Unit4作文课件人教版英语九年级全册

Writing:ChangesUnit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.RevisionLet’sreviewthechangesaboutCandyWangandLiWen.GoChangesInthepastNowPersonalitySheusedtobe______.She’snotshy_________.BehaviorShedidn’tusetobe___________inschool.shegetslotsof_________.ActivitiesSheusedto__________withfriends.Itisalmost_________.shyanymorepopularattentionhangoutimpossibleCandyWang’schangesChangesInthepastNowPersonalityStudiesActivitiesLiWen’schangesmuchhappierworksharderthanheusedtobemoreoutgoingmakessomegoodfriendsfelt

lonelyandunhappywasabsentfromclasses

failedtheexaminationswasshyandwasnotabletomakefriendsquicklybecamelessinterestedinstudyingHowcanwetalkaboutaperson’schanges?appearancepersonalityhobbystudyothersChangetall/shortheavy/thinstraighthaircurlyhairlong/shorthairAppearanceoutgoingshykindfriendlyactive…PersonalityreadingsingingsongspaintingpicturesexercisingplayinggamesHobbies单元写作话题分析

本单元的话题是“谈论生活变化”。主要描述过去经常做的事，以及自己或他人过去的外貌、性格、爱好等等；描述生活中发生的变化，以及发生变化的原因。此话题主要从以下三方面设题：①介绍自己现在和过去的变化；②介绍家人、同学、朋友等发生的变化；③对于身边发生的变化给出一些评论等。3bWriteabouthowyouhavechanged.(1)Whatdidyouusetobelike?(2)Whatisthebiggestchange?Andhowdidithappen?(3)Whichchangeisthemostimportantoneandwhy?WritingListing列Copying抄Adding加Connecting连Analysing审Beautifying美

person,tense,contents

outline(提纲）addmoreinformationlinkingwords,and,butsayings,examples,vocabulary写作步骤：person(人称):__________tense(时态):__________typesandstructure(体裁与结构）:__________第一人称一般过去时、一般现在时、现在完成时记叙文；三段式结构Analyse1BeginningBodyEndingtopicGeneralintroductionaboutyourchangesThebiggestchangeandhowithappenedThemostimportantchangeandwhySummary

appearance（外貌）personality

hobby

habit

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learninglifestylehairbuildheightHowIhavechanged!(性格)shyoutgoingseriousfriendlyquietactiveList2Iusedtobe+adj./have+n,butnowIam+adj./have+n.playbasketball/soccerswim,runplaythepiano/guitarsing,danceIdidn’tusetobe+adj./have+n,butnowIam+adj./have+n.2.Ienjoyreading.AddmoreinformationtomakesentencesmorebeautifulIenjoyreadingbecausereadinggivesmealotofknowledgeandmakesmeveryhappy.3.Iusedtobequietinclass,butnowIammoreactive.Iusedtobequietinclass,butnowIamsoactivethatIjoinmanyactivities.Add31.Iusedtobeshort,butnowIamtall.Iusedtobeshort,butnowIamtall.BecauseIeatlotsofvegetablesandfruit,Iamhealthy!①Iusedtohaveshorthair.②Istillhaveshorthair.①Heusedtobeoutgoing.Heusedtobeoutgoingbutnowheisshy.IusedtohaveshorthairandnowIstillhaveshorthair.②Heisshy.Connect4LinkingWordsfirst,second,third,with,and,but,because.....美化与检视①篇章方面：布局是否完整？逻辑是否合理？要点是否齐全/丰富？②句子方面：主谓是否一致？时态是否正确？句式是否多样？是否用到连词过度？

③遣词造句方面：代词的主格、宾格等形式使用是否正确？名词单复数是否准确？动词搭配、动词的形式等是否正确？形容词、副词的使用是否达意，与修饰的对象是否相符？④细节方面：单词拼写、标点符号、大小写等是否正确？格式与字数是否合符要求？Beautify5Copy6整洁美观规范书写1.很整齐，都在一条直线上，不上蹿下跳2.字母都写到位了，很圆润，很丰满3.向右有一定的倾斜度。“在过去的几年里”，是现在完成时的时间标志，=during/overthepast/lastfewyears【参考范文】Beginning(topic)Ending(sum-up)Body(changes)Generalchanges(appearance,personality,hobbies...)Themostimportantchange，whyThebiggestchange,howIhope...Iwillstudymuchharder...

时光飞逝，跟两年前的自己相比，大家都有诸多变化。请以“ZhangHuaHasChangedaLot!”为题用英语写一篇短文。根据以下要求与提示，具体描述他/她最重要的变化及其如何发生的。要求：1.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名；2.不少于80词。提示：1.Whatdidheusetobelike?2.Whatisthebiggestchange?Andhowdidithappen?3.Whichchangeisthemostimportantoneandwhy?Tellastoryaboutit.It’stimetowrite

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