高考英语复习读后续写人与自然（4）讲义

读后续写系列（四）人与自然一、综述话题包括人类帮助动物解决问题、遇到凶猛动物脱险、人类保护环境、人与自然和谐共处等。好句积累●人与动物（一）短语积累：

小鸟在窗外叽叽喳喳：a

bird

twitters

outside

my

window小鸡在院子里唧唧叫：a

chick

makes

a

nonstop

peepingnoise

around

the

yard给小狗一张毛毯保暖：givethedogablankettokeepwarm抚摸它的羽毛：stroke

its

feathers咬住衣角：bite

the

corner

of

the

coat躺在地上\围着我跑：lieonthe

ground\run

around

me（二）与动物和谐相处：1.Poppybarkedwithjoy,remindingeveryoneofitspresence.波比（狗）开心地吠叫，提醒大家它的存在。Thetwodogswerechasingandjumpingaroundthehouse.两条狗相互追逐着,跳来跳去。HebentdowntogivePoppyabighug,andthenstrokeditsbackgently.他弯下腰给波比（狗）一个拥抱，然后轻抚它。（三）与动物冲突：►害怕Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsthatweknew.我和艾莉吓坏了，想尽了所有我们知道的防熊行动。Seeingtheapproachofthepolarbear,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.看到北极熊逼近，我吓得呆住了，吓得一动也不敢动。3.Amazedbutcautious,Poppysteppedbackalittle.波比（狗）很惊讶，但很谨慎，后退了一点。4.Thinkingofthewolf’sbloodymouth,Mikewasnearlydeadwithfright.想到狼那血淋淋的嘴，Mike几乎被吓死。►求助与获救1.Whenseeingtheflyinghelicopter,Jakewavedhishandswildly,screaming,“Help!”一看到直升飞机，Jake疯狂地挥动双手，尖叫着：“救命！”cleanedthewoundsandthengavethebirdcarefultreatment.史密斯先生清洗了小鸟的伤口，然后仔细地给它治疗。It

was

a

baby

monkey

caught

between

branches,

who

was

crying

for

its

mother.

Therefore,

we

quickened

ourstepstoapproachthe

baby

monkey

cautiouslyand

attempted

to

rescue

it.那是一只夹在树枝间的小猴子，它在为它的妈妈哭泣。因此，我们加快脚步，小心翼翼地接近小猴子，试图营救它。We

were

relieved

that

the

baby

monkey

got

rescued

with

our

joint

efforts.

Afterwards,

it

wagged

its

tail

as

ifto

express

its

gratitude

to

us.在我们共同努力下，小猴子获救了，真是令人欣慰。它摇着尾巴，好像在向我们表示感谢。（四）主题升华句：Appearingtobefeelingbetter,thewolfslowlyraisedhisheadandgaveagentlekisstoBecky’shand

itseemslikesayingthankyou.Whatawarmscene!似乎已经好多了，狼慢慢抬起头，给Becky的手一个吻，好像在表达感谢，多温暖！Seeing

it

run

happily

and

disappear

in

the

darkness,

we

burst

out

laughing.

It

turned

out

that

only

with

ourkindness

can

we

live

in

harmony

with

nature.我们看到它快乐地奔跑，消失在黑暗中，大笑了起来。事实证明，只有我们心怀善意，我们才能与自然和谐相处。ManyyearshaspassedsinceSpottyleftus,butthepreciouslessonshetaughtmewillalwaysbeinmymemory.Spotty（狗）离开我们已经很多年了，但是它给我的珍贵的教训会一直在我记忆里。●环境保护►片段一：Thesolution

was

to

plant

trees

so

that

the

birds

could

seek

shelter.

Immediately,

Richard

got

down

to

planting

treeswhenever

he

was

free.Eventually,

his

efforts

paid

off,

with

acres

of

naturallygrown

land

being

home

to

manyplants

and

animals.解决办法是种树，这样鸟儿就可以找到庇护所了。理查德有空就马上开始种树。最终，他的努力得到了回报，几英亩自然生长的土地成了许多动植物的家园。►片段二：

Therefore,

before

we

take

immediate

measures

to

dosomething,

we

should

be

aware

of

the

fact

that"Conquering

thenature"

will

never

be

our

goal.Instead,

we

should

take

the

natureas

our

intimate

friend.

