2024年广东大湾区高三二模英语作文写作讲解课件（含范文）

2024届大湾区二模英语试卷评讲

应用文写作+续写小作文正值你校社团招新，学校英文报发起“MyClub”主题征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍并推荐你参加的一个社团。注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。MyClub答案MyClub

TheDebateClubhasbeenavitalpartofmyschoollife,

offeringaplatformtoexploreand

appreciatetheartofdebate.

Ifyouareinterestedinimprovingyourcriticalthinkingandpublic

speakingskills,

Iheartilyrecommendjoiningthisclub.

Throughweeklymeetingsand

competitions,

welearnhowtoconstructpersuasivearguments,

expressouropinionsclearly,

and

thinkindependently.

NotonlyhaveIimprovedmycommunicationskills,

butIhavealsomade

friendsthroughthisclub.

JoiningtheDebateClubisoneofthebestdecisionsI'vemadeinschool,

andIencourageyoutogiveitatryaswell!批判性思维我衷心建议构建有说服力的论点考场优秀句子1.通过亲身体验/动手体验，学生们可以领略/品味中国文化的魅力。StudentscansavortheglamourofChinesecultureviathehands-onexperiences.2.

如果我是你,我会毫不犹豫地加入这个俱乐部。(if虚拟条件句省略和倒装)WereIyou,Iwouldjointheclubwithouthesitation.3.在这个过程中，我可以感受到与我的中国的联系，并获得强烈的文化认同感。Duringtheprocess,Icanfeelconnectedtomychineserootsandgainastrongsenseofculturalidentity.4.历史悠久的英语辩论俱乐部拥有丰富的辩论赛，一定会让你感受到一种肃然起敬的氛围。EnglishDebatingClub,boastingalonghistory,hasabundantdebatingcompetitions,whichwilldefinitelyexposeyoutoanawestruckatmosphere.5.你将有机会与他人交流，用智慧和清晰的表达来捍卫你的舞台。Youwillbeblessedwiththeopportunitytocommunicatewithothersanddefendyourstagewithwisdomandclearclarification.6.我的社团是如此有意义和有益，不仅可以培养我的批判性思维，还可以磨练我的英语口语技能，点燃我对英语的热情。SomeaningfulandrewardingismyclubthatnotonlycanIcultivatemycriticalthinking,butalsoIcanhonemyoralEnglishskillsandignitemyenthusiasmforEnglish.7.每个星期天都能见证到高水平成员之间的比赛。EverySundaywitnessesthecompetitionsamonghighlevelmembers.4.历史8.它不仅能提高你的智力，还能帮助缓解学业压力。Notonlydoesitboostyourintelligence,butalsoitcanhelprelieveacademicpressure.Myclub

Myfavoriteclubisdebateclub,

wherewecanexploreadiverserangeoftopicseveryThursdayafternoon,

rangingfromenvironmentalissuestotechnology'simpactonsociety.ThereasonwhyIamkeenonitareasfollows.

Firstandforemost,notonlycanI

sharpenmycriticalthinking,butalsoIcanfosterspeakingskillsinpublicwhile

gettingmyviewpointsacross.Additionally,

It'sexhilaratingtoconstructargumentsanddefendthemagainstotherdebaters,whichspursmetoconductthoroughresearch.

Lastbutnotleast,whatbenefitsmemostisthat

thedebateclubcanempowermetobemoreopen-minded,ashearingdiverseperspectiveshasbroadenedmyunderstandingofcomplexissues.

Inconclusion,beingpartofthedebateclubisnotjustaboutwinningarguments

butaboutlearningtocommunicateeffectivelyandrespectfully,contributingsignificantlytomypersonalgrowthandconfidence.

Ifyouarepassionateaboutit,don’thesitatetojoinus!Iamfullyconvincedthattheclubwilladdcolorstoyourcampuslife.以探讨各种各样的话题磨练我的批判性思维在公共场合的演讲技巧

在我说清楚自己观点的时候很高兴

能构建论点

并为其辩护这促使我进行彻底的研究

让我收获最大的是

让我变得思想更开放

扩大我对复杂问题的理解不是为了赢得辩论，而是这对我的个人成长和自信有很大的帮助增添色彩别犹豫，加入我们吧！下水作文考场学生优秀作文作为一种不可或缺的途径灌输文化精神手工艺延续工匠精神建立与学校成立之初为...敞开大门更吸引的是正是非物质文化遗产的传承人来到我们学校

改成hands-on突出改成freshmenn.出现，到来参与

志愿者俱乐部自发传递善意高度赞扬无私援助在困境中的人提供足够多的机会

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接触到新发现的文学世界渴望你的参与优秀表达笔记1.instillculturalspiritto...2.carryforwardthespiritofhandicraftsmanship3.opensitsdoorto4.theinheritoroftheintangibleheritage5.withinyourreach6.cultivate/fosteryourresponsibilityforthesociety7.multi-level,wide-rangingactivities8.harmoniousatmosphere9.deservestobeyourtoppreferences10.getimmersedinreading11.embarkonarewardingandenjoyablejourney12.feature....以...为特色13.neverfailto14.acquaintsb.with.15.enlighteninginsight16.informative17.thought-provoking发人深省的；引人深思的18.expose...to...19.newfoundadj.新得到的

Shesavouredhernewfoundfreedom.她体味到了她新获得的自由。Hisfriendshaveanewfoundsenseofpatriotism.他的朋友们有一种新萌生的爱国主义意识。读后续写①Afterabusyweek,Emilyandherparentsdecidedtogoonamountainpicnic.Theylongedtofully

experiencenature’sbeautyandenjoyqualityfamilytime.Littledidtheyknow,thisoutingwouldbe

filledwithunexpectedtwistsandturns(波折).

