中考英语作文突破指导省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖课件

中考书面表达突破新乡市一中1/711听力<152单项-83完形104阅读-255词语<76补全-57作文-20所剩5-10分钟，检验：分值高到低、难到易。中考英语大致时间分配——建议2/71一、题型特点：书面表示是对学生语言组织能力、行文表示能力、基础知识、语法、词汇等综合驾驭能力考查。中考书面表示贴近生活，贴近时代，给同学们一更多表示空间。作文题目由限制性题目到半开放性题目，提醒性词语越来越少，而给同学们空间越来越大：06年Non-smokingDay;07年“校园节约从我做起”;到09年“APersonIwillneverforget”，10年_____isfun3/71二、考查形式（体裁）：中考英语考查形式多样：看图（表）写作、书信、通知、日志、记人物等。体裁包含：记叙文、说明文和应用文；4/71三、中考评分标准：作文一律按档给分，与错误个数无直接关系。影响作文分数原因：1题目要求、内容关键点；2句子准确、通顺；3层次结构清楚；4拼写、语法等错误；5卷面整齐度；年河南中考评分标准：5/71四、做题步骤：1审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节；2列提要（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大致内容；3写作：在提要基础上补充关键点；4复查：2遍——1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检验语句是否通顺、连贯等；5誊抄：不允许做任何更改。*总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称；三思：词汇—>短语—>句式；三查：关键点、拼写和语法、连贯。6/71五、作文普通框架：文章分3段：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧紧围绕主题，2句话内结束，尽可能升华。7/71满分作文标准：第一档：（15~13分）完全符合题目要求，观点正确,关键点齐全，立意高。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表示清楚，结构合理，含有逻辑性。卷面书写洁净，整齐，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密适当，书写美观。标点，大小写正确。最好能有一两个亮点句。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）8/71六、怎样列提要：例1：利弊型作文——Microblog利与弊Para1:（综述）withthedevelopmentofinternet…moreandmorepopular…Para2:（利）First,convenient,anywhere,anytime;

Second,share…with…;

Last,expressviewsfree,money-free…Para3:（弊）However,onecoinhastwofaces.Ontheonehand,awasteoftime——affectstudy;

Ontheotherhand,notsafe——stolen,hurtfeelingsPara4:（个人）Asastudent,makegooduseofit.9/71七、怎样列提要：例2：计划安排型作文——谈假期安排Para1:（综述）graduatefrom…,holidayiscoming,planforthisholidayPara2:（正文）Firstly,studycomesfirst.makepreparationsforthefirstsenioryear;

Secondly,visittouristattractions;

Lastbutnotleast,dosportstobuildupmybody.Para3:IamsureI’llhaveameaningfulholiday.(I’mlookingforwardtothecomingholiday.)(Ican’twaittoenjoymysummervocation.)10/71八、常见作文类型模板：1书信Dear...,

I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter…------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Bestwishes! Yours,

Lucy

11/71a书信开头惯用语

Iamverygladtoreceiveyourletter(hearformyou).Hello,Jane.Iseverythinggoing(on)well?…/Howiseverythinggoing(on)?

I’mwritingtoyouforsomeadviceonhowto…

I’mwritingtoaskifyoucan...

Howtimeflies!Ithasbeenmonths/yearssincewelastmet.

Thankyouforinvitingmeto….12/71b书信结尾惯用语

Bestwishes(to/foryou).Wishyougoodluck.(Iam)lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.13/71二、口头通知常见写作模板：呼语及开场白部分：Ladiesandgentlemen,MayIhaveyourattention,please?Ihaveanannouncementtomake.正文部分：Alltheteachersandstudentsarerequiredtoattendit.Pleasetakeyournotebooksandmakenotes.Pleaselistencarefullyandwe’llhaveadiscussioningroups.Pleasecomeontimeanddon’tbelate.结束语部分：Pleasecomeandjoininit.Everybodyiswelcometoattendit.Ihopeyou’llhaveanicetimehere.That’sall.Thankyou.14/71八、常见作文类型提要模板：2图表、数字百分比型（提出讨论或调查事实）Lastweek,ourclasshadaclassmeetingon(howto)…Herearetheresults.（表示出不一样看法或观点）Moststudentsthink…While…20%ofthemchooseto….Another15believe…Therearealsosome…sayingthat…（表示个人看法）

