书面表达专题 张秀红.ppt

1、建议倡议,高三专题复习 书面表达,2013年江苏高考英语科考试说明 解读和复习建议,在书面表达方面，增加了如下说明：看图作文的“图”不局限于某一类型的图，如漫画、广告画，也包括其他图画、照片等情景材料。考生们可根据情景图示的寓意、内容或情节线索，传递信息和表达自己的思想。作文应覆盖提示的要点，但避免仅根据提示文字做简单翻译。,完成以下写作任务： 最近你们班级对学校机房的情况作了一个调查。调查发现机房的电脑老化，运作慢，不能联网；有些电脑键盘不全，鼠标和显示屏不能正常运转。就这种情况给校长写一封信， 建议更新电脑设备，以适应现代社会对电脑知识的需要。可适当发挥。150词左右。,Teaching

2、and learning goal,整体三部分,opening 说出文中要叙述的中心问题 2. body （1段或2段） 围绕主题开展叙述或讨论 3. conclusion 对全文进行总结和概括,Step 1: 文体分析,Have a try,最近你们班级对学校机房的情况作了一个调查。调查发现机房的电脑老化，运作慢，不能联网；有些电脑键盘不全，鼠标和显示屏不能正常运转。就这种情况给校长写一封信， 建议更新电脑设备，以适应现代社会对电脑知识的需要。可适当发挥。150词左右。,1. 在建议倡议的写作中, 应开门见山指出写作目的, 陈述建议或倡议的内容。如：I am writing to give

3、suggestions about. (建议信)或In order to., I am going to make the following suggestions (倡议书)。,2. 建议倡议类型的作文都有相关的一些固定句型, 考生需要熟练掌握使用这些句型和相关的语法。比如, 在句中使用到advise, suggest或advice, suggestion等表示建议的词时, 要考虑到虚拟语气的使用。,1.最近你们班级对学校机房的情况作了一个调查。 2.调查发现机房的电脑老化 3. 运作慢 4.不能联网；,Recently, our class has done a survey about

4、 our computer room.,We find the computers in the computer room are old.,They are slow/run slowly.,They are not connected to the Internet.,Step 3: 将所给材料翻译成简单句,5.有些电脑键盘不全 6.鼠标和显示屏不能正常运转 7. 建议更新电脑设备 8. 随着社会的发展，电脑知识越来越重要。,Some of the keyboards have lost letters.,The mouses and monitors dont work.,I sugg

5、est that we update computer equipment.,As the society develops, computer knowledge is becoming more and more important.,9.我感到非常失望。 10.如果我们掌握了足够多的电脑知识，我们将来能找到更好的工作。,If we master enough computer knowledge, we can find a better job in the future.,I felt very disappointed.,Step4:将简单句转换成高级句式,1. Recently,

6、 our class has done a survey about our computer room.（变成被动句）,Recently, a survey about our computer room has been done in our class.,2.We find the computers in the computer room are old and they cant run fast.（改为it句型）,It is found that computers in the computer room are too old to run fast.,3. As the

7、society develops, computer knowledge is becoming more and more important.(改为with结构),With the society developing, we become aware of the importance of mastering computer knowledge.,4. If we master enough computer knowledge, we will find a better job in the future. (改为非谓语动词) (改为倒装句),We will find a bet

8、ter job in the future if mastering enough computer knowledge.,Only by mastering enough computer knowledge can we find a better job in the future.,将简单句变成高级句式常见的几种方法： 主动句变成被动句 恰当利用短语取代单词 合理使用非谓语动词 巧用倒装句 使用it句型 使用感叹句,Summary,1.你的努力很重要。 2. 在高中阶段学好英语是明智的。 3. 他只好自己解决所有的问题。,Your efforts will be very import

9、ant.,Your efforts will make a great difference.,It is wise to learn English well in Senior High.,It makes sense to learn English well in Senior High.,He had to solve all the problems himself.,He had to cope with all the problems himself.,Challenge ourselves:,4.是朋友帮助我完成任务的。(强调句) 5.只有通过这种方法我们才能过上更好的生活

10、。(倒装句) 6.由于我的电脑坏了，我很难完成作业。(with结构),It was my friends who helped me complete the task.,Only in this way can we live a better life.,With my computer broken, I had difficulty finishing my homework.,高考大纲中常用的 连接词 1.表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容 另外，还有： 2. 表示转折关系 但是， 然而， 相反：,whats more; besides; also; moreover; in addit

