HOWTOWRITEASUMMARY3结合高考题.ppt

1、HOW TO WRITE A SUMMARY,1概括的形式是：主题句+支撑句,The Best Gift Della and Jim broke away from their families to get married. Now they lived in a small attic(阁楼) of a cold and old building. They were now digesting the hardship of life. The only joy was their sweet love for each other. The handsome husband had t

2、o be burdened with a family though he was young. The beautiful wife took care of the old house with the few coins she saved. Christmas was coming. They were thinking of a good gift for each other. Della wore a waterfall-like(瀑布似的) black hair, but her comb was broken. Jim had a gold watch with an old

3、 chain, which was passed from his old grandfathers The big day finally came. On arriving home, Jim was surprised to find Dellas long hair cut short. But Della was also surprised to find Jims gold watch gone. She had sold her hair to buy a gold watch chain for him! He had sold his gold watch to buy a

4、n expensive comb for her! The gifts were now useless. But in fact they got the best gifts.,Speaking Mandarin Chinese In China, there are over 100 different dialects, which are so complicated that even people from neighboring villages may not understand each other. In the Information Age, such barrie

5、r of language must be removed by popularizing Mandarin Chinese(推广普通话) because it inversely (相反)affects the quality and efficiency of oral communication. Popularizing Mandarin Chinese is of great importance because it may push up our economic growth, accelerate the development of science and technolo

6、gy, and promote the unification(统一) of China. With a population of over 1.3 billion people it is not an easy task. But we must do it and do it effectively.,We have many thins to do in Mandarin Chinese Popularizing. First, we should carry out a mass education on the importance of speaking Mandarin Ch

7、inese to make everyone understand that it is his responsibility to do so. In the past, little progress has been made in isolated rural areas because the natives do not bother to take pains to learn to speak Mandarin Chinese. Next, speaking good Mandarin Chinese should be compulsory in classrooms, in

8、 public offices, in movies and TV programs in China. Finally, we should attach great importance to public education because China has large illiterate population. A poorly educated nation has no international reputation. Popularizing Mandarin Chinese is not only the first step in changing China into

9、 a better-educated nation.,There is a growing debate about the most effective way for students to study. Traditionally studying alone was thought to be the best way to ensure good exam results. When studying alone you can focus your mind better than when you are with others. You also have the freedo

10、m to choose what topic to study and when, as you dont need file agreement of others. Students that prefer to study alone often say that when they study with their classmates they waste a lot of time because the discussion is often about non-study topics such as television or holidays.,In the last fe

11、w years, however, more and more students have started studying in groups. There are several reasons many students prefer this method. First, they find that studying is more fun as they can share the experience with others rather than staying in their rooms. In groups, they can discuss the subject to

12、gether and when something is not understood they can ask each other questions. They can use the knowledge of their classmates to help improve their own knowledge. Finally by discussing the topic they, are able to both understand and remember it better.,读写任务之正文部分 整个写作框架： 标题（看题目是否要求） 第一段Summary (25-35

13、个词之间为最佳) 第二段：议论文：过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点-例证 记叙文：过渡词+与阅读文章主题相同但情节不同的故事 第三段：即总结句，套语配名言来点题，要前后呼应。,议论文的过渡语： 表示赞同 I agree with the statement that I fully support the statement above because I am very sure I quite agree with the writers idea. (2)表示不赞同 I partly agree with what the writer said. In some way, I agree

14、with but I am strong against the writers idea. (3)表达自己的观点 As far as I am concerned From my personal point of view According to my experience, I think that,记叙文的过渡句 This story reminds me of another story that happened to The story reminds me of a similar experience of I also went through such an exper

15、ience. A has a similar experience as B. 总结句开头语 In conclusion, In short, To make a long story short, In a word,John wanted to give up/quit smoking but faied because he lack determination/strong will. People like John who has no strong will will never succeed.,2009年高考题,写作内容 1以约30个词概括这段短文的内容； 2然后以约120个

16、词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论，内容包括： (1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照； (2)假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应； (3)你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。 写作要求 1在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。,Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(考拉)at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Austral

17、iaAll the koalas there are unhappy and complainingYou would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it offThats right-sleep it offThe average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that ma

