高考英语写作书面表达提升

写作提升（一）-记叙文文档由本人精心搜集和整理，喜欢大家用得上，非常感谢你的浏览与下载。凡本厂职工应热爱电厂、热爱岗位、热爱本职工作，发扬“团结务实、争创一流，立足岗位，爱厂敬业，尽职尽责，不断提高工作质量和工作效率，圆满完成各项生产和工作任务，为华能的建设和发展作出贡献2019整理的各行业企管，经济，房产，策划，方案等工作范文，希望你用得上，不足之处请指正记叙文为高考书面表达重点考查体裁之一，记叙文以记人、叙事、描写景物为主要内容，通常用第一人称和第三人称，其时态也常用过去时态。叙述时应注意目的明确，重点突出以及事情的完整性与顺序性。 【典题示例】【2011曲阜模拟】你今年暑假到一家肯德基（KFC）麦当劳（McDonalds）快餐店做保洁员 （cleaner）工作。你每天工作七个小时，为期3周。这项工作辛苦且枯燥，你感到非常疲劳，几乎半途而弃。每天你都要起早贪黑的工作。在新学期开始之前，你终于完成了这项工作，并由此认识到了劳动的意义。你认为这是一次成功的体验。注意：1必须使用第一人称； 2词数120左右。【审题谋篇】1.本篇为记叙文，为常考体裁，目的为通过在快餐店打工的经历说明劳动的意义。2.人称：第一人称3.时态和语态：打工经历-一般过去时态 体会感想-一般现在时态4.写作要点：说明打工的缘由。阐述打工经历与感受。体会打工的收获，即劳动的意义。【常用模板】.格式模板：开头：During the summer holidays, I thought 正文：The job was and I had to everyday.结尾：I understand ., and its really.句式模板：1.陈述计划、打算：Want/intend/prefer to do sth.Rather thando/Instead of doing,prefer to do.2.体现工作艰辛：find the job hard/boring/endlessIts so tiring that【尝试运用】1.我想我应该做一些有意义的事情，而不是呆在家里无所事事。I thought Ishould do something meaningful. and I dont want to stay at home.（合并为一个句子）I thought I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home.2.这份工作辛苦、枯燥，这使我很疲惫，几乎中途放弃。一般表达方法：I felt very tired and almost gave it up halfway, because the job was hard and boring.高级表达方式：The job was hard and boring, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway.3.我明白了劳动的意义，认为这是一次成功经历。I understand what labour means, and think it really a successful experience.【佳文点睛】（连接词挖空）During the summer holidays this year, I thought I should do something meaningful instead of stay at home, so I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant/an McDonalds and worked there as a cleaner. I worked seven hours a day for three weeks.The job was hard and boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. After all, I stuck to it with determination.Every day I studied for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally, I finished the job before the new term began. Now, I understand what labour means, I think it is really a successful experience.【跟踪演练】王太太决定带儿子去北京旅游，儿子听到后很是高兴，可是当他们准备出发时，突然发现一个问题，聪明的儿子想出一个主意请根据这六幅图，用英语概述这一经过。注意：1. 文章要包括六幅图中所有要点。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3. 词数120左右。【参考范文】Mrs. Wang decided to make a trip to Beijing. When she told her son about her decision, he was so overjoyed that he jumped up and down. They began to pack their luggage. When the day came, the son became worried, for nobody would take care of his flower. It would die if it was not watered. Suddenly a good idea came to his mind. “Mum,” he said to his mother, “We can use a piece of cloth to take care of the flower.” He showed his mother what he meant by putting one end of the cloth into the basin, full of water, and other end into the flowerpot. Five days later, when they came back from Beijing, the flower was still alive and even started to blossom.写作提升（二）-议论文议论文是高考书面表达常考体裁，文章以议论为主，通过摆事实、讲道理的方法，对客观事物进行评述或议论，以阐明作者的观点与主张，说服别人。议论文在内容上必须有论点、论据和论证三要素，在结构上要有引子、正文和结论三部分。【典题示例】针对城市街道上出现的越来越多的宠物，21st Century Teens向你约稿，请你谈谈你校学生对“城市内是否可以饲养宠物”的看法。经过详细的问卷调查，你发现同学们对此态度泾渭分明：支持饲养宠物者认为饲养宠物可以陪伴孤寡、空巢老人，可以等等；反对饲养动物者认为饲养宠物花费不菲， 。等等。根据以上提示的部分问卷信息，请你适当增加信息内容，撰文介绍同学们的看法，并对此作出简要评论。注意：1词数：120个词左右。开头以给出，不计词数。 2内容丰富，行文连贯。Recently we have carried out a detailed survey of whether people should keep pets in cities,_【审题谋篇】1.本篇为议论文，为常见文体，目的为阐述学生们的两种观点，并对此作出简要评论。2.人称：第三人称与第一人称3.时态和语态：一般现在时态4.写作要点：问卷调查内容简介支持方的观点及理由反对方的观点及理由个人评论及观点体现。【常用模板】.格式模板：开头：Recently we have carried out a survey of 正文：The opinions among the students differ. Some thinkbecause .the others think because结尾:I ike. I dont think it is .句式模板1.作关于-的调查a survey about/of be did carry out a survey about/of2.持完全不同的观点hold entirely different ideas.ideas completely/entirely differ among3.做某事是个好/坏主意：Its a good/bad idea to do sth.Doing sth./To do sth. is a good/bad idea【尝试运用】1.我们做了一项关于“城市内是否可以饲养宠物”的调查，学生们看法泾渭分明。We carried out a survey. The survey was about whether people should keep pets in cities. We students hold entirely different ideas.(将三句话合并为一句)We carried out a survey of whether people should keep pets in cities, which shows we students hold entirely different ideas.2.