高二英语上学期读后续写训练（二）课件

高二英语读后续写训练（二）Ithadbeenafewmonthssinceourbelovedboxer(拳师狗)

Bamahadpassedaway.He'dlivedagood,longlife.AlanandIdidn'thavechildren.Ourboxerwasourbaby.AfterBama'sdeath,wecouldn'tbringourselvestogothroughhistoystodecidewhattokeep,soweputthemallinthebasement(地下室).ItoldmyselfI'ddoitwhenIwasready.Apparently,lstillwasn't.NowIsatinmyyard(院子)andwept.Friendsandfamilyhadsuggestedwegetanotherdog,butAlanandIdismissed(不考虑)theidea.Wecouldn'tgothroughthatkindofheartbreakagain.Igazedoutovertheyard.Acrossthestreetwasadog.Aboxer.Iwipedthetearsfrommyeyes,heartbeatingwildly.Washerealorjustwishfulimagination?Itookasecondlook.Theboxerwasstillthere.Welockedeyes.Heranacrossthe

street,straighttowardme.

Iofferedmyhand.Hesniffed(嗅)iteagerly,bushytailwagging(摇摆).

Helicked(舔)me.ThisdogwasyoungerthanBama,smaller.Hewaswell-fedandclean.HeworeacollarbuthadnoID.Iknewhemustbelongtosomeoneintheneighborhood.ButI'dneverseenanotherboxeraround.Thedoglaydownbesidemyfeet,histonguelolling(下垂)

inadoggiesmile.Hedidn'tseemlost.Justasifheweredroppingbyforavisit.“Alan!”Icalled.“Youhavetocomeseethis!”Alanjoinedme,andwesattogethersilentlyforamoment.Thentheboxergotupandwalkedoff.Inthefollowingdays,he'dsometimesappearinthebackyardwhenAlanandIwereoutside.Othertimes,he'dwaitforusonthefrontporch(门廊).Witheachvisit,Icouldfeeltheacheinmyheartlessen.Seeinghimwashelpingmeworkthroughmydeepsorrow.Atoneworkday,ayoungmanandanolderwomanI'dneverseenbeforecamein.Itookdowntheman'saddresstocompletesomepaperworkandnoticedhelivedupthestreetfromme.HisnamewasTanner.Thewomanwithhimwashisgrandmother.HeandhisfamilyhadrecentlymovedfromGeorgia.1.圈出人物，理顺他们的关系。2.划出发生的事情，理顺故事情节。一、解读语篇：（在空白处填上合适的内容）

1.AlanandIdidn’thavechildren,andwekeptaboxerBamaasourbabyforalongtime.Butafewmonthsago,Bama___________________(去世了).2.WeweresosadthatwehadtoputBama’stoysinthe_________(地下室).Werefusedtogetanotherdogbecausewecouldn’tgothroughthekindof__________(心碎)again.3.Onedaya_________________(更小更年轻的)boxerranacrossthestreet,straighttowardmewhileIwasgazingoutovertheyard.Theboxerwaswell-fedandclean,wearingacollarwithoutID.Iknewhemust__________________(属于)someoneinthe_____________(附近地区).Inthefollowingdays,theboxeroftencametovisitus,whichlessenouracheintheheartforlosingBama.4.Oneday,ImetayoungmanwhosenamewasTannerwhenIwas_________(在工作的时候).Ihadneverseenhimbefore.ThenItookdownhisaddressandnoticedhe__________________________.(住在离我家不远的街上).Heandhisfamilyhadrecently_______________(从..搬来)Georgia.passedawaybasementheartbreakyoungerandsmallerbelongtoneighborhoodworkinglivedupthestreetfrommemovedfrom三、Words,phrasesandsentencespaysb.regularvisits1.定期拜访某人_____________________2.看起来既惊讶又尴尬_____________________3.正在建一个栅栏（fence）_____________________4.总是跑出去______________5.给某人造成麻烦_____________________6.给某人带来安慰_____________________7.成为好朋友_____________________8.把我们所有人聚在一起_____________________9.积灰_____________________10.拜访_____________________looksurprisedandembarrassedbebuildingafencekeepgettingoutcausesb.troublebringcomforttosb.becomegoodfriendsbringallofustogethergatherdustcomeovertovisit11.事实上他总是定期来拜访我。（havebeendoing）__________________________________________________________12.当他听到我说什么的那一刻，Tanner看起来既惊讶又尬尴。（宾语从句，themoment）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13.我告诉他关于我的Bama以及他的狗给我们带来的安慰。（tellsbabout,定语从句）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hehasactuallybeenpayingmeregularvisits.

Themomentheheard

whatIsaid,Tannerlookedsurprisedandembarrassed.ItoldhimaboutmyBamaandthecomforthisdoghadbroughttous.14.这只狗把我们所有人聚到了一起。__________________________________________________________15.现在,这只狗来拜访我们的时候我就拿出玩具给他玩。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thedogbroughtallofustogether.Now,Ikeepthetoysoutforthedogtoenjoywheneverhecomesovertovisit.二、合理构思情节第一段:“Doyouhappentohaveadog?”Iasked.1.HowwouldTanneranswerme?2.WasTannersurprisedatmyquestion?HowwouldIexplainit?

3.WhatmightTannersaytomakemesay“Notatall!Actually,hewasabighelp”?根据材料中暗示Tanner应该是狗的主人，所以回答应该是yes.我会给Tanner讲述这只新狗狗来我家的事情。Tanner以为狗狗的频繁拜访给我带来了麻烦二、合理构思情节第一段：“Doyouhappentohaveadog?"Iasked.

“Wedo,"hesaid“Isheaboxer?”“Yes,mydogAxleisaboxer."“Ihavemethim.Hehasactuallybeenpayingmeregularvisits.”

ThemomentheheardwhatIsaid,Tannerlookedsurprisedandembarrassed.Iamsosorry,"hesaid,"Wearebuildingafence,butitisnotfinishedyetandAxlekeepsgettingout.Ihopehedidn'tcauseyouanytrouble."

注意语言，心理和动作的描写

注意上下文的衔接，特别是尾句与下段首句的合理衔接二、合理构思情节第二段：“Notatall!Actually,hewasabighelp,”Isaid.1.Whatdoes“he”referto?WhydidIsay“hewasabighelp”?2.HowdidIdealwiththeoldtoys?“he”referstothedog.Becausehebroughtcomforttous.故事的结局应该是美好的，但要注意“我”和丈夫重新收养一只狗这个结局不可取，不符合材料中“Wecouldn'tgothroughthatkindofheartbreakagain.”我们不再沉浸在Bama去世的悲伤中，把Bama的玩具拿出来给这只狗玩。3.Howcanwedesignawarmendingtothestory?WouldIseethedogagain?二、合理构思情节第二段：“Notatall!Actually,hewasabighelp,”Isaid.

ItoldhimaboutmyBamaandthecomfortAxle

hadbroughttous.Ithasbeenthreeyearssincethatday.Tannerandhisfamilyhavebecomeourgoodfriends.AlanandIseethemoftenalongwithAxle,theboxer

whobroughtallofustogether.NowBama'stoysdon'tjustsitinthebasement,gatheringdust.AlanandIkeepthemoutforAxletoenjoywheneverhecomesovertovisit.

注意语言，心理和动作的描写

注意上下文的衔接和尾句的主题升华

“Doyouhappentohaveadog?"Iasked.“Wedo,"hesaid“Isheaboxer?”“Yes,mydogAxleisaboxer.""Ihavemethim.Heha