高考英语读后续写灾难故事类钓鱼遇到危险之后课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习灾难故事——钓鱼遇到危险之后1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Besieged(被包围的)Pariswassufferingfromfamine(饥荒).Eventhesparrowsontheroofsandtheratsinthesewersweregrowingrare.Peoplewereeatinganythingtheycouldget.AsMonsieur(法语，先生)Morissot,watchmakerbyprofessionandidler(懒汉)fortheoccasion,waswalkingalongtheboulevardonebrightJanuarymorning,hishandsinhistrouserspocketsandstomachempty,hesuddenlycamefacetofacewithhisfriend—MonsieurSauvage,afishingfriend.BeforetheWorldWarIIbrokeout,Morissothadbeeninthehabit,everySundaymorning,ofsettingforthwithabamboorod(杆子)inhishandandatinboxonhisback.HetooktheArgenteuiltrain,gotoutatColombes,andwalkedtotheIleMarante.Themomenthearrivedatthisplaceofhisdreamshebeganfishingandfishedtillnightfall.4续写原文EverySundayhemetinthisveryspotMonsieurSauvage,afat,happy,littleman,adraperintheRueNotreDamedeLorette,andanwarm-heartedfisherman.Theyoftenspenthalfthedaysidebyside,rodinhandandfeetdanglingoverthewater,andawarmfriendshiphadsprungupbetweenthetwo.Somedaystheydidnotspeak;atothertimestheychatted;buttheyunderstoodeachotherperfectlywithouttheaidofwords,havingsimilartastesandfeelings.Inthespring,aboutteno'clockinthemorning,whentheearlysuncausedalightmisttofloatonthewaterandgentlywarmedthebacksofthetwoenthusiasticanglers,Morissotwouldoccasionallyremarktohisneighbour:"My,butit'spleasanthere."Towhichtheotherwouldreply:"Ican'timagineanythingbetter!"Andthesefewwordssufficedtomakethemunderstandandappreciateeachother.5段首句Paragraph1：Abeautifuldayinautumn,theydecidetogofishinginColombeswhichisnotfarfromthebaseofGermans.Paragraph2：Suddenly,agunpointedatMorissot.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了第二次世界大战爆发之前，灾难严重，被围困的巴黎正在遭受饥荒。甚至屋顶上的麻雀和下水道里的老鼠也越来越少了。人们吃了他们能吃到的任何东西。Morissot习惯了每个星期天早上去钓鱼并且和Sauvage先生一起钓鱼，在一个秋天，他们决定去哥伦布钓鱼，那里离德国人的基地不远。9续写思路分析Para1：Abeautifuldayinautumn,theydecidetogofishinginColombeswhichisnotfarfromthebaseofGermans.由第一段首句内容“一个美丽的秋日，他们决定去哥伦布钓鱼，那里离德国人的基地不远。”可知，第一段可描写他们在德军基地哥伦布钓鱼的情况。10续写思路分析Para2：Suddenly,agunpointedatMorissot.由第二段首句内容“突然，一支枪指着莫里索。”可知，第二段可描写他们被德军发现后的事情。11续写思路分析续写线索饥饿——钓鱼——危险——转危为安12续写素材13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]ThesolideraskedthemwhatweretheydoinghereinGerman.（由连接词what引导的宾语从句作ask的宾语）[高分句型2]Thereasonwhytheychosethisdangerousplacewasthatthereweremorefishtocatch.（由关系词why引导限制性定语从句和that引导的表语从句）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现16范文呈现Suddenly,agunpointedatMorissot.ThesolideraskedthemwhatweretheydoinghereinGerman.Theyfeelscaredandansweredinterror"weweresohungrythatwejustwanttofish".Thesoldersdidn’tbelievewhattheysaid.theysearchedallovertheirbody,hopingtofindsomeevidence,butinvain.Finally,theyfoundthefishtheycaughtandbelievedwhattheysaid.Butthesolderswarnedthemnevertocameheretofish.17范文译文秋天的一个美丽的日子，他们决定去离德国人基地不远的科隆贝钓鱼。一阵微风吹动了湖面，他们沐浴在灿烂的阳光下。多么晴朗的一天！宁静的景象使他们感到放松。他们拿出装备准备钓鱼。当人们吃任何他们能吃到的东西时，日子很难过。他们之所以选择这个危险的地方是因为有更多的鱼要抓。他们需要养活一家人，他们别无选择，只能冒险。他们似乎选择了正确的地方，因为他们捕获了更多的鱼。他们俩都很兴奋，决定回家。他们没有意识到的是，有几个士兵正向他们走来。18范文译文突然，一把枪对准了莫里索。士兵用德语问他们在这里干什么。他们感到害怕，惊恐地回答“我们饿得只想钓鱼”。士兵