18、kes it sleepy The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is that they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experienceWhatever department in the Auss

19、ie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandableHow would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you?,Jackie, a koala at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in so

20、uthern Australia got annoyed like other animals because the tourists keep disturbing them by hugging and photographing. The government will do something to protect the animals.,(1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照； (2)假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应； (3)你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。 Generally speaking, people like taking photos with an

21、imals because this activity can bring them great enjoyment and excitement. Lets just imagine if we were the animals stated in the above passage, we would perhaps be heartily sick of it. From the case of the koalas stated in the above passage, I think that we should take some measures to forbid such

22、behaviors even though people like them very much. To begin with, the behaviors mean disturbing their normal life. If this lasts long, the animals easily get ill. Then, it sometimes implies dangers especially taking photos with some ferocious beasts because any unexpected things can occur.So in my op

23、inion,people should keep off the encaged animals and give them a quiet living place!,Generally speaking, people like taking photos with animals because this activity can bring them great enjoyment and excitement. However, from the case of the koalas stated in the above passage, I think that we shoul

24、d take some measures to forbid such behaviors even though people like them very much. To begin with, the behaviors mean disturbing their normal life. If this lasts long, the animals easily get ill. Then, it sometimes implies dangers especially taking photos with some ferocious beasts because any une

25、xpected things can occur. Lets just imagine if we were in the same boat as the animals stated in the above passage, we would perhaps be heartily sick of it. Keep off the encaged animals and give them a quiet living place!,2008年 高考,大作文,2008,学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是

26、“Preparing Myself for College Life”，内容要点包括： 1、以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点； 2、然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括： （1）对中学生活的感受； （2）理想的大学生活； （3）中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。,Hi,IamMike.Ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege.Thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment.Iwenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedid

27、practicallyeverythingforme.ButatthecollegeIneedtoknowsomebasiclifeskills,suchasbalancingacheckbook,laundry,andthethingsyouhavetobeabletohandlethatIneverthoughtofinthehighschool!ItwasreallytoughformeatfirstandIgotbadlyhomesick.OncethatfirstsemesterwasoverandIgotusedtothecollegelife,Iloveditgoodfacili

28、ties,helpfulinstructors,andagoodlibrary.TheStudentsUnionorganizedvariouspartieseveryweek.Ialsogotocinemasandconcerts,andoftenspendSaturdaynightsinpubsandclubs.OnethingIthinkisimportantistogetyourselfactiveinthings.Iwasonthedanceteamincollegeandmetatonofpeoplethatwayitwassomucheasiertomakefriendswhen

29、youhadacommonground.,Mikes mother did almost everything for him when in high school, which brought him a hard time adjusting to the first-year college life. However, afterwards he got accustomed to it because of the academic atmosphere and colorful activities there.,（1）对中学生活的感受； As for me, what I do

30、 everyday is to study hard to enter a famous university, which is always the expectations of my parents and teachers. So traveling among classroom, dormitory and canteen is the routine work. Seldom do I have the time to do some activities. Anyway, unlike you, I have learned how to be independent in

31、a boarding school, which is beneficial to adjust to the college life.,（2）理想的大学生活； It seems to me the ideal college life is that I become matured both physically and mentally， and that I obtain qualified academic knowledge and get well prepared for society at the same time.,（3）中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。

32、 As we all know，college is wildly different from middle school. It connects not only adolescence to adulthood，but also the ivory tower to the real society. So an active part in activities，associations，as well as some romances are three keys to achieving my ideal college life.,summary Mikes mother di

33、d almost everything for him when in high school, which brought him a hard time adjusting to the first-year college life. However, afterwards he got accustomed to it because of the academic atmosphere and colorful activities there.,As for me, what I do everyday is to study hard to enter a famous univ

34、ersity, which is always the expectations of my parents and teachers. So traveling among classroom, dormitory and canteen is the routine work. Seldom do I have the time to do some activities. Anyway, unlike you, I have learned how to be independent in a boarding school, which is beneficial to adjust

35、to the college life. It seems to me the ideal college life is that I become matured both physically and mentally， and that I obtain qualified academic knowledge and get well prepared for society at the same time. As we all know，college is wildly different from middle school. It connects not only ado