此外，与动物和睦相处可以使我们的生活充满乐趣。Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting.3.更糟糕的是，宠物发出太多噪音，使四邻不安，甚至有时会袭击人。Whats worse, pets may make too much noise and it disturbs the neighbors and even attacks people sometimes.（用分词形式合并句子)Whats worse, pets may make too much noise disturbing the neighbors and even attacks people sometimes.【佳文点睛】（连接词挖空）Recently we have carried out a detailed survey of whether people should keep pets in cities，which shows we students hold entirely different ideas. Some students think its a good idea to keep pets because unaccompanied old people who live alone at home can get some comfort from pets. Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting. On the contrary, the other students are against the idea to raise pets in cities. In their opinion, raising pets costs a large amount of money and, if too many people keep pets in cities, it is bad for the environment. What is worse, pets may make too much noise disturbing the neighbors and even attack people sometimes.I like animals and I find it amazing to bond with such pets as dogs. I dont think it is bad to keep pets at home even if we are in cities, but we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment or causing other troubles.【跟踪演练】2011吉林实验中学模拟近年来某报社对人们日常信息的来源进行了调查，请根据下面表格所示的调查结果给CCTV9英语新闻栏目组写一封信。72%，看电视1提供给人们更加生动的画面；2新闻报道直接、简洁。12%，看报纸1新闻报道比电视更具深度；2看报纸不受时间限制；3看报纸要动脑筋，有易于智力开发。注意：1描述出不同的看法和观点； 2词数：120左右；3参考词汇：调查survey；智力intelligence；生动的vivid Dear Editor:We did a survey on how people get news. For most of us today, television is our main source of news. According to a survey on the ways of getting news, nearly 72% of people watch TV, and only 12% read newspapers.Most people agree that TV presents more vivid pictures to the TV reviewers. Besides, TV reports are very direct and brief. However, some people think the newspaper is a btter source of news in many ways. First of all, newspapers can devote to a news item as much as space as necessary, and they include many details. Also, there is no time limit for reading a newspaper. In addition, readers use their brains to follow and get a news report, which helps improve their intelligence.写作提升（三）- 说明文说明文在高考书面表达中经常考查，它是介绍、说明客观事物的一种文体。说明文的最大特点就是用事实说话，通过介绍，使读者获取相关知识。写说明文时应注意：目的明确、材料准确详实、语言简练，介绍时可按一定时间、空间、结构或逻辑的顺序来写。【典题示例】下面是当当网上小说心灵鸡汤的广告介绍。假如你是李华，请用英语给你的笔友王海写一封信，建议他上网购买此书。信的开头和结尾已经给出。不计入总词数。 【写作内容】1. 书籍的历史和内容； 2. 书籍的影响； 3. 适合人群； 4. 节约费用； 5. 购买方法。Dear Wang Hai, How are you doing?_Yours，Li Hua【审题谋篇】1.本篇为说明文，为生活中常见文体，目的为向笔友推荐书籍，并建议购买方式。2.人称：第三人称为主3.时态和语态：书籍介绍-一般现在时态为主（与书籍历史有关的用一般过去时态）购买方式-一般现在时态4.写作要点：推荐本书的缘由书籍介绍推荐购买方式【常用模板】.格式模板开头：Recently an American bestseller is.It is really.正文：The book, with 101 stories.Later it has been transtated结尾：To get more information, you canBest wishes.句式模板1.表示“的目的”With/For the purpose of The purpose is that 2.对某人适合/是某人喜欢的sth. be suitable/intended for sb.sb. would prefer sthsb. find sth suitable.3.与相比Compared with/to,In contrast to , 【尝试运用】1.令我兴奋的是，这本书的确有益。To my excitement, it was really beneficial.2.这本书最早出版于1993年，内有101篇能叩开人的心扉，使人精神振作的故事，也是一本能激励所有年龄层次读者的畅销书。一般表达：The book was first published in 1993. It contains 101 stories to open the heart and rekindle the spirite. The purpose of writing this book is to inspire readers of all ages.高级表达： The book, with 101 stories to open the heart and rekindle the spirit, was first published in 1993, for the purpose of inspiring readers of all ages.3.与原始价格64元相比，网上购买可节省你9.6元Online shopping can save you 9.6 yuan if you compare it with the original price of 64 yuan.（用分词形式改写句子）Online shopping can save you 9.6 yuan compared with the original price of 64 yuan.【佳文点睛】（连接词挖空）Dear Wang Hai,How are you doing? Recently an American bestseller is popular among the students in our schoolI read it， and to my excitement，it was really beneficialI would like to recommend(推荐)it to youThe book, with 101 stories to open the heart and rekindle the spirit, was first published in 1993, for the purpose of inspiring readers of all ages. Later, it has been translated into a variety of foreign languages. This edition, in English, is suitable for English learners. Besides, online shopping can save you 9.60 yuan compared with the original price of 64 yuan. You can get one in one or two days after paying online. To get more information，you can visit the website Get one and enjoy it!Best wishes Yours，Li Hua【跟踪演练】请你为21st Century写一篇报道，介绍我校为高三学生创立的“心灵城堡（Soul Castle）”专栏（column），并谈谈自己的感想。