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1、 （湖南真题） 请从下列人物中选择你最喜欢的一位，用英语写一篇120120词左 右的短文。要求根据所给信息作适当发挥，且需包括以下三部分内 容： 1. 1. 对该人物的简单介绍； 2. 2. 喜欢该人物的理由； 3. 3. 从该人物身上得到的启示 范文背诵 Thomas Edison Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating. In fact, he was a man full of

2、 imagination. I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1,000 inventions. In his life time, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname “the Wizard of Melo Park”. He was also so diligent that he worked day and nigh

3、t. And this explained why he had so many great inventions. What impresses me most is his famous saying, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.” Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking person. From him, I realize the secret to success is not

4、 when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life. 句型背诵 He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating. Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration. What impresses me most is his famous saying. I realize the secret to success

5、is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life. (2010(2010全国) 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友PeterPeter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校 现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括： 1. 1. 教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等 2. 2. 授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础） 3. 3. 工作量： 每周1212学时，任选三门课 担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisoradvisor） 注意：1. 1. 词数10

6、0100左右； 2. 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 范文背诵 Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain T

7、oday and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our studentsEnglish club or our schools English newspaper. Please let me know if you ar

8、e interested and if you have any other questions. Id be more than happy to help. Best, Li Hua 句型背诵 The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students English club or our school

9、s English newspaper. 假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写一封信，告 诉他你第一天上课的情况，主要内容如下： 1. 1. 描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情； 2. 2. 介绍你处理该事的方式； 3. 3. 谈谈你的理想。 注意：1. 1. 词数不少于120120个； 2. 2. 可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯。 (2009(2009湖南） 范文背诵 Dear Zhang Hua, How is everything going on？ Its been several months since I began to teach here. And I can

10、 still remember my first day in class. You see，as it was my first class，I couldnt help feeling a bit nervous the moment I stepped into the classroom. After I declared the beginning of class，all the eyes were fixed on me，and words failed me for a moment. What should I say? Luckily I remembered what y

11、ou had told me about what to do in the beginning of the first class. So I took a deep breath and collected my thoughts，and then I began to make a brief introduction of myself to the class. And I told my class that I wanted to be friends with them and help them make great progress in their study. At

12、my words，the students applauded and I felt less nervous. Now I am getting on well with the students. They say they like my teaching and want to make friends with me. You can imagine how happy I am at hearing the words. I feel honored to be a teacher and I hope to make progress together with my stude

13、nts. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li Hong 句型背诵 You see，as it was my first class，I couldnt help feeling a bit nervous the moment I stepped into the classroom. Luckily I remembered what you had told me what to do in the beginning of the first class. You can imagine how happy I am at hea

14、ring the words. 假定你是李华, ,在一个英文网络论坛上, ,你看到一个名叫Grown-upGrown-up的 中学生发帖（postpost）寻求帮助, , 请根据帖子内容、写作要点和要求 回贴。 （20092009陕西） 写作要点： 1. 告诉Grown-up要理解母亲； 2. 给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议。 要求:1. 短文词数不少于80； 2. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯； 3. 书写须清晰、工整。 范文背诵 Hi， Grown-up, As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The pro

15、blem of you are facing is common among our teenagers. However, it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings. Here are a few suggestions. First, its advisable to talk more with your mother. Heart-to-heart talks help you understand each other better. They are also opportunities to l

16、et her know your ideas and attitudes towards many things. Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “Grown-up”. Its even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking. 句型背诵 .it should be wise not to do any

17、thing that may hurt her feelings. Its even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking. 假如你是一名高二学生，经常为看电视的事跟妈妈意见分歧， 今天你跟妈妈达成一致意见。就你和妈妈对看电视问题的不同看法 写一篇120120词左右的英语短文。 范文背诵 I am a Senior 2 student,I often quarrel with my mother whether I can watch TV after sch

18、ool. My mother holds the view that students in Senior 2, heavily burdened with study, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV. It seems to her that once I am allowed to do that I will not be able to control myself and forget all about myself. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV

19、 too often. But I cant really accept her ideas. I think it is really relaxing to watch TV after a days hard work. Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can also broaden my horizon. In addition, we can be informed of what is happening at home and abroad and keep up with the times. Now we at las

20、t have reached an agreement that I can only watch TV on weekends. And programs should be limited to news and those of entertainment, sports and science. 句型背诵 My mother holds the view that students in Senior 2, heavily burdened with study, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV. I think it is rea

21、lly relaxing to watch TV after a days hard work. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often. Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can also broaden my horizon (mind). 如今，“低碳”生活方式正受到越来越多人的追捧。某英文报 社正在开展“低碳生活，从我做起”的征文活动，请给其投稿。内 容要点如下： 1. 好处：减少二氧化碳排放，有利于缓解全球变暖。 2. 具体建议：随手关掉不用

22、的电器，如：电灯、电视和电脑；步行 或骑自行车出行；如果路程远，乘坐公交车； 购物时尽量使用环保 布袋，不用一次性塑料袋。 3. 大家都行动起来，我们就能与环境和谐共处。 注意：1. 词数120左右。 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：二氧化碳排放carbon dioxide emissions 电器：electrical appliances 一次性塑料袋 disposable plastic bags I believe that as long as each of us makes a small change to cut carbon emissions, we ca

