短文改错、写作与听力.ppt

1、Error correctingcomposition writingandlistening,Error correcting短文改错,此题要求改正所给短文中的错误,对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。,人称 时态 转折连词、介词、副词 冠词 主谓一致,(09 Na

2、tional Test Paper I) After five years away in my hometown, I find that _ 76. the neighborhood which I used to living in has changed _ 77. a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop _ 78. across the street from our middle school were gone._ 79.,from,are,live,old,There exist now a park that

3、 has a small river running _ 80. through. The factory at the corner of Friendship Street and _ 81. Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports_ 82. center has been built in their place. The market at the corner of _ 83. Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to_ 84. a sup

4、ermarket. Besides the bookstore next to our middle _ 85. school is still there.,exists,a,its,But,keys,76. from 77. live 78. old 79. are 80. exists,81. 82. a 83. its 84. been 85. But,人称 时态 转折连词 副词 介词 冠词 主谓一致,(09nation II),Hi Susan. Im sorry that I wasnt able to return to your 76 bike on time yesterda

5、y. I mean to give it 77 back to you before four in the afternoon，and I 78 was hold up on my way back. Just before I 79 turned corner of Park Street. I happened to 80,meant,held,the,but,see an accident. A little girl was hurt and her 81 mother needed help. So I helped them going to 82 the nearest hos

6、pital. I stayed here for one and 83 a half hour and made sure that the girl was all 84 right . When I got back, it were already 6 pm. 85 I hope you understand. Thank you! Li Ling,go,there,hours,was,Keys,76. to 83.here-there 77.meanmeant 84. hour-hours 78.and -but 85. were-was 79.hold-held 80. corner

7、the 81. 82.going-go,(09 Zhejiang) One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger is so though

8、tful. The man insisted, so I grateful,friends,beside,an,was,gratefully,accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect

9、 anything in return.,but,someone, to,expecting,Keys friendfriends besides-beside a-an 去掉in is -was grateful -gratefully and - but everyone -someone possible to expect - expecting,考点 1 动词 考点 2 名词、代词的数与格 考点 3 形容词和副词 考点 4 主谓语一致及其它前后一致 考点 5 连词与关系词 考点 6 句型变化（否定、疑问、倒装、省略、替代等） 考点 7 行文逻辑（人物性别、数量增减，时间顺序等前后一致

10、，并列、转折与因果） 考点 8 改错的注意事项,Composition writing书面表达,When/After I finish my homework every day, I always watch TV for half an hour.,I always watch TV for half an hour when I finish my homework every day. With my homework done, I will watch TV for half an hour. I always spend half an hour watching TV when

11、 I finish my homework every day .,be interested in对感兴趣 be fond of 喜欢,爱好,(09 National Test Paper I),第二节书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson写一留言条，内容包括： 1外出购物 2替房东还书 3Tracy来电话留言： 1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee) 见面取消 2)此事已告知Susan 3)尽快回电 注意：1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Mrs.

12、Wilson, Im going out shopping, and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about I oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet,想象力丰富，用了定语从句,I have gone shopping.,Tracy called to say that she couldnt mee

13、t,you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. She hoped you could

14、 arrange it another time.,Li Hua,(09 National Test Paper II),假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容： 简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺； 位置：天安门广场南面； 交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线； 特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。,参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street 当当车 trolley car 地铁 subway 注意： 词数100左右； 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 开头语已为你写好，请将完

15、整的回信书写在答题卡上。,It lies to the south of Tiananmen Square. To the south of Tiananmen Square lies Qianmen Street.,Dear Sarah， Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen street. Here is something about it. Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-metre street

16、, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tiananmen Square, it is very convenient to get there by bus. You may take buses No. 17,69 or 59. Subway Line 2,has a stop there, too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to

17、take you not only to the shops, but also to theatres and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. Im sure youll like it. Yours, Li Hua,useful structures and words for writing,对（于）很积极 be active in 合计为 add up to 承认错误 admit ones mistake 接受某人的建议 take / follow ones advice 就提出建议give

