非谓语动词在写作中的运用创新设计-陈山山.ppt

,Welcome to our class,Non- finite Verbs in Writing 非谓语动词在写作中的应用,1) It is a popular reality show (真人秀) in China. Watching this TV show, we had a lot of fun. 2) Taken by their Star-dads, five young children are on an overnight trip without the company of moms. 3) It has won high ratings (收视) since broadcast.,Sharing & Guessing,Do you know what it is?,Do you remember some unforgettable moments?,Competition,vs,Rules: 1. Girls VS. Boys 2. Race to be the first to answer the questions and try to help your team win the top honor,Task 1：Sentence Pattern Transformation (句型转换) Use non-finite to describe these pictures Oral Practice 掌握使用非谓语动词简化句子的用法,When they had a birthday party for Kimi, kids are happy and excited.,_, kids are happy and excited.,Having a birthday party for Kimi,Lin Zhiying broke the egg,_.,Lin Zhiying broke the egg and made Cindy cry.,making Cindy cry,_, Kimi asked Angela to help him take care of his sheep.,_, Kimi asked Angela to help him take care of his sheep.,Kimi hoped to play with Cindy, so Kimi asked Angela to help him take care of his sheep.,Hoping to play with Cindy,To play with Cindy,用非谓语结构美化句子,1.因为在这国家又没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。 Because she has no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job. 2.发现学生下午昏昏欲睡的样子，老师竭尽所能来激发(arouse)他们的兴趣。 The teacher found students sleepy in the afternoon and did everything he could to arouse their interest. 3.这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂 The book, which was written in simple English, is easy to understand. 4. 他们是来自于几个国家的游客。 They are visitors who come from several countries.,用非谓语结构美化句子,1.因为在这国家又没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。 Because she has no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job. 用非谓语结构 Having no friend in the country, she found it impossible to find a job.,2.发现学生下午昏昏欲睡的样子，老师竭尽所能来激发(arouse)他们的兴趣。 The teacher found students sleepy in the afternoon and did everything he could to arouse their interest. 用非谓语结构 Finding students sleepy in the afternoon, the teacher did everything he could to arouse their interest.,3.这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂 The book, which was written in simple English, is easy to understand. 用非谓语结构 The book , written in simple English, is easy to understand .,4. 他们是来自于几个国家的游客。 They are visitors who come from several countries. 用非谓语结构 They are visitors coming from several countries.,Task 2：Making sentences according to key words Use non-finite to describe these pictures 关键词造句 正确运用分词作状语,1) Seeing Xiao Huang taken away, Kimi felt heartbroken.,2) Taken away by the crew, the toy dog Xiao Huang was put into a bag.,1) Kimi, see Xiao Huang taken away, feel heart-broken,2) the toy dog Xiao Huang, take away, by the crew, put into a bag,1. doing 和done作时间状语,2) Given more chances, children can perform better.,1) Turning to the left, they will find the path to the farm.,1) they, turn to the left, find the path to the farm,2) children, give more chances, can perform better,2. doing 和done作条件状语,1) Being such a brave girl, Cindy is my favorite kid among them five.,1) Cindy, is such a brave girl, is my favorite kid among them five.,3. doing 和done作原因状语,2) Cindy, encourage, by her father, decide to slide on sand herself.,2) Encouraged by her father, Cindy decided to slide on sand herself.,1) Standing in front of the bed, Angela was having lunch.,1) Angela, stand in front of the bed, have lunch.,4. doing 和done 作伴随状语,2) Angelas father, followed by her daughter, came into her bedroom.,2) Followed by her daughter, Angelas father came into her bedroom.,1) Tian Tian showed his love for his father, sending him a flower.,2) Guided by his father, Tian Tian slided on sand.,1) Tian Tian, show his love for his dad, send him a flower,2) Tian Tian, guide, by his father, slide on sand,5. doing 和done作方式状语,1) Shi Tou broke his arm, causing him to use only one hand.,2) Shi Tou hurried to the kitchen, only to find there is no water for cooking.,1) Shi Tou, break his arm, cause him to use only one hand.,2) Shi Tou, hurry to the kitchen, only find there is no water for cooking.,6. 1)doing作结果状语，表自然而然的结果。,2). to do 作结果状语，表意料之外的结果。,To build up a better relationship with their kids, five star-daddies decided to join the TV show.,five star-daddies， build up a better relationship with their kids, decide to join the TV show,7. to do作目的状语 。,Task 3： The use of non-finite in writing task 高考链接 非谓语动词在写作中的应用 分析题目，写文章,(2012高考链接) 你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。 【写作内容】 请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物。 姓 名：Allan Stewart 国 籍：澳大利亚 出生日期：1915年3月7日 世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位*时年龄最大 学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。 第一个学位：1936年获得 第二个学位：医学博士* 第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。 第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。 *硕士学位：masters degree; *博士doctor,Born on March7,1915, Allan Stewart, a great man became the oldest man when he gained his masters degree in 2006, which was a new world record.,(2013高考链接) 你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇时事快讯。 写作内容 请根据以下信息，写一篇关于移民火星的快讯。 志愿者的选拔 到2015年，在全球选出约30名去火星的志愿者 志愿者的条件 至少18岁 做好不回地球的准备 愿与他人保持良好的关系 专家观点 火星条件太艰苦 面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧 志愿者观点 厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活 如果成功，就是人类英雄 火星：the Mars,The volunteers insist that they have got tired of the life on the earth, so greatly being eager to experience the unknown, mysterious life on the Mars,(2014高考链接) 你接受了一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。 写作内容,人物：英国人查理德.阿维斯（Richard Avis） 出生日期：1974年12月1日 事件：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日出生的人 目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义 相关信息： 借助当地媒体寻找 迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家 职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等 计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日出生的人 打算根据此经历写一本书,So far, he has found 32 people, including 17 men and 15 women from 13 countries.,Writing task: 爸爸去哪儿（Dad，Where Are We Going)这个电视节目广受欢迎。这个节目走红有以下几个原因：1. 因为五个孩子很可爱，所以招人喜爱。2.为了让孩子成长、发展，节目组为他们提供了许多探索的机会 。3.通过沟通，父亲和孩子们建立了亲密关系，值得大家学习。4. 与唱歌类的选秀比赛相比，这种亲情类节目反而更受关注和喜爱。,写作要求：时间3-5分钟，非谓语doing ， done， to do 至少各一个。,要点1. 因为五个孩子很可爱，所以他们招人喜爱。,_, the five kids are admired by many people.,要点 2.为了让孩子成长、发展，节目组为他们提供了许多探索的机会 。,_, the show provided them many chances to explore.,Being lovely,To let the kids grow and develop,要点3. 父亲和孩子们通过沟通，建立了亲密关系，值得大家学习。,_, fathers and kids set up a close relationship.,_like singing competitions, this kind of show about family is more popular.,Communicating with each other,Compared with other shows,要点4. 与唱歌类的选秀比赛相比，这种亲情类节目反而更受关注和喜爱。,Homework: Write a composition after class and share it with others next time. 请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次