复习----基础写作.ppt

1、复习-基础写作,写作步骤,认真审题，确定需要表达的信息内容,把信息点写成简要的英语短语或简单句,信息重组，确定5句话的信息内容和次序,润色单词和句型，添加关联词，使上下文连贯,高分原则,词汇原则：措辞准确，词汇丰富,句型原则：5个“1”,关联词原则：保持上下文连贯,信息原则：全面、准确,语法原则：规范词汇、句型，确保信息准确,1简单句，1并列句，1复合句，1特殊句型，1非谓语v.句型,一. 人物写作,概 貌 育 平 估,人物简介写作常用的词组及句子。 1. Birthday and birth place was/ were born in (some place) on (the date

2、) 2. Family background was / were born in / into a poor / rich family his / her family was so poor that live a happy / hard life 3. Education background be admitted to college graduate from department of university when at college, he majored in receive a doctors degree/ masters degree,4. Big events

3、 in ones life be interested in / be fond of work hard at devote his lifetime / himself to do research about / into win a prize / the first prize in competition receive / obtain / win the Nobel Prize for be good at / do well in be crazy about / enjoy have a gift / talent for language, etc,5. Evaluati

4、on one of the best / most important be respected by everyone speak / think highly of be honored as (an excellent athlete) his hard work brought him great success,1.A. 概况 : 译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一 1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China. 2)Zhong Nanshan, on

5、e of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941. B.外貌,性格: 译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发,* 语法，句法高分tips,尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺,My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.,巧用with做定语,C. 教育经历： 1）Majored in Science, he graduated from a famous University in the

6、 north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies. 2）Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctors degree. D生平： 1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music. 2）He set a new world record of

7、 swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.,注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼,尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章,E评估： 1）Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him . 2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man. 3）Lishizh

8、en makes great contributions to Medical literature.,注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组,练习答案：你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，介绍我国著名的科学家。请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文。,参考词汇：航空学 the science of Astronomy, 航天科技事业 AnA industry, (Astronomy and Aircraft), “神童” a super-talented boy 题目：A Brief Introduction of Qian Xuesen 写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容 评分标准 句子结构准确，信息

9、内容完整，篇章结构连贯。,练习答案：介绍钱学森,Born into a wealthy family on December 11, 1911, Zhejiang Province, QianXuesen was so clever that he was regarded as a “super talented” boy in his childhood. Having graduated from Shanghai Jiaotong University in 1934, he went to America for his further study and gained his do

10、ctors degree in the Science of Astronomy. Since he returned to China, he has devoted all his life to Chinas AnA industry, taking part in the design and research of rockets and missiles as well as opening a new era of Chinas Astronomy industry. Its for his outstanding achievements that QianXuesen is

11、honoured as the “ Father of Chinas Astronomy” and the “King of Rockets”. QianXuesen, a pioneer of Chinas Astronomy industry, passed away in November, 2009 in Beijing.,Place,ocation,rea,opulation,istory,imate,local pr,cenery,二、介绍地点,l,a,p,h,c,全市面积74344平方公里；人口1100多万。 地理:广东省中部珠江三角洲北缘，珠江从市中心穿过，气候温暖湿润。 历史

12、: 2,200多年历史的名城, 历史上海上丝绸之路的始发港。 旅游:风光旖旎，旅游资源丰富。 写作内容 参考词汇: 珠江三角洲 the Pearl River Delta 海上丝绸之路 the Maritime Silk Road 始发港 a starting port 写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容； 评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。,Guangzhou, the third largest city in China, also known as City of Flowers, serves as the capital city of Guangdong and

13、the centre of its political, economic, scientific, educational, and cultural life. Covering an area of 7434.4 square kilometres, it is home to more than 11 million people. Located in the middle of Guangdong, north of the Pearl River Delta with the Pearl River winding its way through the city, Guangz

