《女性参军范文》PPT课件.ppt

IELTS Writing 雅思写作高分教程 -范文精讲,新浪微博：史凯齐,,2,三大论证法,三大论证方法,三大方法解析,论点：必须与原题有直接的因果关系。 Explanation(解释和说明)： 解释和说明论点的意思或原因。 Extension (延伸论点并阐述影响)： 将论点或解释论点的句子扩展一下，阐述它的影响。 Example（举例）： 举例说明，有助于更加形象地叙述事情。,Task2 议论文,WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.,5,背景句： Today，in any truly enlightened countries, women play essential roles in the political, economic and cultural arenas. Yet whether ladies should be entitled to serve in the military has sparked spirited debate. 候选方案： 1.enlightened 开化的；文明的 (同义词civilized) 2.be entitled to do sth 被赋予做某事的权利 3.改写版：With the increasing significance of women in the arenas of politics, economy and culture，whether ladies should be entitled to serve in the military has sparked spirited debate. 4.Today，in any truly enlightened countries, women play essential roles in terms of the political, economic and cultural arenas.,范文第一段,Task2 议论文(2012年9月22日),WRITING TASK 2 In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than before. However, they are less happier. What do you think are the reasons? Are there any solutions to this?,7,背景（考场原创）： It seems that youngsters, especially those who live in developed countries, have enjoyed their happiness in terms of materials, security and health.,Task2 议论文(2012年9月22日),WRITING TASK 2 In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than before. However, they are less happier. What do you think are the reasons? Are there any solutions to this?,8,（考场原创）： From my viewpoint, the reasons are associated with and ,观点： Some assert that the status quo should be changed and ladies should be allowed to join the armed forces. Speaking for myself, I fundamentally agree with their assertion for three reasons. 解析： status quo 现状 (拉丁文) 候选方案： Speaking for myself, I fundamentally agree that ladies should be allowed to join the armed forces.,范文第一段,总论点： On the one hand, it is obvious that ladies joining the military may bring numerous benefits. 候选方案： On the one hand, it is obvious that numerous benefits may be brought, provided that ladies could join the military. 解析： provided that 如果,范文第二段,分论点一： 论点：In the first place, history has shown that women were fully capable of performing well in military. 论据：For instance, two world-renowned military figures-Joan of Arc and Mulan really put their male counterparts to shame with their outstanding performance in the army. 解析： 1. be fully capable of doing sth 完全有能力做某事 2. world-renowned 世界著名的 3. counterpart 同仁；极相似的人或物 4.put to shame 使羞愧 5.论据简写版： For instance， Mulan ，a household name in China，had joined the army for her father and eventually won the war.,范文第二段,分论点二： 论点：In the second place, from an enlightened standpoint, female patriots should be granted the right to go to the front line when their motherland is involved in a war. 论据：Considering the sweeping progress in gender equality, there is really no sense in denying them the right to stand up for their home country when war breaks out. 解析： 1. from an enlightened standpoint 从一个的角度 2. be granted the right to do sth 被赋予做某事的权力 3. be involved in 卷入某事；涉及到某事 3. gender equality 性别平等 4. there is really no sense in denying sth没有理由否认某事 论据简写版：It is widely accepted that women are born with equal rights just like men, including the priority to participate in military activities.,范文第二段,分论点三： Lastly, in the information era, computerization and digitalization in the military have made it much easier for women soldiers to operate modern weapons. 解析： era 时代 epoch；time；age computerization and digitalization计算机化和数字化 构词法：modernmodernization urbanurbanization civilcivilization Lastly, in the information era, there is less need for physical strength in the troops. Since computerization and digitalization in the military have made it much easier for women soldiers to operate modern weapons, ladies could directly participate in warfare.,范文第二段,反方总论点： On the other hand, allowing ladies to join the army may carry certain risks. 候选方案： 1.On the other hand, certain risks may emerge with the presence of females in the army. 2.Admittedly, with the presence of females in the army, a series of resulting risks would be inevitable and undeniable.,范文第三段,反方分论点一： 论点：The most serious one is that this may further drive up the already high crime rate in some armies. 论据：The recent series of sex scandals in the US navy serve as convincing proof of this risk. 解析： 1.drive up the crime rate 拉升犯罪率 2.sex scandals 性丑闻 3.serve as 充当的角色 4.convincing proof 令人信服的证据 5. A serve as convincing proof of B A可以很好地证明B,范文第三段,反方分论点二： 论点：For another, the health hazards that serving in the military may pose to women are very real. 论据： For example, research has revealed that on average American women soldiers in Iraq are suffering from more serious and complicated physical and mental illness than the American servicemen in the same region. 解析： hazards 危险；风险 pose a threat to 给带来威胁 pose health hazards to 给带来健康风险 research has revealed 研究表明 论据简写版： Compared with males， women