2019中考英语二轮复习作文金题（2）.docx

2019中考英语作文金题（2）A（2019中考选练）书面表达某校进行了“你最喜欢的课堂学习方法”的调查。结果表明，小组合作学习的方式最受同学们的欢迎。请你写一篇90词左右的有关小组合作学习的短文。文中不得出现真实的人名与校名，内容须包含以下三个方面：1小组合作学习的好处；2让你感受深刻的一次小组合作学习的经历；3小组合作学习的方法给你带来的收获。Studying in groups is becoming more and more popular.It has many advantages.For example，we can not only save time but also encourage each other when we study in groups.I still remember when I was in Grade 8，my physics was very poor.I had a really hard time with it.Once in class，I studied with some classmates together.I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics.I didnt feel stressed out at all.At last，I finished my homework by myself for the first time.How excited I was!Because of studying in groups，I am not worried about physics anymore.I get more confidence with my classmates help.It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways.B上周日在秦淮河便发生了张明救落水小男孩的事情，请根据以下四幅图所描述的事情经过，为校刊的英语园地写一篇题为“A Brave Young Man”的英文稿件。注意：1、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2、语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3、词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。A Brave Young Man It was a nice day last Sunday. 参考范文One possible version:A Brave Young ManIt was a nice day last Sunday. Zhang Ming was fishing by the Qinhuai River when a little boy went to play nearby. Suddenly, Zhang Ming heard someone shouting for help. He looked around and found that the little boy was falling into the water. It was very dangerous. Zhang Ming jumped into the river immediately. He tried his best to pull the boy out of the river. At that time other people came to offer help. Finally, the boy was saved and he was very grateful. People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful. We should learn from him.C假如你校英语报七月份将开展校园之星（StaroftheCampus）评选活动，请你根据图中的信息，向校英语报写一篇短文，介绍你心目中校园之星康康的情况。提示词：helpwithsparetimegetalongwithdohousework要求：1文章内容符合题意，可参考所给提示词； 2文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名； 3词数100左右（文章首段已给出，不计人总词数）Ourschoolwillselect（挑选）StaroftheCampus（校园）inJulyIthinkKangkangisthemostsuitableone_【参考范文】At school，KangKang studies very hard at his lessons，so he is always one of the top students in our classHe also loves sportsHe often plays football at weekends with his friendsWhats more，he cares for other students，so he always helps them with their lessons after classAt home，he likes helping his mother do housework in his spare timeBesides，KangKang gets along well with his neighborsThis is why KangKang is so popularIn short，KangKang is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in needHe sets a good example for us【解析】Ourschoolwillselect（挑选）StaroftheCampus（校园）inJulyIthinkKangkangisthemostsuitableone At school，KangKang studies very hard at his lessons，so he is always one of the top students in our classHe also loves sportsHe often plays football at weekends with his friendsWhats more，he cares for other students，so he always helps them with their lessons after class【高分句型】（在学校的表现） At home，he likes helping his mother do housework in his spare timeBesides，KangKang gets along well with his neighborsThis is why KangKang is so popular【高分句型】（在家的表现） In short，KangKang is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in need【高分句型】He sets a good example for us这是一篇图画作文内容是介绍你心目中校园之星康康的情况时态主要为一般现在时人称主要为第三人称 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 描述图画；在学校：康康学习努力，成绩好，爱足球，关心同学帮助同学 在家：帮助妈妈做家务，邻里关系好 常用到的重点短语： study hard 努力学习 whats more 再者 care for 照顾 help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事 get along well with sb 与某人相处的好 【高分句型】 1Whats more，hecares for other students，so he alwayshelps them with their lessons after class whats more 再者 care for 照顾 help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事 2This is why KangKang is so popular why引导的从句和is构成系表结构 3In short，KangKang is an excellent student and heis always ready to help othersin need in short 简言之，做插入语 be ready to do sth 乐意做某事 in need 在危急中，做后置定语，修饰others这是一篇看图作文看图作文要注意一下几点（1）弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事，注意图画中的细节（2）结合提示词，明确考查意图所给提示词可帮助理解画面内容，也是组成句子的必用材料有时还会给出起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，作适当展开，联想，就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯（4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等D假如你叫张强，在昨天下午的篮球比赛中不小心伤了左臂，医生建议你在家休息两天, 因此你要向班主任赵老师请假。请根据以上信息写一则40词左右的请假条。Asking for Leave May 10thDear Miss Zhao,Im sorry to tell you that I cant go to school today.Thank you!Your student,Zhang Qiang2 _ g! g0 S7 c W/ S5 b【参考范文】One possible version:Asking for LeaveMay 10th Dear Miss Zhao,Im sorry to tell you that I cant go to school today. I hurt my left arm (1分) in the basketball match (1分) yesterday afternoon (1分).The doctor told me to have a rest at home for two days (1分), so I will/ have to ask for two days / two-day leave (1分). I hope Ill get well and return to school soon.Thank you!Your student,Zhang QiangE学会善待他人，用理性、善意、爱心和责任去面对生活的现实;善待他人，才能融入人群，获得友谊、信任、谅解和支持, 拥有充满快乐的感觉，踏入充满机遇的境界，走向充满希望的未来。请以“Be kind to others”为题，写一篇80个词左右的英语短文。温馨提示: 1.短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。2.这些单词也许对你有帮助：Learn , respect尊重 others, Communicate with each other; feel happy, understand, share.Be kind to others_ 参考范文:Be kind to othersAs we know, students should learn how to be kind to othersBut in what ways? First of all, we should respect othersEverybody has their own way to do things, so we should understand each otherBesides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadnessWhats more, we should offer necessary help to those who are in troubleThen we will feel very happy.In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest wayOnly in these ways can we win others respect and friendship. My dear friends, try to be a kind person, the world will be nicer and nicer.评分原则：1 本题总分为15分，其中内容和语言占13分，词数占1分，书写占1分。按五个档次给分。2 评分时，先根据短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。不少于70个单词，不多于90个单词，加1分。书写清晰、规范，加1分。3 各档次的给分范围和要求：第五档：（14-15分）能扣紧主题，语言基本无误；行文连贯；表达清楚。第四档：（11-13分）能扣紧主题，语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯；表达基本清楚。第三档：（8-10分） 语言有一些错误或较多错误；但仍能达意；行文不够连贯。第二档：（4-7分）离题，只写出一、两个句子；语言错误多或很多，影响意思表达或只有个别的句子可懂。第一档：（0-3分）词不达意，不能写出一个完整的句子；或只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词；说明：若写出自己和老师的真实姓名或学校的真实名称酌情扣分。F（日常活动）根据要求完成短文写作。为了使生活更美好，社会需要正能量(positive energy)。生活中，我们需要他人的帮助，也要学会帮助他人。请你在网上给What Would You Do本期节目留言，内容包括：1.你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法；2.说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事；3.呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop._【参考范文】书面表达In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until her dad arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine.”G近来，中小学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注。其中垃圾食品、电子游戏等是影响健康的重要因素，请以“Keep Healthy”为题谈谈你的看法。要求：1. 列举中小学生面临的健康问题。2. 谈谈怎样才能保持健康。3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数。4. 语法正确，文理通顺、流畅，并适当发挥。提示词：junk food，be bad for，computer games，suggestions，stay away fromKeep HealthyToday，some students have several health problems. _【参考范文】One possible version:Keep HealthyToday，some students have several health problems. One of them is junk food. Its bad for their health. Although their parents dont want them to eat too much junk food，they still