23、n make a big difference and develop a harmonious relationship with the environment. 句型背诵 Nowadays, it is becoming common to lead a low-carbon lifestyle. By living a low-carbon life, we can cut carbon dioxide emissions, which may contribute to stopping the temperature from rising. I believe that as l

24、ong as each of us makes a small change to cut carbon emissions, we can make a big difference and develop a harmonious relationship with the environment. 范文背诵 Nowadays, it is becoming common to lead a low-carbon lifestyle. We know that carbon dioxide is the major greenhouse gas that causes global war

25、ming. By living a low-carbon life, we can cut carbon dioxide emissions, which may contribute to stopping the temperature from rising. There are many ways of leading an environmentally friendly life. For instance, we can turn off electrical appliances like lights, the television and the computer when

26、 we are not using them. Cars not only cause air pollution, but also waste energy. So we could walk or ride a bicycle for short trips. If we need to travel a long distance, we can take public transportation. It is also wise to use reusable cloth bags instead of disposable plastic bags when we shop. 以

27、下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟报道的主要内容。 内容包括：1. 1. 全国公共场所禁烟；2. 2. 实施时间：20112011年1 1月1 1日起 ；3. 3. 目标：所有室内公共场所无烟；4. 4. 措施：张贴禁烟标志。 相关数据：1. 1. 吸烟人数：近期统计约3.53.5亿； 2. 2. 分布：男性7575；女性：2525； 3. 3. 受二手烟影响人数：约5.45.4亿； 4. 4. 因二手烟死亡人数：超过1010万/ /年。 参考词汇：二手烟second-hand smokesecond-hand smoke 请根据以上内容给学校墙报写一篇英语通讯稿，要点包括： 1. 1. 禁烟决定的

28、内容及实施的时间和范围; ; 2. 2. 目标和措施; ; 3. 3. 关于禁烟方面的相关数据。 注意：1. 1. 词数100100左右； 2. 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 范文背诵 Our country begins to carry out the policy that prevents smoking in public buildings since January 1st, 2011. The main aim is to make every public rooms have no smoke by posting the sign of preventing sm

29、oking. There are 350 million people smoking recently, in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent. Because of these smokers, about 540 million non-smokers are influenced. More than 100 thousand people die per year because of the second-hand smoke. 句型背诵 Our country begins to carr

30、y out the policy that prevents smoking in public buildings. The main aim is to make every public rooms have no smoke by. More than 100 thousand people die per year because of the second-hand smoke. 假设你是李华，你的朋友Jack在海地留学，你从电视上了解到 ，2010年10月25日他所在的海地首都太子港发生霍乱（cholera）,你 很为他担心。请根据所给出的建议，给Jack写封信，叮嘱他要保护 好

31、自己。 (改编) 建议：1. 尽量呆在家里, 少去人多的地方； 2. 勤洗手, 讲卫生，要喝干净水； 3. 多开窗, 保持空气流通； 4. 多吃洗干净的水果蔬菜。 注意:1. 词数120左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 范文背诵 Dear Jack, Im worried about you because the cholera broke out in the capital city of Haiti, Taizi port. I hope you can follow my advice on how to protect yourself from cholera. Her

32、e are a few suggestions. First, to stay away from this disease, you had better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Then, wash your hands more often to keep them clean and drink clean water. Besides, it is necessary to open the window to have more fresh

33、air in the room. And you should eat more fruits and vegetables which are washed cleanly to keep yourself fit and strong. So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and youll be OK. Yours, Li Hua 句型背诵 Im worried about you because the cholera broke out in the capit

34、al city of Haiti, Taizi port. .you had better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. .it is necessary to open the window to have more fresh air in the room. 你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情 况：（20092009广东） 时间: : 上周末 对象: : 眼科医生（eye-doctoreye-doctor）王教授 主题: : 我国中小

35、学生近视（short-sightednessshort-sightedness）问题 基本信息：（1 1）发生率：略高于5050 （2 2）人数：世界第一 专家解读：（1 1）原因: : 很复杂 （2 2）治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 （3 3）建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 （4 4）特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关 【写作内容】 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容: : 1. 采访的时间、对象和主题； 2. 中小学生近视的发生率及人数； 3. 专家解读。 【写作要求】 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 范文背诵 Last weekend, I had an interview w

36、ith eye-doctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle students short-sightedness. It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the No. 1 in the world, are short-sighted. Professor Wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and there is still no cure for sho

37、rt- sightedness. He suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises. Whats more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen. 1. 采访的时间、对象和主题； 2. 中小学生近视的发生率及人数； 3. 专家解读。 【写作要求】 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 范文背诵 Last

38、 weekend, I had an interview with eye-doctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle students short-sightedness. It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the No. 1 in the world, are short-sighted. Professor Wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and

39、there is still no cure for short- sightedness. He suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises. Whats more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen. 句型背诵 It is said that slightly more than 50% s

40、tudents, which ranks the No. 1 in the world, are Short-sighted. He suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises. Whats more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen. 假设你是李华，于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班