②Arrivingatthemountain’sbase,theydiscoveredahouse,infrontofwhichMikeandhisfather

hadjustfinishedloadingaboatontoMike’struck.Emilyapproachedthemandaskedforthebestpicnic

spotinthearea.Knowingthemountainwell,Mikesuggestedalocationabouttwohours’walkaway.“It’sworththeeffort,”

heassuredthem.

③ParkingtheircarnexttoMike’struckandcarryingtheirpicnicsupplies,Emilyandherparentsset

offonthewindingroad.Tallgreentreesononeside,aflowingstreamontheother,theroadeventually

ledthemtoabreathtakingclearingdottedwithcolorfulwildflowers.Theyenjoyedtheirdelicious

sandwiches,fruits,andsnacks,engaginginpleasantconversations.

④Justastheyfinishedtheirmealandsettleddowntorelax,darkcloudsunexpectedlyrolledin.It

lookedlikerain.Panicked,theyhurriedlysetupthetenttheyhadbrought.Nosoonerhadtheyentered

thanraindropsbeganpouringontheroof.Heavyrainenvelopedthesurroundings,makingitimpossible

toseeanything.Theyhadnochoicebuttopatientlywaititout.

⑤Afterwhatfeltlikeacentury,therainceased.Emilyandherparentswastednotimepackingup

theirbelongings,readytogetdownhill.However,theirexcitementturnedtoworrywhenthey

discoveredthatthesmallstreamtheyhadpreviouslycrossedhadturnedintoawideandimpassable

river.Withnocellphonesignal,theyweretrappedwithoutameansofseekinghelp.Tomakematters

worse,darknesswasapproaching.Suddenly,theyheardthesoundofavehiclefromacrosstheriver.Emilyandherparentsboardedtheboat.简单的读后续写方法Suddenly,theyheardthesoundofavehiclefromacrosstheriver.Whatwasthatvehicle?Howdidtheyfeel?Whatdidtheydotosavethem?Emilyandherparentsboardedtheboat.Whatdidtheydo?HowdidtheyfeelWhatdidtheylearn?写4-7句话ItwasMikeandhisfather.Theyknewtheirnewfriendswereintroubleandcametotheirrescue.Theyunloadedtheboatontheirtruck.Theycrossedtheriver.ItwasMikeandhisfather.Theyknewtheirnewfriendswereintroubleandcametotheirrescue.Theyunloadedtheboatontheirtruck.Theycrossedtheriver.强调句：ItwasMikeandhisfatherthat/whocametotheirrescue.状语：非谓语；形容词；with结构，独立主格,介词短语①Knowingtheplacewell(Withawellunderstandingofthemountain),theyevenbroughtaboattocrosstheriver.②Familiarwiththeever-changingweatherinthemountain,theyunloadedtheboatonthevehiclepromptly,whichplayedaimperativeroleatthiscriticalmoment.③

Despitethethunderingcloudsandroaringrainstorm,theyriskedtheirownlivesandpaddledtowardstheirnewfriends.

倒装句：Hardly;Sothat;As;onlySostrongwasthewindthattheyrowedwithalltheirmighttoreachtheothersideoftheriver.Exhaustedastheywere,theyfoughttheirwaysacrosstheriver/triedtheirutmosttopaddleacrosstheriver.无灵主语：情绪名词；LoudcheerseruptedfromEmliy'sfamilywhentheboatfinallyarrived.Asurgeofgratitudewelledupinsidethem.定语从句：名词性从句：被动语态：等等答案

Suddenly,

theyheardthesoundofavehiclefromacrosstheriver.

Atruckappearedaround

thebendoftheroad—asenseofreliefwashedoverthemastheyrealizeditwasMike'struck.

It

turnedoutthatMikehadnoticedthatitwasgettingdarkbutEmily'scarwasstillparkedinthe

openspaceinfrontofhishouse.

Thinkingoftheheavyrain,

hesuspectedsomethingbadmight

havehappenedtothem.

Withoutdelay,

Mikeandhisfatherjumpedintothetruckandheaded

uphill.

Nearingthepicnicspot,

Mikeheardtheshoutforhelpand,

inthenextmoment,

sawEmily

andherparentswavingtheirhandsdesperatelyontheothersideoftheriver.

Mikeimmediately

stopped,

andwithhisfather'shelp,

movedtheboatfromhistruckintothewater.

Emilyandherparentsboardedtheboat.

Safelycrossingtheriver,

theyreturnedtothebaseof

themountaininMike'struck.

Emilyandherparentswerenotonlygratefulfortheirsafereturn,

butalsoforthekindnessandassistancetheyreceivedfromMikeandhisfather.

Theyexpressed

theirheartfeltthankstoMikeandhisfatherfortheirswiftresponseandinvaluableassistance,

tearswellingupintheireyes.

This

unforgettableexperiencetaughtthemthepowerofkindness

andinspiredthemtopayitforward.

Theyalsolearnedavaluablelessonontheimportanceof

beingwellpreparedforexploringnature.

Nodoubtitisamountainpicnicthathasleftadeep

impressiononthem.山脚下将善良传递出去他们还学到了宝贵的一课，那就是为探索大自然做好充分准备的重要性。无疑是一次山间野餐给他们留下了深刻的印象。转弯处教师下水作文

Suddenly,theyheardthesoundofavehiclefromacrosstheriver.Theirhopewasliftedandtheyyelledforhelpontopoftheirlungs.“Help!Help!”Emily