四六级作文讲座.ppt

1、四六级作文,Content: everything needed included (内容要全) Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变

2、化),四六级作文,段落 句子 词语与词组,段落,主题句 topic sentence( 首中尾） 扩展句 support sentence （起解释说明作用，examples/evidence/ argument) 结尾句 conclusion sentence,论述性文体写作模板,On the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala,第一段：引言段,There is no consensus of opinions among people as to _（争论的焦点）. Some people believe that _（观点

3、1），while others take an opposite stand, firmly believing that _（观点2）.,对于_，众说纷纭，莫衷一是。有些人认为_，对于此，很多人则持相反的观点，他们认为_.,第二段 ：正方观点,Those people who maintain _（观点1）hold that _（论据1）。They also claim that _（论据2）。,主张_的人认为_. 他们觉得_.,第三段：反方观点,Nevertheless, the other people who contend _（观点2）argue that _（论据1）.They a

4、lso point out that_（论据2）.,然而，主张_的人则认为_.他们指出，_.,第四段：总结,A: 单方面-As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing, _（论据1）. For another，_（论据2）. When all the factors are examined, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that _(您的观点）.,在我看来，前一种/后一种观点更为合理/恰当些。其一，_;再者，_。权衡

5、所有的因素，我们不难得出如下结论：_.,总结（2）,B: 权衡型（中立型）-From the above discussion, I have to admit that there are merits to both sides of the issue. However, I would like to take a more neutral position. On the one hand, _（针对观点1立场或相关措施及建议）; on the other hand，_（针对观点2立场或相关措施及建议）.,纵观以上两种说法，本人认为，两种观点都有其可取之处。然而，对于此，本人保持中立

6、态度：一方面，_；另一方面，_.,Linking words in your writing: 递进: then, besides, furthermore, moreover, in addition, whats more, apart from 转折: however, but, although, though, yet, on the contrary, despite, in spite of, whereas, while, otherwise. 总结: finally, at last, in brief, in short, in summary, in conclusion

7、, in a word, to sum up, to summarize, all in all. 强调: indeed, certainly, surely, above all. 对比: in the same way, similarly, just as, unlike, different from. 因果: because (of), as a result of, owing to, thanks to, result from, lie inconsequently, therefore, hence, thus, for this reason, as a result, r

8、esult in, lead to,议论文 说明文 记叙文 应用文（书信） 图表作文（说明文+议论文）,句子,Types of sentences There are four traditional sentence patterns, namely, simple sentence, compound sentence, complex sentence and compound-complex sentence.,The simple sentence A simple sentence has a single subject-verb combination. The girl is

9、 watching TV.,The compound sentence A compound sentence consists of two or more simple sentences, usually connected by a comma plus a joining word (and, but, for, or, nor, so, yet). A compound sentence is used when you want to give equal weight to closely related ideas. Jane works for the government

10、, and her husband runs his own business.,The complex sentence A complex sentence is made up of a simple sentence and a statement that begins with a dependent word. A complex sentence is used when you want to emphasize one idea over another in a sentence. Because I forgot the time, I missed the train

11、.,The compound-complex sentence A compound-complex sentence consists of two (or more) simple sentences and one (or more) dependent statements. When the power line snapped, Mary was watching TV, and Jack was listening to the stereo.,常见错句,1.句子不完整 误：The output of the factory increasing steadily. 正：The

12、output of the factory is increasing steadily.,2.呼应方面 误：In high school we worked more as a group than as an individual. 正：In high school we worded more as a group than as individuals.,3.平行结构 误：Many people carry not only credit cards but also they carry cash. 正：Many people carry not only credit cards

13、but also cash. The price of milk is higher than grain. The price of milk is higher than that of grain.,4. 连词方面 The reason he was late was because he met a friend on the way. The reason he was late was that he met a friend on the way./ He was late because he met a friend on the way.,Avoid Chinglish!

14、1) Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded. 2) During the trip, you may happen a traffic accident. 3) Please come to visit me this summer vacation if you are convenient. 4) I forgot my dictionary at home. 5) This year will produce more steel than last year.,Language,Corrected 1) Traffic in Shanghai is to

15、o heavy. 2) During the trip, a traffic accident may happen. 3) Please come to visit me this summer vacation if it is convenient for/to you. 4) I left my dictionary at home. 5) This year the factory will produce more steel than last year.,Language,Polish our sentences!,O: The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news. P: Hearing the bad news, the young man couldnt help crying. O: I like reading and my b