2018年高考英语二轮复习专题09短文改错测含解析.docx

专题9 短文改错 班级 姓名 学号 分数 （测试时间：45分钟）1. 【辽宁省六校协作体2018届高三上学期期中】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit. There are different kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema. But I think wed better to have more outdoor activities. As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired. But it is a good idea to play ball games, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic. Our brains also need changes to make itself smart and active. In a word, exercise is good for health.【答案】1. parts-part 2. help-helps 3. activity-activities 4. cinema前加the 5. to have-have 6. longer-long 7. getting-get 8. But-So 9. runnings-running 10. itself-themselves52. help改为helps 考查主谓一致。本句的主语是单个的动名词短语taking parts in recreation activities，且表达一件事情，所以谓语动词使用单数形式。53. activity改为activities 考查名词单复数。本句中activity行动是可数名词，前面有形容词短语“various kinds of多种多样的”修饰，说明该名词应该使用复数形式。54. to后面加the 考查固定短语。短语go to the cinema去看电影。其中的the不能省略。55. 删除better后面的to 考查固定短语。短语had better do sth最好坐某事；had better的后面直接加动词原形，不需要to。56. longer改为long 考查形容词。句意：作为学生，我们通常在教室里坐的时间太长了。根据句意并没有比较的意思，所以使用原级long即可。57. getting改为get 考查句子结构。本句转换主语是our eyes and brains，get在句中做谓语动词，而getting属于非谓语动词，不能单独在句中作谓语。58. But改为So 考查连词。句意：作为学生我们在教室里坐的时间太久了，结果我们的眼睛和大难会累，所以，打球是一个好主意。根据句意可知上下文之间是因果关系，所以使用so而不是but。59. runnings改为running 考查固定结构。短语do some running跑步，类似的结构还有do some shopping等。60. itself改为themselves 考查代词。本句的主语是our brains，所以使用反身代词themselves作为动词make宾语。句意：我们的大脑也需要改变让他们自己聪明积极。2. 【安徽省皖南八校2018届高三上学期第一次联考】51. 假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Be an excellent student with all-round development, Li Hua has been honored as Star of all the subjects but often ranks among the top three in the class. After class, she is active in the playground, music club and some community. The sport he likes most is playing the basketball. He also took great delight in Chinese opera as well singing pop songs. Besides, he takes an actively part in all sorts of social practices. In a word, Li Hua is an outstanding student, which has set a good example to us.【答案】3.she 改为he考查代词。句意：课下，他在操场、音乐俱乐部和一些社区很活跃。根据内容可知李华是个男的，故要用he。4community改为communities考查名词的数。some community一些社区，所以community,要用复数，故把community改为communities。5.去掉the考查固定搭配。句意：他最喜欢的运动是打篮球。三餐和球类前不加冠词，打篮球，为play basketball，为固定搭配，故去掉the。6.took改为takes.考查谓语动词的时态。句意：他也很喜欢中国歌剧， 喜欢唱流行歌曲。本文主要讲述李华的现在的一些事情，可知用一般现在时，故要把took改为takes。7.在as well后添加as.考查固定搭配。句意; as well，也，和，如果后面有宾语，要加as。在文中 as well 后有宾语 sing pop songw，故要加as，因此在as well后添加as。8.actively改为active考查形容词作定语。句意：他积极参加各种社会实践活动。Actively用于修饰名词part，副词不能修饰名词，故把actively改为active。9.which改为who 考查定语从句的关系词。句意：李华是个杰出的学生，给我们树立了好榜样。student,是先行词，在从句中作主语，指人，不能用which只能用who，故把which改为who。 10.to 改为for考查固定搭配。句意：李华是个杰出的学生，给我们树立了好榜样。set a good example for，为树立榜样，为固定搭配，故要把to 改为for.3. 【山西省运城市2018届高三上学期期中】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。On September 16, our headteacher organized an activity to climb Mount Nan to encourage participation in outdoor exercise. The majority of my classmates joined the activity. Early in the morning, having assembled outside the school gate, we head straight to the destination. We set out for the top in high spirits when the moment we arrived at the foot of the mountain. In a course of the climb, we cooperated with each other to pass the rocky and steep areas. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, which we enjoyed the bright sunshine and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, which we enjoyed the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was beautiful. Bathed in the warm sunshine, we entertained us with stories, songs, dance and games. This event was extreme beneficial, for not only did we talk a break from our heavy school workload, but we also learned how to cooperate. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!【答案】5.此处the summit做先行词，在后面的非限制性定语从句中做地点状语，故把which-where。6.句意：从城市顶部观看，城市是美丽的。The city和view之间是被动关系，所以此处用过去分词做时间状语，故把Viewing-Viewed。7.句意：我们通过讲故事、唱歌、跳舞和做游戏使我们娱乐。entertain oneself使某人自己娱乐，故把us-ourselves。8.句意：我们通过讲故事、唱歌、跳舞和做游戏使我们娱乐。根据句意可知把dance-dances。9.副词修饰形容词，故把extreme- extremely。10.此处suggest建议，后面的宾语从句用虚拟语气，（should）+动词原形，故把are-be。4. 【河南省许昌平顶山（即许昌市一模）2018届高三联考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Ms Jenkins,Im Li Hua, a Senior 3 student from No. 5 Secondary School. I would like to offer my apology for unable to teach you to make Chinese knot this Saturday.The reason is that I have got a cold, but the doctor suggests that I must lie in bed for one week or so. But dont worry. I had asked a friend of mine, Han Meimei, to go here instead. He is very experienced in making Chinese knots. She will drop on at your apartment at 9:00 this Saturday morning.Please allowing me to say sorry again. I have the confidence what you can learn how to make Chinese knots. Wish you a good time!Yours,Li Hua【答案】1.第一处：unable前加being2.第二处：knot改为knots3.第三处：but改为and或so4.第四处：删除must或者must改为should5.第五处：had改为have6.第六处：here改为there7.第七处：He改为She8.第八处：on改为in9.第九处：allowing改为allow10.第十处：what改为that考查固定用法。Chinese knots中国结，是固定用法，所以knot改为knots。考查连词。原因是我感冒了，所以医生建议我卧床休息一周。表示因果关系，所以but改为and或so。考查虚拟语气。that I lie in bed for one week or so. 是一个宾语从句。在表示建议、要求、命令之后的宾语从句，需要使用should + 动词原形，should可以被省略的虚拟语气，所以删除must或者must改为should.考查时态。表示到现在为止已经发生或完成的动作，用现在完成时，所以had改为have。考查语义理解。韩美美会去那里。表示“那里”，所以here改为there。考查代词。韩美美是女孩儿，所以He改为She。考查固定用法。drop in at到访某地, 是固定用法，所以on改为in。考查固定句型。祈使句用动词原形，所以allowing改为allow。考查同位语从句。that you can learn how to make Chinese knots. 是一个同位语从句，引导词在从句中不作任何成分，也没有什么实际意义，所以用that。5. 【“江淮十校”2018届高三联考】51. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Next week our school is holding a Reading Week,when has been organised by the Youth League and the Students Union.The event aims all to help create a good learning environment and to encourage students to read good books.There will have two main activities.The one will involve some book stores come to our school to give students the opportunity to buy books.The second are a recitation contes