Asastudent,Iagreeto…15/713说明利弊型Nowadays…isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Ithasmanyadvantages.First,优点1…Besides,优点2…

However,everycoinhastwosides.Italsobringsusbadinfluences.Ontheonehand,缺点1…Ontheotherhand,缺点2…

Inmyopinion,个人观点…16/714不一样观点型

Wemadeasurveyaboutwhetherweshould…提出矛盾问题.Differentpeopleholddifferentideas.

Somebelieve…正方观点.First,原因1…Besides,原因2…

Whileothersdon’tagree.Theythink…反方观点.Ontheonehand,原因1…Ontheotherhand,原因2…

Asforme,个人观点…17/715处理问题型

Recently,the…problemhasbeenmoreandmoreserious.…shoulddosomethingtosolveit.

Firstly,方法1…Secondly,方法2…Finally,方法3…

Iamsureifeveryonecanmakeacontributionto…,the…willbecomebetterandbetter.18/71九、惯用过渡性词语叙事文惯用句子间连接词：Atfirst;atlast;intheend…then/next/afterthat…when/while/assoonas/not…until…atthesametime;attimes;onceinawhile;sothatToone’ssurprise/joyLuckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…inaword/inall19/71议论文惯用连接词 表示并列：either…or;neither…nor;both…and;notonly…butalso;表示递进：besides;what’smore;what’sworse;(moreover);表示原因：because;for…;becauseof…;thanksto…;(forthereasonthat…);表示结果：so;asaresult;so…that…;therefore;表示目标：sothat…;inorderthat…;(inorder)to…;for…;表示对比：while;ontheonehand+ontheotherhand;Eachcoinhastwosides.;prefer…to…;wouldratherdo…thando…;20/71议论文惯用连接词 表示转折：however;but;表示举例：forexample;forinstance;suchas…;like…;thatistosay…表示总结：inall/short;inaword;inbrief/total;lastbutnotleast;last;表示利弊：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;…havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;sbbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;表示喜爱：love/like/enjoy…;befondof…;beinterestedin…;showgreatinterestin…;loseoneselfin…;putone’sheartinto…;begoodat;bepoorat;beweakin;21/71议论文惯用连接词 表示个人想法：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其它：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeupone’smindtodo;inaway;

22/71议论文惯用连接词 表示个人想法：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其它：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeupone’smindtodo;inaway;

23/71十、作文万能句式Iwillworkhardtomakemydreamcometrue.Ihopeyourdreamwillcometrueoneday.Ittakessb.+时间+todo…Sb.spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+onsth./(in)doingsth.It’simportant/necessary/useful/useless/common…(forsb.)tov…It’snice/kindofsb.tov..It’stimeforsb.todosth.It’sawasteoftimeto…It’s…years/dayssincesb.+vedIt’sgreatfuntodo=sb.havegreatfundoingIt’sapitythat…It’sanhonorto… 24/71十、作文万能句式I’m/We’renotallowedto…I’mafraidofmakingmistakes…Therebe…doing…Greatchangeshavetakenplacein…sthis/arewellworthv-ing.Itseems/seemedthat…Itseems(im)possibletov…Itissaidthat…Asthesayinggoes,……and….aredifferentinmanyways.too+adj./adv.todoTherearemanydifferencesbetween…and… 25/71十、作文万能句式Ihavemadeupmymindto…Iamsurethat…Iamnotsurewhether/if…Iwouldrather….than…Itdoesn’tmatterif…Thankyouforv-ing.Ifeveryonecanmakeacontributiontotheearth/nature/society,ourlifewillbebetterandbetter. 26/71十一、作文万能短语have/lookforachancetododooutdooractivitiesbe/getusedto(doing)sth.learn…from…beproudof/takepridein…playanimportant/activepart/rolein…agreewithsb.todosth.withthehelpofsb.=withone’shelp(反义：withoutone’shelp)be/getreadytodosth.=be/getreadyforsth.payattentionto…takegoodcareof…makefriendswith…geton/alongwellwith…27/71十一、作文万能短语wishyousuccessful/successastimegoesby…graduatefrom…lookingbacktothepastthreeyears,…（用现在完成时态）