Preserving

nature

is

not

only

preservingour

home,

but

the

civilization

of

human

munity

as

well.因此，在我们采取措施做某事前，我们应该意识到“征服自然”永远不会是我们的目标。相反，我们应该把自然作为我们亲密的朋友。保护自然不仅是保护我们的家园，也是保护人类社会的文明。►片段三：To

sum

up,

the

world'

s

endangered

animals

are

an

importantresource

and

we

should

protectthem

by

setting

aside

some

landfor

them.

Although

mankind’s

need

for

land

continues

togrow,

people

are

intelligent

and

inventive

enough

to

put

theland

into

use

properly.

In

this

way,

we

canhave

enough

land

forfarming,

housing

and

industry,

and

preserve

the

biodiversity

ofthe

planet

at

the

same

time.总之，地球上的濒危动物是重要的资源，我们应该通过为它们留出土地来保护它们。尽管人类对土地的需求持续增长，但人们足够聪明和有创造力，能够合理地利用土地。这样，我们就可以有足够的土地用于农业、住房和工业，同时保护地球生物多样性。●自然环境描写It

was

a

perfect

outing

wherethecolors

ofthedeepbluesky,

thelight

green

river

water

and

the

mild

late

May

sunshine

mixed

to

createamagic

scene,whichtotallytookourbreathaway.

这是一次完美的郊游，深蓝色的天空、浅绿色的河水和五月末温和的阳光混合在一起，创造了一个神奇的场景,让我们赞叹不已。

2.Offtheshorelayquietlyseveralcottages.Occasionally,theycaughtsightofmountaingoatsaswellasaneagleflyingover.岸边静悄悄地坐落着几间小屋。偶尔，他们会看到山羊和一只飞过的老鹰。

3.Whennight

fell,theygatheredaroundthecampfire,exchanging

and

sharingstories

and

feelings.

夜幕降临时，他们聚集在篝火旁，交流和分享故事和感受。4.Richardcouldn'thelpthinkingnowonderitwasregardedasaspiritual

place

where

peopleliveinharmonywithnature.All

these

fortedeveryone'ssoul.