11、ion; whats worse; worse still,but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.,用恰当的过渡词联句成文,3. 表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以: 4. 表示条件关系 如果，只要: 除非: 否则:,since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result;,if ; on condition ( that ); as long as;,unless,or else; otherwise,5. 表示时间关系 当 的时候 : 在之后:

12、在之前: 直到: 不久: 近来: 自从 : 从那时起: 后来， 然后: 一就 :,when ; while,after,before,until,as soon as; the moment/ minute / second；immediately; directly; instantly,soon,lately; recently,since,from then on,later; afterwards,表示特定的顺序关系 首先,最主要的: 其次: 然后: 最后: 7. 换一种方法表述 换句话说:,above all; first of all; firstly,secondly,then;

13、 next,finally; in the end,in other words; that is to say;,8. 进行举例说明 例如，比如: 9. 用于陈述事实 实际上: 跟你说实话 : 10. 对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说:,for instance; for example; like; such as; namely,in fact; actually; in reality as a matter of fact,to tell you the truth honestly speaking,on the whole; in short; in brief; all

14、in all; in general; in a word,However/On the other hand,Practice,填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。 1._, 45% students hold the opposite view. 2. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can pay a visit to some places of interest. 3. I shared the cost of the gas with my friends. _, I saved $80. 4. Eating sugar

15、 is bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat.,In addition/Whats more/Besides,As a result,Whats worse,3. They are slow.,4. They are not connected to the Internet.,Step 5:用适当的过渡词联句成文,1. Recently, a survey about our computer room has been done in our class.,2. It is found that most computers in the co

16、mputer room are too old.,5. Some of the keyboards have lost letters.,6. The mouse and monitors dont work.,7. I suggest that we update computer equipment.,8.With the society developing, we become aware of the importance of knowing computer knowledge.,9.Only by mastering computer knowledge can we find

17、 a better job in the future.,Step6: 检查语言是否得体规范，标点是否正确,Proposal属于正式文体，因此具有以下特点：,Be polite Be very serious Use formal greetings and endings Use titles and family names Use Dear Sir/Madam if you dont know the persons name.,6. Do not be personal 7. Do not tell jokes or try to be funny 8. Do not use cont

18、ractions 9. Do not use slang,假设你是小明的好朋友李华，小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛，他对比赛非常担心，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。,写作内容 1. 说明回信的意图； 2. 向小明提出建议； 3. 预祝小明比赛成功。 Dear Xiaoming， . Yours， Li Hua,参考范文 Dear Xiaoming, You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions whic

19、h I hope can help you. In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror.,Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech, remember to keep

20、smile and even if you forget your words, dont be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it. Wish you success in the speech! Yours， Li Hua,精华点评,建议信的写作关键在于作者给出建议的语气委婉而中肯, 使对方容易接受。很多考生习惯使用祈使句或者You should的句型表示建议, 这样比较生硬，因此考生转换不同的句型使语言丰富, 如范文中使用了you should., you had better., reme

21、mber to do等句型。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候, 可以用简明扼要的句型, 如wish you good luck / wish you success / may you succeed, 使文章长短句结合得当。,Your show time,Step7:用漂亮的字体誊写,Step7:用漂亮的字体誊写,由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存, 为鼓励大家节能环保,你们学校将举办一次“低碳行动”的环保活动, 假设你是高三6班的一名学生, 将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活”的倡议,以下是倡议的内容： 1. 尽量绿色出行：采取步行或自行车方式; 2. 少喝一次瓶装水

22、；,3. 尽量不用一次性制品, 如一次性木筷子和塑 料袋； 4. 每周至少手洗衣服一次； 5. 每周少开手机、电视一天。 写作内容 1. 活动背景; 2. 倡议目的; 3. 倡议内容。,Hello everyone, I am Li Hua from Class Six, Senior Three. . I believe everyone, as a member of this global village, should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign!,参考范文 I am Li Hua from

23、 Class Six, Senior Three. We human beings are seriously threatened by the environmental pollution, such as waste gases, dirty water and white pollution. In order to encourage all of us to save energy and protect our environment, I am going to make the following suggestions. It is suggested that we s

24、hould walk or take bikes if we go out. To avoid white pollution， we can reduce the use of bottled water and unrecyclable items such as disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.,Whats more, if we can wash clothes by ourselves at least once a week as well as turn off our TVs and mobile phones for one day every week, it will be of great benefit to saving energy. I believe everyone, as a member of this global village, should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign! Li Hua,精华点评,本文的难度在于如何合并信息点, 考生需要用三个句子