passthe(final)examsticktodoingkeepyoumindonyourgoalsmakeupone’smindtodosth.(onsth.)makeadecisiontodoworkhardatEnglishonceinawhile/attimes/nowandthenfromthenon28/71十一、作文万能短语inthefuture（未来）/infuture（从今以后）increaseourknowledge/enlargeourvocabularyinfact/asamatteroffactinthebeginning/atfirstfeellikegivinguphavetrouble/difficultyin(doing)sth. have(no)timetodohaveexperiencein(doing)sth.followone’sadvice/suggestionsmastersomebasic…skillsberequiredtodoasksb.forhelpcan’twaittodo29/71十一、作文万能短语besupposedtodoencouragesb.tododeal/dowith…workout/solvetheproblemsallsorts/kindsof…athomeandabroadoneof…befullof…learnsth.byoneselfcomeupwithgoodideasbesurprisedatsth.(todosth.)inordertokeephealthy/fitagoodwaytov…30/71十一、作文万能短语keep(on)tryingworryabout…/beworriedabout…inone’sspare/freetimebekind/friendlytobestrictwithhelpotherssaythankyouto…havefun/enjoyoneself/haveagoodtimeplentyof+C/Uworryabout/beworriedaboutasksb.forhelp/turntosb.forhelp/callsb.forhelpbepopularwith…sharesth.withsb.knowlittle/muchabout…31/71十一、作文万能短语do/tryone’sbesttov…be/feelsorryfor…helpsb.(to)dosth./withsth.in/duringclassbefore/afterclassteachsb.todosth.32/71*词数80左右，不少于70词，不多于 100词。不能使用其它颜色笔、修正液等可被 视为标识工具；绝对不能透露真 实信息。33/71四、Languageerrorsinwriting

纠错34/71１.be多出或缺乏I’menjoystudyingEnglish.

Itbadforourhealth.

IenjoystudyingEnglish.Itisbadforourhealth.35/712.时态错误Atthattime,theyalwayshelpmewithmyEnglish.

IhadenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImeethim.

Atthattime,theyalwayshelpedmewithmyEnglish.IhaveenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImethim.36/71Myfavoritesportisrun.

Ithinkdosomesportsisveryimportantforus.

Myfavoritesportisrunning.Ithinkdoingsomesportsisveryimportantforus.37/713.非谓语动词错误Ilikedosports.IwishtakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.

IwishtotakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.Ilikedoingsports.38/714.副词位置错误Iverythankher.

Iverylikefootball.

Ithankherverymuch.Ilikefootballverymuch.39/715.代词错误Theyaregoodforusbody.

Ihopemealsobecomeabasketballplayer.

They

are

goodforourbody.IhopeIalsobecomeabasketballplayer.40/716.缺介词或介词错误IthankhimverymuchhelpmestudyEnglish.

Heevencametomyhomeforhelpme.

