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1、书面表达评分标准： 第一档：（1513分） 完全符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。 第二档：（129分） 基本符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 第三档：（85分） 部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。 第四档：（40分） 与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。,十、文段表达。（共15分） 假设你叫李飞，是美国中学生杰克的笔友，你收到了他的

2、来信。请给杰克写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍你对他在北京的安排或者建议。,Dear Li Fei, Im lucky to have you as my host family. I will stay in Beijing just for two days. (1) I hope to go to your school and study with you. Im interested in your courses and after-class activities. (2) I also want to know more about Beijing? Could you plea

3、se show me around Beijing? Would you mind telling me the two-day life and activities? Im looking forward to your letter. Yours, Jack,Dear Jack, (区范文） Im glad to hear from you. （信的语气）Its my honor to be with you and show you around Beijing. （主题句）Now I will tell you about my plan for your two-day stay

4、here. On the first day, I am going to take you to my school and study with me. In the morning, you can choose 3 classes to listen to. In the afternoon, there will be different kinds of clubs after class. I am sure you will fall in love with my school.,On the second day, I plan to have a bus tour to

5、enjoy the sights of Beijing. We will get off at Tianan Men Square, where we can feel the perfect mixture of the past and the present. After walking on the magnificent square, we can visit the Palace Museum. Here you can see some wonderful buildings and learn about Chinese history better. So, whats y

6、our decision? （信的语气）I just cant wait to meet you and youre always welcome！ Yours, Li Fei,(13-15分) As for your questions, Im eager to tell you the short but colorful life and activities, and I cant wait to show you around the capital of China. The arrangement is as perfect as possible. At the beginni

7、ng of the first day, you will go to school with me and do some morning exercises to keep fit as normal. Then you will experience the system of Chinese education, you will be filled with the charm of knowledge. Whats more, we can share the lunch together. As for the after-class activities, there are

8、not only many courts to play ball games but also a number of groups for arts or something else.,For the next day, you are lucky to take the school bus with us to go outside the school and experience the gorgeous and graceful Chinese culture by taking a trip to the Great Wall. It will never fail to h

9、old your attraction. After going back home, we will treat you with the first-class Chinese traditional food. I hope you will be satisfied with it and enjoy yourself. Also, I sincerely hope that you can feel the hospitality of Beijing people and realize the good points of Chinese education.,（1315） De

10、ar Jack, Im glad to hear from you. As the host family, its my duty to show you around Beijing and Im sure youll certainly have a good time here. The two-day life and activities are as following. On the first day, you are going to take classes in my school. The whole class are looking forward to givi

11、ng you a warm welcome. I believe youll not only be surprised by the active atmosphere in class but also enjoy talking and playing with the classmates. In the evening, my parents would like to prepare traditional Chinese food for you. They are all very delicious,On the second day, its time to go sigh

12、tseeing in Beijing. As you know, Beijing, as the capital of China, is famous for its plenty of wonderful spots and modern systems. Well visit the Great Wall, the Birds Nest, the Tianan men square and the Forbidden City as well. I wont introduce them to you now and the best way to know them is to see

13、 for yourself. I can hardly wait to become a tour guide. Im looking forward to seeing you.,（1315） During your stay in Beijing, I would love to be your tour guide. And here is the plan of your tour in the city. To begin with, of course, youll be in school and have courses with me. After that, well jo

14、in some after-class activities. There are variety kinds of selection and you can choose whatever you like. After the activities, Im going to show you around Beijing. On the first day, well go to the Great Wall. I promise youll be deeply attracted by the Great wall, not only because of its dragon-lik

15、e shape, but also the mysterious and cultural atmosphere of the highly civilized ancient China. On the second day, Ill take you to the Birds Nest, which is a perfect combination of the nature and high-tech. From the Birds Nest, youll find the prosperity and power of modern Beijing and China. Hope th

16、at my plan is fulfilling, if you want to see anywhere else, please write to me.,9-12分 First, I will introduce my school life. My school life is a paradise for all of us. And each subject is interesting and fun. After school, we always play ping-pong ball or basketball. We have fun playing here. Seco

17、nd, I will give you some suggestions for your days in Beijing. We can go to the Summer Palace at the first time. The history of Beijing is very long and full of interesting things. The weather here is always fine. Summer Palace is a great place for us to visit. Next, its a good idea to go to Tian An

18、men Square. The shade of the trees covers nearly the whole square. Flowers are laughing, trees are whispering, and the clouds are sleeping, everything in Beijing is wonderful.,9-12分 Dear Jack, Im glad to hear from you. I think I will help you have a wonderful life in Beijing. Now let me telling you

19、my plan of your two-day life in Beijing. First day, I will lead you to our school to study for a day. After class, we will go to the Birds Nest. Its really beautiful in the evening there. The next day, I will take you to the Great Wall. I think its a kind of win-win activity. For one thing you can s

20、ee the beautiful sights. For another, you can make your body healthier while you climb the Great wall. In the afternoon, I will show you around Beijing in the bus. Its really interesting. I am waiting for you.,Dear Jack, Im glad to hear from you. Im lucky to be your host family. I think you will have two interesting days. First day, you will going to my school and study with me. My teacher and classmates is very kind. They will welcome you. After school I will take you to the