高三英语教师公开课改错

英语(yīnɡyǔ)高考专题复习短文改错第一页，共33页。1WarmingupCorrectfollowingwords.IntheotherhandBeresponsiblewithsb/sthBeopposedforsthLargequantityofHaveaneffectinsbLosetheheartMakeagreatprogressTheaccidentwashappenedInhurryConvincesbsthAtsightofAlotofequipmentsGeneralspeakingAssoonaspossiblyonfortoquantitiesontheawas∧a∧of∧theequipmentGenerallypossible第二页，共33页。2What’sthemaintroublewhencorrectingacomposition?1.看不出句子有错，越读越觉得对。2.看出句子出错的地方,但无法改正。3.知道(zhīdào)改正句子错误的地方,但答案不正确。第三页，共33页。3Anyrules？Anyskills？Howtocorrectit？第四页，共33页。4新版：假设英语课上老师要求同学们交换(jiāohuàn)修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号〔∧〕，并在其下面写上修改后的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线〔〕划掉修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者〔从第11处起〕不计分并不是每一个句子都有错，有些句子并非只有一处错误。————Obeytherulesofcorrection第五页，共33页。5Ilovecamping.It’smyfavouritewaytospentthesummervacation.Lastyear,myfamilyandIwentcampinginthecountryside.ItwasoneofthemostexcitedexperiencesIhadneverhad.Wesleptinatentandwentonalongwalkeveryday.Wecookoverafireandthefoodtastedwonderfully.ForawholeWeek,Isawlovelymountainviewsorbreathedfreshair.Atnight,Iheardthegentlewindblowinginthetree,andIfeltsopeaceful.Itdoes’tcostmanytocamp,andwhatIbelieveit’sthebestwaytogetclosenatureandenjoyitsbeauty.spendexcitingevercookedwonderfultreesandmuch∧to第六页，共33页。6Ilovecamping.it’smyfavouritewaytospentthesummervacation.Lastyear,myfamilyandIwentcampinginthecountryside.ItwasoneofthemostexcitedexperiencesIhadneverhad.Wesleptinatentandwentonalongwalkeveryday.Wecookoverafireandthefoodtastedwonderfully.ForawholeWeek,Isawlonelymountainviewsorbreathedfreshair.Atnight,Iheardthegentlewindblowinginthetree,andIfeltsopeaceful.Itdoes’tcostmanytocamp,andwhatIbelieveit’sthebestwaytogetclosenatureandenjoryitsbeauty.spendexcitingevercookedwonderfultreesandmuch∧to动词(dòngcí)形容词副词(fùcí)动词(dòngcí)形容词连词名词副词代词介词第七页，共33页。7近5年高考短文(duǎnwén)改错考点分布统计表动词连词代词介词形容词副词名词冠词2015（全国卷）31112112014(全国卷）31112112013(全国卷）3111121

合计9333543近5年高考(ɡāokǎo)短文改错考点分布统计表工程(gōngchéng)年份第八页，共33页。8动词形，名词(míngcí)数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细区分，代词格，细领悟；介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，冠词连词常光临。短文改错(ɡǎicuò)口诀：skills第九页，共33页。9一、动词(dòngcí)形2019浙江(zhèjiānɡ)卷Lastwintervacation,someofmyclassmatesdecidetotravelwiththeirfriends,whileIchosetotakeapart-timejob.2006安徽卷：Anyonecanborrowbooksifheorshewish.decidedwishes第十页，共33页。102006安徽卷：Youcansitatthedeskandreadthedailynewspapers,magazinesandtheotherbooks,butyouarenotpermittotakethemout.