36、lescence to adulthood，but also the ivory tower to the real society. So an active part in activities，associations，as well as some romances are three keys to achieving my ideal college life.,2010区统考题,John, a heavy smoker, once felt bad-tempered. His hands started shaking and he coughed a lot, so he tu

37、rned to his doctor for help. “Quit smoking.” The doctor advised him. Finding the advice sensible from several points, such as money, health and cleanliness, John decided to give up smoking. However, for several hours without a cigarette, John was nervous and had difficulty in concentrating, inabilit

38、y to sleep, which made him more hungry for a cigarette. He said to himself, “One more, and I will quit it tomorrow. Tomorrow will be a suitable day for me to break away the bad habit” Then he pick up a cigarette which made him relaxed. Again and again John made up his mind to do it “tomorrow”. Today

39、 John is still addicted to smoking.,Lots of people think that “tomorrow” is always the most convenient time to start breaking an old developed habit. But good intentions are there, and will-power is not. Consequently, these people will never achieve anything.,1. 以约30个词概括这篇短文的内容。 2. 然后以约120 个词就“Dont

40、Leave Todays Work for Tomorrow”的主题发表看法，包括： 你从John的事例中得到什么启示？ 作为高三学生要如何对待这个问题？ 写作要求 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子; 标题已定。,John wanted to give up/quit smoking but faied because he lack determination/strong will. People like John who has no strong will will never succeed.,Summary,The pa

41、ssage argues that people who lack determination leave todays work for tomorrow and they achieve little success by showing us the example that without strong will John failed to quit smoking.,Summary,In my opinion, we cant leave todays work for tomorrow, because for different days we have different t

42、hings to do. So if we fail to make up our mind to complete todays work and leave it for tomorrow, when well have some other work, well gradually pile up too many things and will never get them done. （Besides, only the persons without determination and will-power will find all kinds of excuses for th

43、e things they should have done today. ）That John found excuses for leaving quitting smoking for tomorrow and couldnt make it in the passage is a good lesson for us.） In addition, leaving todays work for tomorrow is a bad habit, （which will make for a persons laziness.）, 你从John的事例中得到什么启示？,Personally,

44、 as the final-year High School students, we have a lot of things to learn and different homework of different subjects to do every day. （Therefore, we cant afford to waste time. So the earlier we plan our time and get down to the work, the better results we will get. ）In a word, if we have strong in

45、tention and great determination and do everything as planed, we will be able to keep improving ourselves and achieve success., 作为高三学生要如何对待这个问题？,2010广州调研题大作文,读写任务 (共1小题,满分25分) 阅读下面的一封信，然后按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的回信。 Dear Abby, Last month my son was told that he no longer has to attend weekend classes at his

46、school. Since then he spends his weekends going out with his friends to play sports or watch movies. When he is at home all he seems to do is surf the Internet or play silly computer games. I really think he is just wasting his time having fun when he should be studying. I sometimes ask him if he ha

47、s homework or extra study to do, but he always says that he has already completed it all. This change makes me very worried. I feel that this free time is encouraging him to be lazy.,He isnt studying long enough and this will reduce his chances of getting into university. I also think it will cause

48、problems when he begins to work because he will not be able to concentrate well and will think more of having fun than his job. I have considered going to the school principal and asking him to change their decision but my son says if I do so his classmates will laugh at him. I dont want to embarras

49、s my child but I dont want him to fall behind either. Please help. Concerned Mum,写作内容 假设你是信中的Abby，准备给这位母亲回信。以下是回信的内容（信的开头和结尾已经为你写好）： 1以约30个词概括你所阅读的这封信的主要内容； 2以约120个词提出你的观点和建议，并包括如下要点： (1) 你读信后的感受； (2) 你对信中所述现象的个人观点； (3) 你对这位母亲的建议。,写作中出现的问题： 人称 假设你是信中的Abby 漏写要点1或2 举例？ 词数不足,Summary:以约30个词概括你所阅读的这封信的主要内容；,1. Whats the problem about the boy( fact)? 2. What does the mother worry about? ( wha