内容要点包括：开设目的：缓解压力，确保健康专栏优势：专业指导专栏内容：建议，心声你的感想注意：1词数120左右2开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）3请在答题卡上作答。Our school has set up a column called “ Soul Castle ” for senior 3 students . _【参考范文】Our school has set up a column called “ Soul Castle ” for senior 3 students. It is aimed at relieving pressure , and ensure the health of students. The column has the unique advantage that the experts in psychology can give us the expertise and guidance. It covers the thoughts and feelings of students and the professional suggestions .From my point of view , not only does our school attach importance to our study but also put our mental health at the top of the list.It also provides a platform to communicate with our teachers and parents . Moreover , we can get help and guidance from professionals to solve our mental problems . With its help , we can take the College Entrance Examination with confidence .写作提升（四）-应用文（书信、电子邮件）应用文是每年高考考查频率最高的体裁之一，其中以书信、电子邮件最为常见。其形式有商业信函、求职信、推荐信、感谢信、请柬等。写作时应注意；格式明确，语言简练地道，语气要因人、因事而异。【典题示例】【2011山东卷】假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：1询问Tom的生活和学习情况；2谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；3告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意：1词数：120150； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【审题谋篇】1.本篇为书信，为常用文体，目的是学习困难求助。2.人称：第一人称3.时态和语态：一般现在时态4.写作要点询问Tom的生活和学习情况说明自己的困难自己的赛后打算【常用模板】.格式模板开头：Its a month since. How is everything going?正文：Im going to take part in.However, I still have some troubles in结束语：Yours sincerely.句式模板1.陈述困难：have difficulty/trouble/a hard time (in) doing.find sth difficult.2.寻求帮助be anxious to get help from sb.give sb. a hand with sth./in doing sth.Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask for your help.3.表达“感激”appreciate it ifbe grateful for 【尝试运用】1.对于那段与你在一起的难忘经历，我的确高兴。Im really happy to spend such an unforgettable experience with you here.2. 然而，我在搜集有用信息方面依然有困难However, I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials.（同义句转换）=However, I still find collecting useful materials difficult.3.如果你能帮我一把，我将感激不尽。一般表达：If you can help me , Ill be very grateful.高级表达：I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.4.我也希望我的努力会得到回报I also hope that the great effort Im making will pay off.【佳文点睛】（连接词挖空）Dear Tom, Its a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything going with you? I am really happy to spend such an unforgettable experience with you here. I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July this summer. I think the chance is of great importance for me. To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for it. However, I still have some troubles in collecting useful materials. Meanwhile I find it hard to use English properly. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. And, I also hope that the great effort I am making will pay off. You know, I have been missing you since you left, so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English Contest. I cant wait to see you again!. Yours Sincerely Li Hua【跟踪演练】【2011甘肃陇东模拟】李华是高二的学生， 写信问你如何把握高三这最关键的一年。请你结合自己的经历，从时间安排、饮食、睡眠、锻炼等方面，回一封120左右词的信。 【参考范文】Truly, the year of senior three is quite critical. As far as I know, time is always not enough for us. So first of all, you need to arrange your time well. Youd better make a rather long-term study plan, say, a one-month plan with more efforts to take up your weak subjects. And a short-term plan is equally necessary, if not more important. You have to make sure what you need to do each day, each class and even each minute.At the same time, its quite essential to keep healthy. So take exercise for at least one hour and sleep for no less than seven hours a day. And dont forget to eat well. More vegetable and fruit is always right for you. Hope you will enjoy the last year of senior high. Yours ever Brother写作提升（五）-应用文（通知、留言条、招聘启事）通知、留言条等也是高考书面表达考查重点之一，他们也是书信的一种形式，不过格式简单，内容简短，写作时应注意：内容简明扼要，文字简洁明了，讲清谁写的，写给谁，什么事（时间、地点、事件等）以及什么时候写的等。