41、（ flight number BA793）回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱（suitcase） 。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。 （2010重庆） 信件要点包括：陈述写信原因 简要描述该行李 说明其重要性 期待回复并表示感谢 注意：词数100左右。 范文背诵 Dear Sir or Madam, Im Li Hua. I took the flight BA793 on June 3, 2010. But when I came to my home, I found I lost a suitcase. I am writing to you to request you t

42、o help me find it back. My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip. There is a lable on the handle with my name and address on it. It is really important for me, because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card, passport and so on. Besides, it is what my father sent to me on

43、my birthday. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply. Yours truly, LiHua 句型背诵 I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back. It is really important for me, because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card, passport a

44、nd so on. Besides, it is what my father sent to me on my birthday. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply. 请根据下面的提示，以“南极洲Antarctica”为题写一篇短文( 词数：100词左右)。 1. 南极洲在地球的最南端(extreme south)； 2. 它的面积大约14万平方公里； 3. 它是世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆盖； 4. 它的自然资源有企鹅 (penguin)、鲸(wh

45、ale)、铁、煤等； 5. 目前还只有一些科学工作者在那里。 范文背诵 Antarctica Antarctica, which is the coldest continent in the world, lies in the extreme south of the earth. It has an area of about 140，000 square kilometers. It is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year longBut it is a very rich continent It has many

46、well-known animals such as penguins, whales and it is also rich in mineral resources including iron, coal and so onUp to now only some visiting scientists live thereMaybe one day lots of households will live there. 句型背诵 Antarctica, which is the coldest continent in the world, lies in the extreme sou

47、th of the earth. It is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year long. Up to now only some visiting scientists live there 请根据下列提示，以“Making friends”为题，用英语写一篇100 词左右的短文。 1. 每个人都需要朋友，友谊非常重要; 2. 交朋友首先要对别人友善；要使他人感到亲切; 3. 从内心真正关心别人; 4. 如果有分歧，不争吵，和朋友商量解决。 范文背诵 Making friends Everyone needs friends

48、 and friendship is very important in our life. To make friends, above all, you must be friendly to others. Everyone likes friends who are kind and warm-hearted. At the same time, you should think more of others than of yourself. Remember never judge a person by his appearance and clothes. When you d

49、ont agree with someone, dont quarrel, but discuss with him or her, try to find a good solution to the problem. Finally we should help those who are in trouble. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 句型背诵 Everyone needs friends and friendship is very important in our life. At the same time, you should

50、think more of others than of yourself. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助 祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写 一篇英文日记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。 （2010北京） 注意：1.日记的开头已为你写好。 2. 词数不少于60。 范文背诵 Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, togeth

51、er with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the

52、 things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey. 句型背诵 Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Bei

53、daihe. I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey. 根据以下所给的资料，以“Social Customs between Americans and Chinese”为题,用英语写一篇短文概括所给的信 息。 世界上不同的地方社会习俗也不同。比如，在

54、美国两个人 第一次见面就直呼对方名字，即使是年轻人对年长者也是这样 ，而在中国这样被认为是很不礼貌的。 另外一个不同是交谈时可以谈些什么话题。比如，询问别 人穿的大衣的价格，中国人觉得这没什么，而美国人则认为这 是很不礼貌的。 注意：词数100左右。 范文背诵 Social Customs between Americans and Chinese Social customs differ in different parts of the world. For example, the Americans call each other by their names when two pe

55、ople first met, and so does the young to the old. In china, it will be regarded as quite impolite to do so. Another difference is about what can be talked about in conversation. Chinese think nothing of being asked how much his coat costs while Americans think it impolite to ask such a question. 句型背

56、诵 Social customs differ in different parts of the world. In china, it will be regarded as quite impolite to do so. Another difference is about what can be talked about in conversation. 假设你班就科学家是否应该克隆人进行了讨论，20的 同学赞成，认为其一：有利于促进该科学领域取得突破； 其二：克隆智力过人的伟大科学家，人类将拥有更多有非 凡贡献的人。80的同学反对，因为这样违背社会道义， 克隆人没有父母，无法像正

57、常人一样生活，试谈谈你的看 法。词数120字左右。 范文背诵 Did you ever imagine having a child that is the exact replica（复 制品） of you? Did you ever imagine of having the cure for heart disease or cancer? Well, these fantasies are not far from reach. The way we could reach these fantasies is through a process called cloning. Cl

58、oning is the replication of an exact genetic copy of an organism by use of a somatic tissue (or cell) from the donor organism. Cloning can be used in humans, human organs, or even animals. There are many advantages and disadvantages of cloning. A benefit of cloning is cloning human organs or body pa

59、rts. If a person has a dysfunctional（变形） liver or heart then they could get it cloned and get a brand new one. These are some of the benefits of cloning. Even though there are a lot of benefits to cloning, there are also a lot of disadvantages of cloning. One disadvantage is whether cloning is ethic

60、al. Cloning will bring up a great controversy on whether cloning is the “right” thing to do or not. This controversy is currently going on right now and will be even a greater controversy if the government allows cloning. Many people think that nature should just take its course. Other people think