14、hou enjoys a warm and wet climate. Besides, it is a famous city with a history of more than 2,200 years and a starting port of the Maritime Silk Road. With its beautiful scenery, Guangzhou is also abundant in traveling resources.,三、正反观点对比,1有一些人认为 2另一些人认为 3我的看法,Writing structure -How to write an essa

15、y (议论短文),( In my opinion，I think-/ As for me, I think-/ Personally, I think -. ),( There are different opinions about whether-.),( Some people think that -. Whats more/Moreover-. However, other people hold the opposite opinion that-. and worse still-. ),The theme of the essay (陈述议论的主题),Opinion 1,Opi

16、nion 2,Reasons 1,2,Reasons 1,2,Personal opinion,注意事项：,条理要清晰，观点明确； 文章必须包括所有提示要点，同时切记用5句连篇； 运用适当的连词，副词，短语等来衔接句子； 注意时态，议论文形式还是以现在时为主. 对立观点式议论短文的基础写作模板： There are different opinions about whether_. Some people think that _. Whats more/Moreover/Furthermore _. However, others hold the opposite opinion tha

17、t_, and worse still， _.As for me/In my opinion / Personally, I think that_.,练习答案范文：,We middle school students have had many tests or exams and have both achieved success and suffered from failure, but different students take different attitudes to failure. Some fall in low spirits when they dont do

18、well in the exams, losing heart and no longer studying as hard as before. However, most students take an active attitude towards failure. By encouraging themselves to be self-confident, They find out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes. In my opinion, failure is

19、the mother of success, which can teach us a lot in the process of reaching our goals, and only by tasting failure can we enjoy the fruit of success.,【题型说明】 调查报告是针对某一现象、某一事件或某一问题进行深入细致的调查这一类写作题，要求同学们根据调查结果，对某种现象进行分析并谈谈自己的看法，写一份调查报告。,四、调查报告,调查报告写作要点,认真审题，明确写作内容 时态 3. 写作 内容,Beginning时间、对象、内容(1句) Body调查

20、结果(3句) Ending个人观点及理由(1句),过 渡 衔 接,关键： 1. 对比分析，找出异同点； 2. 表达多样，避免重复罗列数据。,现在时(常用),* Useful expressions: Recently, Ive conducted/made/ carried out/done a survey among on to find out Last week, a survey was conducted among to see/ find out,Examples: 1.最近，你对班里60名同学（男女各半）进行了关于上网目的的调查。 2. 上周，我们学校对所有学生进行了一次调查

21、，了解他们对于开设英语角的看法。(set up),Part1-Beginning：调查时间、对象、问题,Examples: 1.最近，你对班里60名同学（男女各半）进行了关于上网目的的调查。 2. 上周，我们学校对所有学生进行了一次调查，了解他们对于开设英语角的看法。(set up),Last week, our school carried out a survey among all the students to find out their opinions about setting up an English corner.,Recently, Ive conducted a su

22、rvey among 30 boys and 30 girls in my class on their purposes of surfing the Internet.,Part 2- Body添加过渡词,* Useful expressions: From/ According to the survey, As the survey/data shows, The survey shows that 递进： besides/ whats more/ moreover/ in addition 转折： However,/ On the contrary/while/ but,* Usef

23、ul expressions: 25%的学生 排第二位 占总数30% 多数；少数；只有；多达 倍数 百分率,25% of/ a quarter/ one-fourth of the students,rank the second (for),account for/ take up 30% of the total,or:10% of the boys like and so do the girls.,most (of)，few (of) ，only，as many/much as,The number of doubles/is twice that of,percentage,The

24、percentage of the boys who like is the same as that of the girls.,Part2- Body：调查结果分析,2. 男女生上网时在最感兴趣的事情方面有何不同； 3. “看新闻”在男女生上网目的中的排序差异； 4. 男女生在以“学习”为上网目的方面的共同点；,The girls favourite is, while what the boys like to do most is ., ranks the second for, but the third for,The percentage of the boys using Internet for is the same as that of,Example 1：,Part3-