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1、最新资料推荐我喝我的清茶中文:王书春他饮他的花酒,我喝我的清茶。人生,需要一种境界:自我安定。面对别人的成功和荣耀,我喝我的清茶。我明白那掌声已有所属,匆匆忙忙赶过去,不会有成功等着你。还是自己再创业绩吧,跟着别人永远只能摸着成功的尾巴。凡事不逃避, 我喝我的清茶, 荷花居污泥而不染,若为怕水污而种在旱地上,它早就枯死了。人生也一样,避恶、避丑、避邪,只能说明心灵脆弱,一个自我安定的人,是不怕环境污染自己的, 而有力量影响他人。古代孟母三迁是为了怕孩子受影响,要为了自己就没有必要逃避了,后来孟子长大成人后也没听说孟母再搬家。自我安定可不是找一个安宁的所在,而恰恰是在紊乱的环境中保持安定的心境。

2、“定 ”是一种境界,是居于多变之中的不动摇。 只有达到这一境界, 才能掌握自己的方向, 才能做到: “他饮他的花酒,我喝我的清茶。 ”A 版本:While others indulging in wining and dining, Im just content the pleasure of drinking plain tea.Because I know life sometimes is in want of a mentality of calmness.While others rejoicing their success and glory, I m simply stand

3、ing aloof at ease enjoying acup of plain tea. Since the applause having belonged to others, the slavish imitationcould justmake no success therefore I d rather carve out a career for myself.I m gratified with the life with plain tea and never escape from any adversity. I admire the lotusflower in th

4、e mud without being tainted would wither and die if it grew on the land for fear ofsewage. The evils, ugliness, and risks, are the mud in our life testing our human fragilitynotnecessary to shirk them. Because a man with a peaceful interior world fears no nasty environmentand dears to improve it and

5、 bring benefits to others by his own strength. To shun the bad influencein the neighborhood, Menciuss mother had made three removals in his childhood .History showsno record of any more removals after he grew up.Serenity doesnt merely mean a quiet residence but keep a serene life in a messy surround

6、ing. It isa state of mind standing to ones own resolution in such a fickle world so that we can be the masterof our destiny, i.e., Contenting with a cup of plain tea while others indulging in the best wine.B 版本:Contenting Myself with Plain Teaan life, it seems to me, needs a placidityof mind. While

7、others may be winning anddining, I am content with my plain tea. Not dazzled by other people s aura of success and glamI will indulge in my simple pleasure. Clearly aware where the credit goes, I will not join in therush in the vain hope of accepting the prize to be handed to me on a plate. The best

8、 a blindfollower can do is tailing after the winners. The only alternative is to create wonders of one1最新资料推荐I stick to the pureness of my pleasure, never escaping from reality. The lotus grows in the mud without being tainted. If, to avoid the dirt, one plants it on dry clean ground, it simply will

9、 notgrow. The same holdstrue for human beings. Shrinking from what is ugly,vile and evil onlyproves the frailty of one s character. A person in full possession of mental serenity never stands infear of being mentally contaminated by the filthy environment. On the contrary, he can exercisepositive in

10、fluences allaround. Mencius mothers made three removals during his childhood tokeep him away from bad influences, which did not pose any problem for her. History does notrecord any more of such removals afterhe grew up. Enjoying the tranquilityof mind does notmean hiding oneself in a haven. What is

11、meant is the maintenance of such a mental state in themidst of chaos, i.e. moral immovabilityamidst kaleidoscopic changes. Onlya person who hasattained his plane can be a real master of his destiny, contenting himself with the purest and simplest pleasure.C 版本:I am Content to Drink my Plain TeaBy Wa

12、ng ShuchunLet others make merry with the best wines; I am content to drink my plain tea. In life we need tokeep a tranquil mood.While others revel in their success and glory, I drink my plain tea in contentment. Knowing thatthe applause has gone to whom it belongs, I won t rush over in the hope of t

13、umbling on successalso. Instead, I will make a solid effort to accomplish my own goal. Those who follow others willalways fall short of success.I always confront the reality over a cup of plain tea. The lotus, though growing in mud, emergesunsullied from the filth.If, for fear that it should get soi

14、led, one had planted it on dry land, itwould have long withered away. The same is true with life. Only a weak mind is afraid of encountering ugliness, vices and evils. A person with a tranquil frame of mind will not fear the adverse influence from people around him. Instead he is strong enough to ex

15、ert a positive influence on them. In ancient times, Mencius mother movedthree times to shun the bad influencefrom the neighborhood on her son s upbringing. She did not do that for her own sake, for therewas no need to. After Mencius had grown up, she did not move even once.【齐冉译评】王书春先生这篇散文主要是通过对比两种不同

