5-7作业答案和5-9作文讲评.ppt

1、,翻译以下的句子，注意运用不同的语法结构和词汇、句型： 1.成功对于不同的人来说有不同的意义。一些人将它等同于声望，一些人将它等同于财富，还有一些人将它等同于成就。对我来说，成功意味着完成一个人的梦想。不管你的梦想是什么，你有一个目标并且为之倾注心力。梦想带给你希望和幸福。 Success _. Some may _， some _ and still some _. For me， it means _. Whatever your dreams are， you have a goal there and then _. Dreams bring you _.,There are seve

2、ral keys to success. First，_(你的目标要现实). If you set your goal _(太高)， _(你也许永远都达不到). Next， you have to make a plan of doing it. You can _(分步骤进行). Since the process is quite _(艰难)， you need to be_(勤奋)， _(耐心) and _(坚持). Even if you meet with some difficulties or _(挫折)， just overcome them. You can always t

3、ell yourself that _(没什么是不可能的). _(带着这样的决心)， success is sure to wait for you at the end of the tunnel！,Success means different things for different people. Some may equate it with fame， some with wealth and still some with accomplishments. For me， it means fulfilling ones dreams. Whatever your dreams

4、are， you have a goal there and then focus all your attention on it. Dreams bring you hope and happiness. In the process of struggling for it， you cry， sweat， complain or even curse， but the joy of harvesting makes you forget all the pains and troubles you have gone through. So an old proverb says th

5、at the sweetest fruit is one that has undergone the bitterest ordeal.,There are several keys to success. First， your goal must be practical and practicable. If you set your goal too high， chances are that you will never attain it. Next， you have to make a plan of doing it. You can take some steps to

6、 realize it. Since the process is quite tough， you need to be diligent， patient and persevering. Even if you meet with some difficulties or frustrations， just take them in your stride. You can always tell yourself that there is nothing impossible. With this will and determination， success is sure to

7、 wait for you at the end of the tunnel！,作业要求：1.运用适当的词汇、短语和句型翻译以 下内容，不必直译，能表达意思即可。2.用自己认 为可行的方式组合每组要点成一句话，并请留出2- 3行空白，用作明天讲评： 第一组 为了成为受欢迎的学生 我们必须积极参加各种活动。 我们做任何事情必须对我们的集体负责。 第二组 一个受到大家欢迎的学生 他尊重、关心、同情他人。,第三组 他总是乐于帮助有困难的人。 第四组 我们对待自己要严格。 我们要努力做到全面发展。 第五组 成功的时候/失败的时候 我们要保持谦虚。 我们要勇敢地面对困难。,第一组 为了成为受欢迎的学生

8、我们必须积极参加各种活动。 我们做任何事情必须对我们的集体负责。,直译：in order to become a popular student 意译：to enjoy/gain/win popularity in students,We must/should take an active part in all kinds of activities We must/should join in/participate all kinds of activities,直译：When we do anything, we should be responsible to our team.

9、意译：No matter what we do, we should be responsible to our team. Whatever we do, we should take responsibility for our team.,比较以下的句子,In order to become a popular student, we must take an active part in all kinds of activities, and when we do anything, we should be responsible to our team. In order to

10、become popular with other students, we must take an active part in all kinds of activities, and no matter what we do, we should be responsible to our team. In order to enjoy popularity in students, we must participate in all kinds of activities, and take responsibility to our team, no matter what we

11、 do. 思考：以上三句你喜欢哪句?为什么？,第二组 一个受到大家欢迎的学生 他尊重、关心、同情他人。,a popular student,He respects, cares about and shows sympathy to others.,如果将这两个信息点合并成“一个受到大家欢迎的学生是尊重、关心和同情他人的”，大家会发现“是尊重、关心和同情他人的”这一部分翻译起来很牵强，怎么办？,换一个组合方式：用定语从句，怎么写？ 一个受大家欢迎的学生是个尊重、关心和同情他人的人。,再换一个组合方式：用条件从句，怎么写？ 假如一个学生要受到大家欢迎，他必须学会尊重、关心和同情他人。,比较以下的