【典题示例】今年是5.12 地震两周年，你班将举办纪念活动。作为班长，请你草拟一份有关活动的口头通知。注意：1. 内容包括表格内的全部要点； 2词数在120左右; 3开头已为你写好。参考词汇：commemorative: 纪念的 compatriot: 同胞 活动目的1. 缅怀遇难同胞；2. 感谢全国人民的无私帮助；3. 展示灾后重建取得的巨大成就。活动内容(任选一项)1. 写一篇感恩作文；2. 绘一幅灾区新貌图；3. 设计一堂感恩的主题班会。活动时间七月十五日至七月二十日参加人员全班同学May I have your attention please?As we know, the year of 2009 is the anniversary of the 5.12 earthquake. 【审题谋篇】1.本篇为通知，为生活中常见文体，目的为通知同学了解有关纪念活动的事宜2.人称：第二人称为主3.时态：一般现在时态和一般将来时态4.写作要点：活动目的同学们在活动中要做的事情点明活动时间及参加人员【常用模板】.格式模板开头：May I have your attention please?As we know,正文：Our class will hold. You can choose to do 结束语：Hoping all the classmates. Thats all. Thank you!.句式模板1.陈述“活动目的”These activities aim at /are aimed to We hold these activities in order to/in order that/for the purpose ofWe are intended to by holding these activities2.擅长做某事be good at(doing) sthdo well in (doing) sth.have a gift for sth.3.积极参入活动take an active part in these activitiesbe active in these activities【尝试运用】1.我们也要展示灾后重建取得的重大成就Well display the great achievement. It was made in post-disaster reconstruction as well.（用过去分词合并句子）Well display the great achievement made in post-disaster reconstruction as well.2.你可以写篇文章，展示你对全国帮助的感激。You may write an essay to show how you appreciate the help from all over china.3.你可以设计一堂感恩的主题班会You may design a theme class to show our gratitude to those peoples help.（用定语从句改写句子）You may design a class whose theme is to show our gratitude to those who have helped us.【佳文点睛】（连接词挖空）May I have your attention please?As we know, the year of 2009 is the anniversary of the 5.12 earthquake. Our class will hold commemorative activities from July 15 to July 20. These activities aim at cherishing the memories of the victim compatriots. Besides, we want to take this opportunity to thank the whole nation for their selfless help and display the great achievements made in post-disaster reconstruction as well. Hopefully you can choose to do any of the three following activities. You may write an essay to show how you appreciate the help from all over China. If you are good at drawing, you may choose to draw a picture of the disaster area taking on a new look. Whats more, you may design a class meeting, whose theme is to show our gratitude to those who have helped us. Hoping all the classmates will be active in these activities.Thats all. Thank you.!【跟踪演练】假设你是李华，星期天你要和你的同班同学李明一起去敬老院参加义务劳动，你去找他，但他没有在家，你给他留言说明要求，内容如下：（1）9：30在学校门口集合；（2）带劳动工具（洗衣粉、理发工具、除草工具等）；（3）自带午饭，骑自行车前往。注意：（1）词数120左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文 连贯。Dear Li Ming，_ Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Li Ming,This Sunday well go to the nursing home and do some voluntary labor. You were out, when I dropped in on you. Therefore, I had to leave a message to you. According to what monitor said, well meet at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow morning and start out together by bike. So you should take your bike and dont forget to take some washing powder, barber tools and w eeding tools so that we can help them with washing clothes, cutting their hair and get rid of some weed in the garden. At last, you should remember to take some food for lunch because well stay the re for chatting with them at noon. If you come back, youll phone me at once. Li Hua写作提升（六）-应用文（演讲稿、发言稿）演讲或发言稿是一种进行宣传和思想交流的重要方式，在高考书面表达中都有考查，写该类文体时应注意：明确演讲对象，观点鲜明，立场明确，不可含糊其辞、模棱两可，同时语言要符合口语的表达习惯，句子不宜过长。【典题示例】【2010湖南卷】假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为期两个月的活动。现在，你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请写一篇英语发言稿，主要内容如下：1简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动；2谈谈你们开展该活动的收获。 注意： 1词数不少于120个；2不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【审题谋篇】1.本篇为发言稿，为应用问题，目的为介绍俱乐部活动，体会其中收获。2.人称：第一人称3.时态和语态：一般过去时态4.写作要点：对听众（同学们）的礼