16、的生活方式而向读者展现他对生活的态度。王先生选用的是 “花酒 ”和“清茶 ”两个喻体。那么, 当译者读完这篇文章,大致了解了原作者的意图之后,首先应考虑的是作为译者作品的读者的理解能力。作为中国读者, 我们能够很快明白“花酒 ”意为何及 “清茶 ”意为何?如果仅仅是将 “花酒 ”译为 “wining and dining ,”“清茶 ”直接译为 “plain tea的”话,恐怕译文读者会2最新资料推荐在开始阅读之时便生困惑之感。综合两篇译文来看,笔者认为三位译者过于忠实原文,而这样做的直接后果则是使译文读者产生不知所云之感。翻译的目的是以传递信息,传递思想为主,而上述两篇译文中,“直译 ”的痕

17、迹过重。在笔者看来,如果能将“花酒 ”及“清茶 ”在第一次出现时,译为“hilarious and luxurious life 和”“ tranquil and frugal life 则更容易使”西方读者明白,hilarious: very funny or merry欢闹的,热闹的;对应tranquil:calm, peaceful or quiet 宁静,祥和的。luxurious:indulgence in andenjoyment of rich, comfortable, and sumptuous living;对应frugal: practicing economy; liv

18、ingwithout waste; thrifty 。在此之后,原作者引述出了“面对别人的成功和荣耀,我喝我的清茶。我明白那掌声已有所属”则更能彰显笔者的译文,而并非是仅仅是吃吃喝喝“dining and wining 。读”完这一段,想必读者可以明了作者对于成功的态度是鼓励我们成为一个active doer but not a blindfollower 。译文一的译者,则把“掌声属于他们 ”直接译了出来,在释意与理解上完全没有问题,但总是让人觉得过于直白,失去了原文中作者想表达的那种意境。第二段中, “凡事不逃避,我喝我的清茶,荷花居污泥而不染,若为怕水污而种在旱地上,它早就枯死了。 ”三

19、位译者都采用了直译的方法,即荷花出于污处方能成长,若植于洁净之处,未必能长成。 那么,我们中国读者多数是读过北宋时期著名哲学家周敦颐在周元公集中收录的一篇名文 爱莲说 的,我们是理解作者在这里引用荷花之意是在于比喻从污俗的环境中走出来,却能保持纯真的品质而不沾染坏习气;近而引申出濯清涟而不妖,洁身自好,表达了作者自己既不愿消极避世,也不愿像世人那样追逐功名富贵。他要在污浊的世间独立不移, 永远保持高洁的操守和正直的品德。同时也委婉的批判了现世中趋炎附势、追求富贵的世风。由此可见,一个小小的“荷花 ”比喻,其喻意之深刻,远不是仅仅一个Lotus 能够传达给西方读者的。在这里,笔者则要提出一个中西

20、方作者及译者在思想认识上的一个不同。但凡中国作家往往遵循的是“读者的责任 ”即 “readers responsibility而”不是 “作者的责任 ”即“ writers responsibility。这两种不”同的认识观,则直接导致我们在创作或翻译时所产生的后果。读者的责任意思是说, 无论作者怎么样写, 读者能否明白根本不在作者的考虑范围之内;而读者的责任, 则是重点突出作者写作的目的一定是要让读者明白你的写作意思,而不是模棱两可,似是而非。因此,笔者认为一篇好的译文,不应仅仅只遵循忠实于原文,甚至连原文中的比喻亦给予直译。原文中“凡事不逃避,我喝我的清茶,荷花居污泥而不染,若为怕水污而种

21、在旱地上,它早就枯死了。”笔者也想提出一些异议,三位译者均给这一无主句加了一个假设的主语 “我”(译文一 I m gratified with the life with plain tea and never escape from any adversity. 译文二 I stick to the pureness of my pleasure, never escaping from reality. 译文三 I always confront the reality over a cup of plain tea. )而笔者在想,在进行译文创作时,这一揣测是否有欠妥呢?按照英语的习惯,

22、则应该是A responsible man willnever shifttheresponsibility onto the others ;而在这里的 “我喝我的清茶 ”则明显是一个过度,是一个承前起后的连接句,说明作者后面要表述其写作意图了,但三位似乎也对这一过度句采用了直译,估计这一译法肯定会使西方读者觉得丈二的和尚摸不着头脑了。而按笔者的理解,其实这一3动形象。综上所述,王先生这篇文章堪称是将中国古文化的精髓与现世的浮躁有机地结合起来以杂文的方式娓娓道来进行对比的佳作,即不失说理性又不让人感到枯燥,纵古谈今,引人深思。最新资料推荐点过度句则可以处理为一个铺垫,试译为:Drinking my pl

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