理查德不禁想，难怪它被视为一个人们与自然和谐相处的精神圣地。这一切真的安慰了每个人的灵魂。案例分析（一）人与动物阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Doraisasevenyearoldgirl.Oneday,whenshevisitedherfriendAlice,shesawabeautifulbirdinacageonthebalconyofthehouse.Alicetoldheritwashernewpet.“Howbeautifulitis!”saidDora.“Ialsowanttohavesuchabirdasmypet.”ThatdaywhenDorareturnedhome,shetoldhermotheraboutAlice’sbird.Thensheasked,“Mom,canIalsogetabird?”“Ofcourse,youcan,”saidhermother.“ButyouneedtowaitbecauseI’venotimetovisitapetstorethesedays.”Doraagreed.Oneday,whenDorawasbackhomefromschool,shesawacageinthelivingroom.Inthecagewasabeautifulbluebird.Hermotherwasstandingnexttothecage,smiling.“Oh,abird!”Dorashoutedhappily.Sherantoitandlookedatithappily.“It’sabirthdaygiftforyou,”saidhermother“Thankyou,Mom.Iloveitsomuch!”saidDoraexcitedly.Thefollowingday,Dorainvitedherfriendstoseeherbird.AllofherfriendssaiditwasabeautifulbirdandDorawasverygladtohearthat.Sheandherfriendsplayedwiththebirdforalongtimethatday.Herfriendsallwishedtheycouldhavesuchabirdastheirpet.Sadly,afewweekslater,Dorabecamesick.Thedoctortoldherparentsthatshegotthefluandhadtosayathome.Inordernottomakeherfriendssick,herparentsaskedherfriendsnottoetoplaywithher.Dorafeltverysad.Howshewishedherfriendswouldeandvisither!Butsheknewherparentswereright.She’dbetterstayalone.SinceDorahadnoonetoplaywith,shecouldonlyplaywithherbird.However,shefeltthatherbirddidn’tseemtobehappyeither.Paragraph1:Dorawatchedherbirdinsilence.Paragraph2:Whenhermothercameinside,Doratoldhermotheraboutherdecision.【答案】Dorawatchedherbirdinsilence.Shefoundherbirdkeptlookingoutofthewindow.Inthetreesoutside,manybirdswereplayinggladly.Shethoughtthatperhapsherbirddidn’tlikekeptinthecageatall.Justasshemissedstayingwithherfriends,italsowantedtogoouttoplaylikeotherbirds.Butbeforeshegotsick,shedidn’tthinkalotaboutherbird.NowDorarealizedsheshouldn’tselfishlytakeawayitsfreedomforherownenjoyment.Whenhermothercameinside,Doratoldhermotheraboutherdecision.Shesaid,“Mom,canyousetmybirdfree?”Hermotherwassurprisedandaskedwhy.“I’msureitalsowantsfriends,”saidDora.Hermotheragreed.Sheopenedthecageandthebirdcheerfullyflewoutofthewindowanddisappearedsoon.Afewdayslater,Doracouldplaywithherfriendsagain.Howexcitedshewas!Andwhenshelookedoutatthebirdsinthetrees,sheknewherbirdmustbeveryhappyatthatmoment.【详解】续写线索发现小鸟往窗外看——意识到小鸟要自由——告诉妈妈自己的决定——放生——感悟2.词汇激活生病：getsick/fallill询问：ask/inquire高兴：gladly/delightedly惊讶：astonished案例分析（二）人与动物阅读下而材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。TheBiggestDogontheMountainWelikedhikingtogether.Today,wewerelookingforatrailoverWallaceMountain.”It’sbeenoveranhour,”saidJessc,mynineteenyearoldson.