12、句子,A popular student should respects, cares about and shows sympathy to others. If a student want to be popular with other students, he must learn to respect, care about and show sympathy to others . A student who enjoys great popularity will show his respect, concern and sympathy to others. student

13、s with high popularity are those who show respect, concern, and sympathy for others. 思考：以上四句你喜欢哪句?为什么？,第三组 他总是乐于帮助有困难的人。,直译：He is always ready to help people who need help. 意译： He never hesitate to help people in need of help. He never hesitate to help those in need. He never hesitate to give a hand

14、 to those in need of help. 思考：以上四句你喜欢哪句，为什么？,第四组 我们对待自己要严格。 We must be strict with ourselves. 我们要努力做到全面发展。,直译：we must work hard to fully develop. 意译：We spare no effort to achieve an all-round development. 思考：此组要点如何合并为一句话？,We should be strict with ourselves, sparing no effort to achieve an all-round

15、development.,第五组 成功的时候/失败的时候 我们要保持谦虚。,when we succeed/fail in time of success/ failure,We should be modest. We should remain modest./ We should stay grounded.,我们要勇敢地面对困难。We should be brave when we face difficulties.We should be brave enough to handle any difficulties.We should stay brave while faced

16、 with any difficulties.In time of difficulty, we should keep strong-minded.faced with obstacle/hardship at any time, we should be brave.,比较以下句子,When we succeed/are successful, we should be modest, and when we face difficulties, we should be brave. In time of success, we should stay modest, while in

17、time of difficulty, we should be strong-minded. In time of success, we should remain modest and calm, while faced with obstacles, we should be determined to overcome them. 思考：以上3句，你喜欢那句，为什么？,怎样处理基础写作的信息点合并,1. 审题先划分信息点和5句话各自的内容。 第一时间发现信息点之间的关系是平行还是因果或者对比等，从而确定该用什么连接成分或者哪些特定的从句。 每一句话的写作都遵循先主谓宾，再定状补的顺序

18、，先写好主干信息，再往上加内容。 有意识地将信息点套用进复合句（主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句，同位语从句，定语从句），with复合结构，非谓语动词短语作状语，it作形式主语形式宾语等几个常用的语法结构中。,怎样使句子显得更漂亮,尽可能准确使用高级词汇，让句子显得更高级和复杂.体现高三生的水平，更好地表达要点。 形容词或短语用同义的动词短语替代 善于运用特殊句型，例如：强调，倒装，同位语从句，定语从句等为自己的作文加分。 善于用介词短语，最典型的是with结构。 善于运用非谓语动词及短语，让句子不再只有“某人做某事”一种套路。 灵活处理状语和定语的位置，灵活运用非谓语动词短语和介词短语作定语。

19、多信息点就意味着要写长句，主谓结构要完整,8. 不能放过将某些要点套入高级句型的机会 严格要求；努力全面发展 one thing that cant be ignored is to be strict with ourselves, making every effort to achieve an all-round development,基础写作句子的评判标准以准确 为第一要务，因此，务必使自己的 作文每一句话在语法，句法，结构 和用词等各方面严格遵循要点的要 求,做到语法正确，用词规范，内容 完整，结构清晰。,以“节俭”为话题的大作文,审题： 思考： 1.要点1需要几句话写？如果写一

20、句话，写什么？ 有没有其他别的内容与之相关，如果有，是放在 要点1这一段还是放在要点3的段落去写？ 2.要点2的主题句怎么写？你打算举哪几方面，什 么例子？ 3.要点3谈对节俭的理解，请问“节俭”是否等同于“节约”？,有关“节俭”话题的素材,节俭是中华民族优良传统和美德之一 节俭：1.生活俭省,有节制; 2.不容自己或别人有不必要的花费。 节约： （形容词、动词）用钱等有节制 如今世界资源的紧张，环境的恶化，将节约提到了一种新的境界社会节约，就是以多数人甚至所有人的人生幸福为目标，追求社会整体效益、力避各种浪费的社会运动。我国也出台了相关的法律中华人民共和国节约能源法，以推动全社会节约能源，提高能源利用效率，保护和改善环境，促进经济社会全面协调可持续发