正反观点基础写作.ppt

高考基础写作指导, 正反观点对比,2012高考英语基础写作复习系列,Have a try !,Step 1 审题 Step 2 理清要点， 整理成5个句子 Step 3 句子翻译 Step 4 润色 添加适当过渡词语 Step 5 检查,The steps of Basic Writing,Step 1 审题,体裁: 时态: 人称: 文章结构:,议论文,现在时,第一人称,正反观点对比类的文章,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,写作必备句型 I I. 提出问题 句型：1. _ 2._ 3._ 4._,There is a discussion that,Sb. had a discussion about . among,Sb. made a survey about . among,Our class had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood.,Sb. discussed .,写作必备句型 I II. 正面观点 句型：1. _ _ 2. _ 3._ 4._,Some people are in favor of /agree with the idea of doing X.,Some people hold the opinion that,Some people believe that ,Some people are for the idea that ,写作必备句型 I III. 反面观点 句型：1. _ _ 2._ _ 3. _ 4._,On the contrary，there are some people in favor of the idea that,However, other people object that,But others hold the opposite opinions that ,But others are against the idea that ,写作必备句型 I IV. 个人观点 句型：1. _ 2._ 3._ 4. _ 5. _ 6._ 7. .,In my view / opinion, As for me, As far as I am concerned,. I agree with Personally, I strongly believe that For my part, I think ,Writing Practice,Step 4 润色,并列用语 _ 对比用语 _ _ _ 递进用语 _ _ _,as well as, not onlybut (also), including,on one hand ,on the other hand, on the contrary/contrary to ., though, for one thing ;for another,even, besides, whats more, moreover, furthermore; in addition, to make matters worse, worse still,文章结构:,正反观点对比类的文章,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ） There is a widespread concern over the issue that 作 文 题 目 . Some people think that 观 点 一 because in the first place, 原 因 一；furthermore, 原 因 二. However, other people hold the idea that 观 点 二. In their point of view, on the one hand, 原 因 一; on the other hand, 原 因 二. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that 观点一或二,because 原 因.,对比观点型 The topic of （主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. Some people say A because （支持A的理由一）. What is more, (理由二) and (理由三). While others think that B in the following three reasons：firstly, (支持B的理由一)；secondly (besides), （理由二）；thirdly (finally), (理由三). From my point of view, I think（我的观点） and the reason is that (原因).,【议论文观点对比型作文写作模板推荐】,Topic Recently weve had a discussion about _.Our opinions are divided on this topic. Most of the students are in favour of it .Here are the reasons. First, _. Second, _. Finally However, the others are strongly against it.Their reasons are as follows. In the first place, _. Whats more, _. In addition/Besides, _. Personally speaking, /As far as I am concerned _. Only in this way, 展望前景,标题 导入话题 观点有分歧 正方观点 列举23个赞成的理由 反方观点 列举23个反对的理由 个人观点,【范文赏析】,假如你是某中学学生李华。最近，你班同学正在参加21世纪英文报“大家谈”栏目的一个讨论。本次话题为：“父母有没有必要陪读？” 请你根据下表所列情况给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论的情况。 70%的同学认为：1父母不应该陪读2父母陪读让我们养成依赖的习惯，不利于我们将来自控能力的培养，不利于我们培养良好的学习习惯。3父母陪读影响了他们的工作、学习和休息. 30%的同学认为： 1父母应该陪读2父母陪读能使我们腾出更多的时间专心学习.3父母陪读能帮助我们确立学习目标，督促我们完成学习任务，鼓励我们独立解决困难，培养我们养成良好的学习习惯。 注意：1信的形式已经为你写好。2词数100左右。 3参考词汇：陪读 accompany sb. Studying at school 督促 urge,Dear editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether our parents should accompany us studying at school. Our opinions are divided on this topic. Most of the students (about 70%) are strongly against it. First, it makes us fall into the habit of dependence so that we wont form the good habit of studying. Whats more, it will be difficult for us to control ourselves in the future if our parents accompany us study at school. In addition, it affects our parents work studies and rest. However, about 30% of my classmates think it necessary for our parents to accompany us studying at school. Accompanying us studying school allow us to have more time to spare for our studies. Besides, our parents can help us set up our aim, urge us to finish our task, encourage us to overcome difficulties and get us into the good habit of studying. As far as Im concerned, we should study on our own and only in this way can we learn more and improve ourselves. Yours,truely Li Hua,【写作训练】,目前，洛阳的街头出现了越来越多的猫与狗，对此“中学生英语报”组织了一场讨论：城市内是否可以饲养宠物。假设你叫李华，你班的讨论结果如下。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点和建议。 60%支持饲养宠物, 陪伴孤寡老人,人与动物和谐相处，增添生活情趣 40%反对饲养宠物,造成环境污染,吵闹声，甚至伤人 你的观点: 注意： 1词数100左右。2可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯。 3开头语已为你写好。 Dear editor, Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in our city.,One possible version:,Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities. Some students think its a good idea to keep pets because old people who live alone at home can get some comfort from pets Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting. On the contrary, the other students are against the idea. In their opinion, if too many people keep pets at home