“Doyouthinkthetrailstillexists?”Wehadexploredseveralpathsbutwithnoluck.Wepushedthroughweedsmidcalfhighforus,butneckhighforourrustybrowndog,Shadow.Onceinawhile,wewouldcallShadowbackwhenshewasattractedbythepleasantsmellofflowers.Nolongerslimandbouncingwithenergy,Shadowwasthesizeofalargehousecat,andalwayscontenttocurluponthecouchbesideoneofus.Suddenly,weheardwhatsoundedlikemanydogsbarkinginthedistance,anunusualsoundinthewildernessaroundus.Curious,weclimbedtheridge(山脉),onlytofindwhatseemedlikeadogfactory.Smalldogs,bigdogs,browndogs,anddogsIcan’tevendescribepouredout.Thehounds(猎狗)hittheground,sniffingtheairandturningtofaceus.Beforelong,theywentdownfromtheirsideofthemountain.Jesseshotanalarmedglanceatmebeforeturningtocallinafirmvoice,“Shadow,ehere,stay.”Ipattedmypockets,feelingforthepepperspray(防狼喷雾),sosmallitwouldneverworkagainstsomanyanimals.Iturned,surveyingthenearbybrushforapotentialweapon.Withthehelpofadrenaline(肾上腺素),IbrokeofftwothickbranchesfromatreeandrushedtoJesse’sside,“Hereyouare!”“OK,”hesaid,“Dad,theyareingtous.”Mymouthwentdry.IglancedoveratJesse,hislipspinched(夹紧)tight.Thepackemergedfromthevalley,marchingstraighttowardus.ThedogsintheleadwerenowcloseenoughforustoseethatmostofthemwerethreetimeslargerthanShadow.Withdeepgrowls(怒吼声)，theyranstraightforus.Jesseswallowedhardandlookedatme.Paragraph1:Shadow’sbackfurrose.Paragraph2:Surprisingly,theentiremassofdogsturnedtailandfled.【答案】Shadow’sbackfurrose.Downcamethegroupofdogstowardsus,roaringangrily.Justasoneofthemapproachedus,Iraisedthepeppersprayandspraytheliquidtoit.Luckilyitjumpedaside.However,moredogschargedatme,whichmadethepeppersprayuseless.Justthen,Jessewentupbravelyandthrewthethickbranchesaroundus,makingitdifficultforthedogstomovenear.Meanwhile,Shadowshoutedatthedogsaggressivelyinanattempttoscarethemaway.Surprisingly,theentiremassofdogsturnedtailandfled.Iwasgladtoseethemdisappear.IthankedJesseforherbraveryandIpattedShadowonhisback.Whilehewasbiggerthanthosedogs,hewasnotafraidinfaceofthemassofdogs.Wecontinuedtosetofftosearchforourtrail.Thistime,withShadowleadingtheway,wewouldnotgetlostandsoonwefoundtherighttrail.Aftertheadventure,wereturnedhomesafeandsoundthankstomybravesonandthebiggestdog.【详解】徒步旅行——探索——发现一群狗——遭攻击——Shadow吓退狗——回家2.词汇激活行为类：寻找：lookfor/search/seek回家：goback/returnhome爬：climb/ascend情绪类：感谢：showourappreciation/gratitude害怕的：afraid/horrible案例分析（三）人与动物（11月校内考）阅读下而材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend'sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird（蜂鸟）,desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspiderwebs（蛛网）andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspiderwebsthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberrylinedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering（悬停）,sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foralongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntiltome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthaveetosaygoodbye.”Paragraph1：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.______________________________________Paragraph2：Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.__________________________【答案】Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.Irushedbacktothedesertedhouse.Itwasagreatfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.Leavingthehouse,Icouldn’thelpwonderinghowitwasgettingonnow.Haditmanagedtofinditswaybackhome,orwasitstillouttheresomewherestrugglingtosurvive?

