2017年中考英语专题复习课件-书面表达应对技巧(共32张ppt).ppt

1、中 考 专 题 复 习 课,Writing,将过程变得美丽 让结果更加辉煌,中考英语书面表达应对技巧,中考英语作文评分标准,满分档（15分）：长度符合要求（80-90字），书写规范，涵盖所有要 点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇丰富，没有任何语法错误。 第五档（12-14分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结 构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇比较丰富有少量语法错误。 第四档（9-11分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，基本涵盖要点（有2 要点得给9-10分），行文比较连贯，词汇不够丰富，有一些语法错误。 第三档(6-8分)：文本长度与要求有明显距离，书写不规范，要点不完整 （只有

2、1个要点），行文不连贯，词汇量不足，错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。 第二档（3-5分）：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。 第一档（0-2分）：有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。 （白卷0分）,Discussion,How to Write English Compositions,集句成段,组段成篇,审清题意,连词成句,抓住要点,抄写规范,1,2,3,4,5,6,Writing skillssix steps,欣赏范文,1.爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明，你们学校的“English Garden”正在举办主题为“付出即是收获”的征文活动，请你联系自己平时的爱心

3、行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。 要求：1.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。 2.80100词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Giving is Receiving My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up my house. I go to the old peoples home and do some clea

4、ning for them once a month. I often visit the Childrens Hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I also help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me?,2. 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班

5、特意开展了一次以Less Pressure, Better Life为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括： 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么； 我的压力是什么； 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well w

6、ith their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt t

7、ired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. Thats all. Thank you!,3. 幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。 要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确, 字迹工整，8090词。 Happiness is

8、 important in our life. In fact , happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it. I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesnt mat

9、ter, my child. Remember well be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents love. I want to be a good child for my parents.,初中生写作

10、“六大病症”,1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； 2) 单词拼写错误； frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite wear shorts and a T-shirt; polite(有礼貌的)，happy,5. Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。,开头： Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He,6. 考考你的眼力: Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He is 15 year old. He is tall or thin. He has blac

11、k hair and he like wear short and T-shirts. He looks very cute. He likes hamburgers and fried chickens best. His favorite classes are science, art and P.E. He like little animals. He often play with his good friends at school and helps others. He is very polite and kind-hearted. He is a good boy. I

12、very like him.,7. 正确示例: Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He is 15 years old. He is tall and thin. He has black hair and he likes wearing shorts and T-shirts. He looks very cute. He likes hamburgers and fried chicken best. His favorite classes are science, art and P.E. He likes little animals. He often pla

13、ys with his good friends at school and helps others. He is very polite and kind-hearted. He is a good boy. I like him very much.,自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些 同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校 园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你 用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。 内容要点包括： 注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest g

14、roups social activities, do sports, net bar,第一步:审清题意,认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息,具体做法：用笔勾画,自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声”栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：,注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数,主题,体裁,人称,结构,时态,字数,已知信息,未知信息,以一般现在时为主,第二步： 列出写作提纲（Outline）。,具体做法： 根据

15、段落整理写作要点,不要遗漏要点！,Introduction Main body Conclusion,problems,opinions,suggestions,Write an outline,花太多时间在兴趣爱好上 迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏 -,-,合理安排时间 参加兴趣小组 -,List some keywords about problems. Phrases: _ _ 2. List some keywords about opinions. Phrases: _ _ 3. List some keywords about suggestions. Phrases: _ _,第三步：抓住

16、要点，列关键词,not good for study and health,Spend -on, hobbies, be crazy about,- - -,抓住要点，列关键词,Problems be crazy about (7B4) play computer games (7A1) watch too much TV (8A1) spend too much time on their hobbies (9A3) refuse to do homework (9A3) spend - on (7A2) Opinions not good for our health and study

17、(7A2) focus on (9A3) Pay more attention to (9A1) Suggestions plan time carefully (9A3) achieve a balance between study and bobbies (9A3) take part in different after school activities (7A2) join interest groups (8A2) do some sports (7A4) do some housework(7B5),Make sentences with the keywords about

18、problems. Sentences: _ _ 2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions. Sentences: _ _ 3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions. Sentences: _ _,第四步：连词成句,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and cant finish their homework on time.,I dont think its good for our study and health.,第五步：集句成段，组段成篇,There are many things we can do. we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in