹盘清水爆肚/壹盘水煎肉包/壹盘菜饽饽/还有壹盘鱼茸羮/当那些菜品壹壹摆放整齐后/月影忐忑别安地望向他/王爷之所以坚持别让月影添菜/因为他想当然地认为他与水清口味相同/他也吃别太多/无非就是添双筷子而已

17、/而当他此时面对如盛宴般大鱼大肉之后/他眼前竟是突然浮现出水清曾经为他/做/过那三道只能看别能吃美馔：湘妃竹泪、牡丹争春、踏雪寻梅/王爷没什么动筷子/水清也别能动筷子/急得她心里火烧火撩般地难受/恨别能伸手去抓那只烧鸡大快朵颐壹番/别过她忍咯半天终于还是用极大克制力强忍咯下来/他哪里晓得现在水清嗜饭如命/仍是自顾自地沉浸在对从前过往无限伤心之中/沉寂咯半响/好别容易平复咯壹下心绪/才终于开口对月影说道：/给爷做壹碗清粥吧/竹墨壹听王爷有咯吩咐/赶快去通知厨房备膳/月影则将唯壹壹盘别带肉菜饽饽取咯壹各/放到他面前/月影是希望王爷好歹能够开始用咯膳/水清也就算得到解放可以吃饭咯/第1327章/布菜

18、对于月影那番苦心安排/王爷当然是心知肚明/别过由于他现在实在是没什么胃口/别管是啥啊都吃别下/而水清由于怀着身孕/自是等别及他那碗清粥做好端上来时候/于是转过头来对水清说道：/凝儿/您先吃吧/壹听大老爷发话可以开始用膳/水清心中甚是欢喜/眼巴巴地望向那壹桌子美味佳肴/壹脸心驰神往之情/月影当然是比她家仆役还要着急/所以王爷话音还未落下/就赶快先夹咯壹块酱肘子放到水清碗里/趁着她大快朵颐时候/赶快手脚麻利地拆解那只烧鸡/壹边拆解/壹边第壹时间将率先拆下来大鸡腿夹到水清碗里/看着水清吃得如此津津有味/如此香甜可口/令他又禁别住地想起从前她/吃壹口肉都像是要咯她命似/即使是怀福宜小格时候/仍是说肉太

19、腥/吃下就想吐/来自朗吟阁大厨整天变着花样/别是将鸡肉剁成茸偷偷加在菜粥里/就是用鸡汤煮面/那时他/因为吃饭问题别晓得跟她闹咯好些次别扭/甚至抬出来还没什么出生福宜小格/就在王爷因为回想往事而愣咯壹会儿神儿功夫/待省过味儿来壹看/那只烧全鸡居然只剩下几根骨头/整整壹只烧鸡/怎么就剩下几根骨头咯？全是她吃吗？可是那屋子里也没什么旁人/总别能是月影吃/生怕水清撑坏咯/吓得他急急地问道：/凝儿/那壹整只烧鸡/您全吃光咯？/水清被他那么壹问才突然想到壹各问题/以前只有她壹各人用膳/想吃啥啊就吃啥啊/现在有大老爷同膳/怎么忘记给大老爷留菜咯？晓得做咯错事/生怕又要挨罚/于是水清赶快说道：/老爷/凝儿壹时

20、糊涂/忘记咯您还没什么用膳呢/要别/那里还有水晶鹅肉/您尝尝那各吧/很好吃/壹边说着/水清壹边将鹅肉夹到咯他碗里/水清本是为咯掩盖自己没什么顾上大老爷用膳问题而/急中生智/谁想到却将月影吓坏咯/月影当然晓得王爷口味是啥啊/更何况今天是逢九/王爷别是说今天是诵经礼佛日子吗？别要说鸡鸭鱼肉/就是鸡蛋他也别会吃/生怕水清闯咯大祸/但是当着王爷面又别敢直说/只好赶快替她掩饰道：/仆役/有奴婢给爷布菜就行咯/您还看别上奴婢当差做事吗？/就在月影吓得别知所措之际/接下来壹幕却是将她惊呆咯/只见王爷竟然夹起咯那片水晶鹅肉/可是那片鹅肉并没什么送进他自己口中/而是将筷子调转咯方向/送到咯水清嘴边：/凝儿/您吃

21、吧/爷别饿呢/水清懵懵懂懂半天别晓得该如何行事/按道理来讲/从大老爷那里得来物件/那叫受赏/所以大老爷赏赐吃食她应该吃下/可是大老爷亲自喂过来吃食好像别应该吃/因为记得月丫头好像说过/奴才是伺候她/而她是要伺候大老爷/现在怎么变成咯大老爷伺候起她来咯？吃还是别吃？水清呆愣愣半天别晓得下壹步该怎么办/第1328章/朵颐见她半天没什么反应/他叹咯壹口气/无奈地说道：/您若再是别吃下/爷那胳膊可是又酸又痛/就要举别动咯/他那四力半臂力虽然在皇子小格中属于下等水平/但是对付那薄如纸片水晶鹅肉岂别是别费吹灰之力？他之所以说举别动咯/当然是在给自己找壹各台阶/否则话假设水清坚决别肯接受/他又怎么可能收回去？水清