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.Iturnedaroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.Itseemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysomedeep,unspokengratitude.Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.案例分析（四）环境保护阅读下而材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。MariaandPeterlivedinacoastalcity.Thegreatestpleasureinsummerforthemwastoswimattheirlocalbeachafterschool.Butonedaytheystartedtolosetheirenthusiasmforswimminginthewaters.Moreoftenthannot,theywouldfindplasticbagsthrownonthebeach.Worsestill,astheyswaminthewater,someplasticbagswouldfloataroundthemandevensticktotheirlegswhentheywalkedtotheshore.Theywereupsetanddecidedsomethingneededtobedonetostopthebeautifulseabeingconsumedbywaste.Oneweekend,MariaandPeterbroughtabigbagtothebeachanddeterminedtocleanitup.Sweatstreameddownfromtheirforeheadwhiletheybentdownandpickeduptheplasticbags.Totheirdisappointment,afteraday'shardwork,therewerestillmanyplasticbagslyingonthebeachorfloatinginthewater.Goinghomewithachinglegsandarms,MariaandPeterwerealmostdefeatedbyastrongsenseoffailure.Thatnightoverdinnerwiththeirparents,thepairatesilently.Noticingtheirlowspirits,Motheraskedgently,“Youtwolookedsodown.Whathappened?"ExchangingglanceswithPeter,Mariarepliedinalowvoice,“It'sthoseannoyingplasticbags.Wetriedtocleanupbutitwasjustimpossible."Understandingthepair'sdisappointment,theirfatherpattedthemonthebackandforted,“Well,it'sreallyhardforjusttwoofyoutofixsuchabigproblem.”“Justtwoofus.."plainedMariaandPeter,lookingateachother.Suddenlyanideaflashedthroughtheirminds,theireyesshiningwithexcitement.“Yes,that'sthepoint!Weshouldmakemorepeopleawareoftheproblemandencouragethemtotakeaction!"thepairsaidinchorus.Paragraph1:Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandstartedplanning.Paragraph2:Excitedandnervous,theypostedthevideoandarticleonWeChat.【答案】Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandstartedplanning.“Maybewecanwriteanarticletoarousepeople'sawareness."Mariasuggested.“Wecanalsomakeavideo!”Peteradded.Theyweresothrilledthattheydiscussedthedetailsuntilmidnight.Thenextday,theywenttothebeachandfilmedashortvideoshowingplasticbagslyingonthebeachandfloatinginthesea.Peter,whowasgoodatwriting,wroteanarticletalkingaboutthepresentsituationofthebeachandaskingpeopletotakepartinthecleanup.Excitedandnervous,theypostedthevideoandarticleonWeChat.Totheiramazement,countlessmentsfloodedinsayinghowheartbrokentheywerewhenlookingatthepollutedbeachandocean.Alargenumberofpeopleintheirmunity,encouragedbytheirefforts,werewillingtojoinintheircleanup.Movedandexcited,thepairorganizedpeopletothebeachtocollectplasticbagsandappealtootherstoavoidthrowingplasticbags.Afewdayslater,withtheirjointeffort,thecoastregaineditsbeautyandMariaandPeterregainedtheirpleasure.Itisourdutytoprotecttheocean,andonlyinthisway,canweliveinharmonywithnature.案例分析（五）人与植物阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。MywifeandIneverhadagreenthumbwhenitcametokeepingplantsaliveformorethanafewweeks.So,whenIwasdiagnosedwithcancer,wedidn'teventhinkaboutaddingaplanttooursmallapartment.Butoneday,myfriendgaveusabeautifulplantasagift,insistingthatitwouldbringlifetoourhomeandasenseofcalmnessduringthistoughtime.Surprisingly,theplanttookoffandgrewbeautifully,anditbroughtasenseofjoytoourhomethatwedesperatelyneeded.TendingtotheplantgavemeasenseofacplishmentatatimewhenIsometimesfeltuseless.Iamaphysician,andtakingcareoftheplantmademefeellikeacaregiveronceagain.Itwasnicetobeablelonurturesomethingandwatchitgrow.SincemydiagnosisinAugust2018,fartoooften,itseemed,Ihadtorelyonhelpfromotherpeople.Theenormouschangeleftmefeelingaimlessandunsettled.Wateringtheplant,assmallanactasitwas,connectedmetoacorepartofmyoldidentity.Plantsandpeoplecouldstilldependonme.Forthenextfewmonths,Iwasrecoveringfromsurgeryandreceivingradiation.Despitemyongoingtreatments,wefoundsomepeacethroughtendingtotheplant.Thesimpleactofwateringandwatchingitgrowgaveussomethingtofocusonoutsideofmyhealth.Itbecameasmallbutmeaningfulpartofourlives.Paragraph1:Then,mysteriously,itbegantoshowsignsoflosingliveliness.Paragraph2:AsIbecamelessanxious,Ibegantosearchonlineforhowtocareformyplant.【答案】Then,mysteriously,itbegantoshowsignsoflosingliveliness.Iincreasedmyplantwatering,andthendecreasedit.Still,theleaveskeptbrowninganddroppingtothefloor.Igrewmoreandmorefrustratedanduneasy.'ThethoughtthatIcouldn'tevencareforasimpleplantstartedtohaunt(萦绕;缠绕)melikeashadow.Forthepastfewmonths,abondhadbeenbuiltbetweenmeandtheplant.Icouldn'tshakethefeelingthatiftheplantdied,Imighttoo.Havingseenthroughmyheartandsensedmyfear,mywifefortedme,"Honey,yourtreatmentisworkingwellandmaybetheplantjustneedsitscycle."Herwordsdidmakesenseandsettledmynerves.AsIbecamelessanxious,Ibegantosearchonlineforhowtocareformyplant.Followingtheinstructions,Itransplantedthetreetoalargerpot,givingitsrootsmoreroomtogrowandburiedsomesolidplantnutrientunderthetoplayeroftheearth.Soon,webothbegantothriveagain.WheneverIlookatthetreewithitsshinnyandlushleavesinitsnewpot,Imakeitapointtoappreciatemywifeandtheotherpeoplewhohavecaredforandsupportedme.Iftheplantoutlivesme,Ihopeitwillinspiremywifetoliveherlifetothefullest.案例分析（六）自然主题阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Onceuponatimethecolorsoftheworldstartedtoquarrel.Allclaimedthattheywerethebest.Themostimportant.Themostuseful.Thefavorite.Greensaid,“Clearly,Iamthemostimportant.Iamthesignoflifeandofhope.Iwaschosenforgrass,treesandleaves.Withoutme,allanimalswoulddie.”Blueinterrupted,“Youonlythinkabouttheearthbutconsidertheskyandsea.Itisthewaterthatisthebasisoflife.Theskygivesspaceandpeace.Withoutmypeace,youwouldbenothing.”Yellowchuckled,“Youareallsoserious.Ibringlaughterandwarmthintotheworld.Thesunisyellow,themoonisyellow,thestarsareyellow.Everytimeyoulookatasunflower,thewholeworldstartstosmile.Withoutmetherewouldbenofu