2006天津(tiānjīn)卷：Today,IgotaletterthatsaidIhadbeenadmittingtoacollege.permittedadmitted语态：主要看句子的主语和谓语之间是主动还是被动关系，还要注意(zhùyì)语态的构成形式、有些不能使用被动语态的动词以及主动形式表被动的情况。第十一页，共33页。112014全国(quánɡuó)卷II：Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsof……2015浙江卷：Inthemorning,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.looksis2015全国(quánɡuó)卷I：Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeavery…2015陕西卷：Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.to第十二页，共33页。12二、名词(míngcí)数指名词单、复数(fùshù)形式的用法错误、a/an2006浙江(zhèjiānɡ)卷：YourknowledgesofGreececanhelpthewholeclass.2019浙江(zhèjiānɡ)卷：Ilearnedfrommyteacherthatanearbycompanywaslookingforstudentswithgoodhandwritingtowriteaddressesonenvelope.

envelopesknowledge第十三页，共33页。132006福建卷：Ifyouhaveinterestsinit,replytomesoon.学生(xuésheng)版：Mostofthestudentsinourclassarenowmakingrapidprogresses2006重庆卷：Insummer,gressskyinterest2015陕西：Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedon..steps第十四页，共33页。14三、还要注意(zhùyì)形和副注意(zhùyì)形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。2007浙江(zhèjiānɡ)卷：Igottothefinishinglinefirst.Iwontherace.Ifeltveryproudlyofmyself.学生版：Wudhard第十五页，共33页。152006湖北卷：

Ahelpinghandisalwaysstrongerenoughtoliftyouup.2006辽宁卷：

Shewasusualpatientwithherstudentsandnevermadethemdisappointed.strongusually第十六页，共33页。162015浙江(zhèjiānɡ)：Onthelefthandsideoftheclass,Icaneasyseethefootballfield.2015陕西卷：Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidedtoaskherforhelp.1系动词后用形容词〔如am/is/are/was/were/become/go/smell/feel〕2形容词修饰名词(míngcí)，副词修饰动词，形容词。easilybest第十七页，共33页。17四、非谓语(wèiyǔ)，细区分这是考查最多的错误(cuòwù)形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误(cuòwù)。NMET2003:

SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmyselfinsimpleEnglish.2007宁夏卷：LiMengcameseemeeveryday.talking∧to第十八页，共33页。182019浙江(zhèjiānɡ)卷：ItisoneofthefunniestthingsfindingontheInternetsofarthisyear.学生版：Thebigfireburnedhundredsofhouses,madehundredsoffamilieshomeless.makingfound第十九页，共33页。19人称代词，物主代词的使用．２．反身代词oneself的使用．３．人称代词的主格和宾格(bīnɡé)．４．不定代词的使用．５．Both,all,either,neither,none的使用.6.Whose和who’s，its和it’s的区别．五、代词(dàicí)格，细领悟〔2007全国(quánɡuó)I〕Iwasonlyaboutsixwhenheheldhishandouttome.Itookitinmeandwewalked.mine第二十页，共33页。202007陕西：

JustatthattimeIwokeupandfoundmestillinbed!

myself学生(xuésheng)版：Wemusttryour’sbesttoovercomealldifficultiestosolvethisparticularproblems.

ourour第二十一页，共33页。212015浙江(zhèjiānɡ)Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.2014陕西…jumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird.Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget.itNoneNone第二十二页，共33页。22主要(zhǔyào)考查习惯搭配方面的根底知识，其错误表现形式主要(zhǔyào)有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。catchasightoflosetheheartinhurryinSundayafternoonexpressussuchmanypeopleaon∨ourselvesso六、习惯用法要记住(jìzhù)第二十三页，共33页。232007浙江(zhèjiānɡ)卷：SoIdidn’tlosemyheartandkeptrunning.学生版：Becausethehelpyougavemethatsummer,Mylifechanged.2006福建卷：Itissoabeautifulplace!∨ofsuch第二十四页，共33页。24七、句子成分(jùzichéngfèn)多分析不同(bùtónɡ)的句子成分要用不同(bùtónɡ)的词类；不同(bùtónɡ)的语境要选择不同(bùtónɡ)的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。NMET2004:Idon’tknowthattheydon’tliketotalkwithme.2007天津(tiānjīn)卷：Iwasluckyenoughtohaveateacherwhichdidn’ttakemy

badgradesasajudgementofmyabilities,but…whywho/that第二十五页，共33页。25八、逻辑(luójí)错误须关注与句子(jùzi)的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。2006四川卷：Thatnight，wesatdowntowhattheythoughtwouldbeapleasant,uninterruptedmeals.学生(xuésheng)版:Somestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.wetheir第二十六页，共33页。26常考的错误形式有：连词(liáncí)but，and，or和so的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。2oo7全国(quánɡuó)II：Imeanttowritelongletterandtell

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