2024八年级英语下册Unit5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame写作能力提升练课件新版人教新目标版

写作能力提升练UNIT5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame?初中三年，我们都有一些难以忘怀的经历。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“AnUnforgettable（难忘的）Experience”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。1.Whatwastheexperience?2.Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?要求:1.词数：不少于80词；2.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥。［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。1.我突然摔倒伤了我的腿。Isuddenly________________andhurtmyleg.2.她决定帮助我学习。She______________helpmewithmystudy.【遣词造句】就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。felldowndecidedto3.当朋友们处于困境时，我们应当帮助他们。Whenfriendsare____________,weshouldhelpthem.4.在李华的帮助下，我没有落后于其他学生。Ididn’tfallbehindtheotherstudents_______________ofLiHua.introublewiththehelp［巧妙衔接］用so,soon,fromthenon等串联事件经过。第三段使用了谚语“afaithfulfriendishardtofind（益友难得）”，深化了主题。AnUnforgettableExperienceLookingbackonthepastthreeyears,everyonehassomeunforgettableexperiences.Onarainyday,Isuddenlyfelldownandhurtmyleg.SoIhadtostayinhospitalforoveronemonth.SoonmyclassmateLiHuacametoseeme.Shedecidedtohelpmewithmystudy.Fromthenon,shecametoteachmeevery［连句成篇］weekend.Iwassomoved.Ididn’tfallbehindtheotherstudentswiththehelpofLiHua.Ithankedheralot.NowIknowthatnomatterwhathappens,afaithfulfriendishardtofind.Whenfriendsareintrouble,weshouldhelpthem.上个星期日下午三点，我市突然下起大暴雨，你和朋友们正在做着不同的事情。请你根据下面表格的内容，写一篇不少于80词的短文。NameDoingPlaceJulia看书城市图书馆Jim等公共汽车在公交站TimandMike观看动物表演在动物园里PeterandI打电脑游戏在我家里____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Aheavyrainstormhitourcityat3：00p．m.lastSunday.Myfriendsinthecityweredoingdifferentthingsatthattime.Juliawasreadinginthecitylibrary.Shecouldhearstrongwindsoutsideandtherainbeatheavilyagainstthewindows.Jimwaswaitingforthebusatthebusstop.Hedidn'ttakeanumbrellawithhim，sohewasallwet.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TimandMikewerewatchingtheanimalshowsinthezoo.Luckily,theyfoundsomewheretogetoutoftherain.PeterandIwereplayingcomputergamesinmyhome.However，becauseoftheloudnoise