IthankhimverymuchforhelpingmestudyEnglish.Heevencametomyhometohelpme.41/71Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealthy.IhaveevergivedupEnglish.(单词错误)(动词P.P.错误)Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealth.IhaveevergivenupEnglish.7.其它错误42/71It’sgoodformyhealth.Notonlymakemebrave,butalsomakemebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itimportantforyoutotakeanhourtosportseveryday.It’sgoodformyhealth.Itnotonlymakesmebrave,butalsomakesmebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itisimportantforyoutospendanhouronsportseveryday.（缺主语）（句型错误）43/71Let’spractise.44/71Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling（拼写）（others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.Ican’tforgetthatdaybecause5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillrememberitforever.!Capitalletter（大小写）Punctuation（标点符号）45/716.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.remember7.Ithoughtitishungry.was8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom.tidies9.Howunforgettablethisthingsis!thingFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Tense（时态）Verbagreement(主谓一致)Wordform(词形）46/7110.Inmyfather’shelp,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.Withmyfather’shelp,11.Tocutalongstorytoshort,….Tocutalongstoryshort,…12.IwenttoShihuabyabuswithmymother.bybus13.Mymothertoldmedon’tgiveitup.toldmenottogiveitupFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Phrases(短语和固定搭配）14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.sawanoldladylying…47/7116.Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse.playedwith15.Isatonaseat,listeningmusic.listeningto17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow.Weallwereafraid.wereallFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Missingwords（漏词）18.Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands.withthehouse19.Itistiredwork.tiringWords’order（词序）Usingwrongword（选词错误）48/7122.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.carefully21.OneSundaymorning,IwenttoShihuabybusandsatbesidemewasagirl.IwenttoShihuaonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.ChineseEnglish（中式英语）Inmylife,manythingshappened.20.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.49/71Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,so50/711.是否有大小写错误(capitallettersorlowercaseletters)是否有拼写错误(spellingmistakes)是否有标点错误(punctuationmistakes)4.是否有语法错误(grammarmistakes)主谓是否一致动词时态语态使用是否正确词组搭配是否合乎习惯

…CommonErrorsinEnglishwriting51/71五、整齐性

1.字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。2.字迹或太大，显得不紧凑；或太小，太密，看不清，占不满格。3字数太多，显得太罗嗦，出格就看不见了。字数太少，空太多格，会被误认为字数不够，不会得高分。52/714规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写53/7154/7155/71以“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字左右英语短文，提醒以下：1孙老师，25岁，1.65米,打扮入时。2关心热爱学生。3教学方法生动有趣。4与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；六、实战训练56/71Pre-writing1.审：2.定：“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字作文记叙文，第三人称，普通现在时篇章结构：三段式首段：个人简历正文：教学特色尾段：作者评价57/71

befashionable

lovestudents,andcareaboutthestudents

belivelyandinterestinggetonwellwith…,bepopularwith…Writing:3.列打扮入时2.热爱学生，关心学生3.生动有趣4.相处融洽，深受欢迎58/71MyEnglishTeacherMissSunisourEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Sheis1.65meterstall.①Sheisveryfashionable.②Shelovesherstudents.Shecaresaboutus.③Herlessonsareinterestingandlively;④MissSungetsonwellwithus.Sheisverypopular.Weallloveherandherteaching!Writing

4.连：连词成句，连句成篇59/71复写Rewriting：5、美——润色丰富关键点；

6、改——查错改错7、抄——修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在要求地方。60/71WritingMyEnglishTeacherMissSunisourEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Sheis1.65meterstall.①She

isveryfashionable.②Shelovesherstudents.Shecaresaboutus.③Herlessonsareinterestingandlively;④MissSungetsonwellwithus.Sheisverypopular.Weallloveherandherteaching!61/7162/71homework63/71请依据关键点提醒，用英文写一篇简明介绍四川汶川大地震中舍己救人英雄谭千秋老师短文。字数100词左右。内容关键点以下：1． 谭老师个人简况：1957年生于湖南；大学毕业后，2． 在四川德阳一所中学教书；外表严厉，3． 对学生要求严格，4． 深爱学生。5． 谭老师英雄事迹：汶川地震时，他在上课。教学楼坍塌时刻，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身，4名学生得救。6． 你感受及愿望。参考词语：1.graduatefromauniversity,大学毕业2.bestrictwith…,对……严格3.theWenchuanearthquake,汶川地震4.collapse,坍塌5.deeds,事迹64/71三段式：首段：正文：结尾：谭老师个人介绍谭老师英雄事迹作者感受和愿望65/71列出7个内容关键点：

1）外表严厉；2）对学生要求严格；3）深爱学生；4）地震时在上课；5）教学楼坍塌时，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身；6）感受；7）愿望。Helooksserious.He’sstrictwithhisstudents.Heloveshisstudentsdeeply.Hewasgivinglessonsatthatmoment.Whentheteachingbuildingcallapse