18、 advice on 建议某人做某事advise sb. to do sth. 后天the day after tomorrow 毕竟；终究after all 违心against ones will 在岁时at the age of 实现目标achieve ones aim 急于做某事be anxious to do sth. 分开住live apart 除了apart from,在空中；悬而未决in the air 在户外，在露天里in the open air 在机场at the airport 火警the fire alarm 满腔怒火be filled with anger 因某人之言

19、行而生气be angry at sth. 生某人的气be angry with sb. 通知make an announcement 相继地，按顺序地one after another 相互，彼此（三者或三者以上之间）one another 相互（指两者之间）each other 没有回答give no answer 为而担心be anxious about 因某事向某人认错或道歉make/offer an apology to sb for sth.,使用过渡性词语。这样使文章更加连贯、更具有逻辑性。 （1）表示增加的过渡词：also，and，and then，too，in addition

20、，furthermore，moreover，again，on top of that，another，first /second/third等。 （2）表示时间顺序的过渡词：now，then，before，after，afterwards，earlier，later，immediately，soon，next，in a few days，gradually，suddenly，finally等。,（3）表示空间顺序的过渡词：near（to），far（from），in front of，behind，beside，beyond，above，below，to the right /left，arou

21、nd，outside等。 （4）表示比较的过渡词：in the same way，just like，just as等。 （5）表示对照的过渡词：but，still，yet，however，on the other hand，on the contrary，in spite of，even though等。,（6）表示结 果 和 原 因 的 过 渡 词：because，since，so，as a result，therefore，then，thus，otherwise等。 （7）表示目的的过渡词：for this reason，for this purpose，so that等。 （8）表示强

22、调的过渡词：in fact，indeed，surely，necessarily，certainly，without any doubt，truly，to repeat，above all，most important等。 （9）表示解释说明的过渡词：for example，in fact，in this case，for actually等。 （10）表示总结的过渡词：finally，at last，in conclusion，as I have shown，in other words，in brief，in short，in general，on the whole，as has been

23、 stated等。,学会使用从句。 如：（1）使用定语从句 The girl is spoken highly of .Her composition was well written.（一般） The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.（高级） （2）使用状语从句 I wont believe what he says.（一般） No matter what he says，I wont believe.（高级）,If you come back before six oclock，you can go o

24、ut.（一般） You can go out on condition that（provided that）you come back before six oclock.（高级） If she doesnt agree，what shall we do？（一般） Supposing that she doesnt agree，what shall we do？（高级）,3.合理使用复杂的句型，这样可以给人地道、深刻的感觉。 如：When he spoke，he felt more and more excited.（一般） The more he spoke，the more excite

25、d he felt.（高级） Who will be on duty today.（一般） Whose turn is it to be on duty today？（高级） She cant correctly pronounce the word.（一般） She has trouble in pronouncing the word.（高级）,这是反映你知识贮存量的多寡，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。 例：As a result, the plan was a failure.（一般） The plan turned out to be a failure.（高级） She went

26、to Australia in order to study music.（一般） She went to Australia for the purpose of studying music.（高级）,Because the weather was good，our journey was comfortable.（一般） Thanks to the good weather，our journey was comfortable.（高级） When she heard he had died，she went pale with sorrow.（一般） At the news of hi

27、s death，she went pale with sorrow.（高级）,Appreciation of a good passage,Mary and her husband Dimitri lived in the tiny village of Perachora in southern Greece. One of Marys prize possessions was a little white lamb which her husband had given her. She kept it tied to a tree in a field during the day a

28、nd went to fetch it every evening. One evening, however, the lamb was missing. The rope had been cut, so it was obvious that the lamb had been stolen.,I was brought up in a small city of,When Dimitri came in from the fields, his wife told him what had happened. Dimitri at once set out to find the th

29、ief. He knew it would not prove difficult in such a small village. After telling several of his friends about the theft, Dimitri found out that his neighbour, Aleko, had suddenly acquired a new lamb. Dimitri immediately went to Alekos house and angrily accused him of stealing the lamb.,He told him h

30、e had better return it or he would call the police. Aleko denied taking it and led Dimitri into his backyard. It was true that he had just bought a lamb, he explained, but his lamb was black. Ashamed of having acted so rashly, Dimitri apologized to Aleko for having accused him. While they were talking it began to rain and Dimitri stayed in Alekos house until the rain stopped.,When h