writingandlanguagepoints.ppt

1、Revision 1.My parents are very well, said Tom. 2. Tom asked me, Are you going to learn English? . 3.I have given up smoking. said my brother. 4.The old man said, I dont know where to go. 5.He asked the boy, who are you? 6.He asked, Tom, where did you read it? 7.The child always asks her mother, Am I

2、 a good girl?,如 何 写 建 议 信,Section Guided Writing,【写作技巧】 建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。建议信有可能是写给个人，或某个组织和机构，要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least（最后）等依次陈述建议，具体为： 首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。 中段：应该首先肯定

3、对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。 尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌，使读者容易接受。,【常用句型】 (1) 建议信开头常用句式： I am writing to express my views concerning (prep.关于) . You have asked for my advice about.and I will try to make some suggestions. (2)表达建议常用句式： I think the most suitable.for you is. I woul

4、d like to suggest that. Youd better./Its better to. As far as I am concerned（就我而言），./In my opinion，. For one thing（一方面），., for another.（另一方面），. If I were you, I would. It seems to me that you could. （依我看来你可以.）,(3)建议信结尾常用句式： I think it would be more beneficial (adj.有利的) if you could. I believe you wi

5、ll take my advice into account. （我相信你会考虑我的建议。） I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. （如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。） I will be ready for further discussing this matter into details.（我时刻准备着就此事进行更详尽的讨论.）,【写作范例】假设你是健

6、康节目主持人Dr. Helper，一名叫王莉的中学生来信说，她所在班级近视的学生超过一半，而且大多数学生的视力越来越差，她感到非常担心。请你针对她所说的情况，结合下面要点，用英语给王莉回信，告诉她应该如何保护视力。 1. 注意让眼睛休息； 2. 坚持做眼保健操 (每天至少两次)； 3. 定期做视力检查 (每年至少一次)； 4. 卧床或乘车时不要看书； 5. 不要用手揉眼睛 (rub your eyes)； 6. 如无必要，不要戴有色眼镜。 注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 词数100左右。,disagree vi.,(1) 与不一致，不符合 What he says disagrees w

7、ith the fact. 他说的与事实不符。 (2) 不同意，意见不同 They disagree with each other over/on this plan. 他们在这个计划上意见不一致。 (3) （食物、气候等）不适合 The food disagrees with my taste. 这食物不合我口味。 The climate here disagrees with me. 这儿的气候对我不适合。,1) disagreement n. 争论；分歧 (2) agree vi. 赞同；同意 agree with 与意见相同；适合；与一致,(1)The look on his fac

8、e suggested that he _(disagree) what we said. 【答案】disagreed with,fall in love (with) 爱上某人/某物,(1) fall in love (with sb.) “爱上（某人）”，属于表示瞬间动作的动词短 语，在肯定句中不能与表示一段时间的时间状语连用。 (2) be in love (with sb.) “与某人相爱”，属于状态性动词短语，动作可 以延续。,(1)In fact, _(love) at first sight doesnt necessarily mean forever love. 事实上，一见

9、钟情并不意味着永久的爱。 【答案】falling in love (2)If youre really _(love) art, you wont mind hard work. 【答案】in love with,join in参加，加入 .to join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideas. （教材P7） 参加讨论并且对别人的想法表现出兴趣。 May I join in your conversation? 我可以加入你们的谈话吗? Will you join us in playing basketball? 你愿

10、意加入我们一起打篮球吗?,辨析：join, join in, take part in与attend (1) join指参加某组织、团体、党派、社团、俱乐部等，并成为其中的一员。 (2) join in指参加正在进行着的活动，如游戏、讨论、辩论、谈话等。 (3) take part in指参加群众性活动，并在其中发挥一定的作用。 (4) attend为正式用语，指参加会议、仪式、婚礼、葬礼、上课、上学、听报告 等。重在强调“参与”的动作，不强调参加者的作用。,(1)My wish is _(join) the army after graduation. 【答案】to join (2)With

11、 more and more people _(join) discussing the problem, the meeting hall was noisy and we had to speak loudly in order to be heard. 【答案】joining us in (3)Im sorry. I have a meeting _(attend). So I have to go now. 【答案】to attend (4)The players were performing very well in the match in which they _(take)

12、for the first time. 【答案】took part,“find +it + adj .+to do sth.”结构,She found it difficult to settle and calm down in the hiding place, because she was concerned about whether they would be discovered. （教材P4） 她发现在藏身地很难安定和平静下来，因为她担心他们会被人发现。 Although I try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard

13、to make good friends with them. （教材P7 ） 尽管我设法与同学们交谈，但我还是发现很难跟他们成为好朋友。 点拨：以上两句都使用到了复合宾语结构 “find +it +adj.+ to do sth.”，其中it是形式宾语，代替后面真正的宾语(不定式)。类似的动词还有make， think， believe， consider， feel等。,She thinks it wrong to refuse his invitation. 她认为拒绝他的邀请是不对的。 I find it quite pleasant to work with you. 我觉得和你一起

14、工作相当愉快。,在这种复合宾语结构中，除了形容词可以用作宾语补足语外，还可以用名词、现在分词、过去分词、介词短语、动词不定式、to be等。,When he came into the classroom, he found other students already reading. 当他走进教室时，他发现其他学生正在读书。 When he got back home he found his house broken in. 他回到家时，发现他的家被人闯入过了。 We are very happy to find everything in order. 我们发现一切井然有序，很高兴。,

15、(1)The fine weather _（possible）for us to go for an outing next week. We all feel happy. 【答案】makes it possible (2)I _(hard) to calm her down, for she was too excited. 我发现难以让她平静下来，因为她太兴奋了。 【答案】found it hard (3)It was the first time that I_ (find) so easy to learn English. 我第一次发现学英语如此容易。 【答案】had found

16、it,“with+宾语+宾补”结构,Mother asked her if she was very hot with so many clothes on. （教材P5） 妈妈问她穿那么多衣服是否很热。 点拨：本句中的with so many clothes on属于“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构。此结构常用作后置定语或作原因、方式、伴随等状语。它的构成方式主要有以下几种：,with+宾语+现在分词。with之后的宾语与现在分词之间是逻辑上的主谓 关系，用现在分词表示主动的或正在进行的动作。 He left ,with the boy crying. 他离开了，那个男孩在哭。,(2) w

17、ith+宾语+过去分词。with之后的宾语与过去分词之间是逻辑上的动宾关系，用过去分词表示被动的或已经完成的动作。 He left, with the book finished. 他离开了，书读完了。 (3) with+宾语+不定式。动词不定式的逻辑主语是句子的主语，尽管宾补与宾语之间是被动关系，不定式仍用主动式而不用被动式。动词不定式常表示未发生的动作。 With a lot of things to buy, he decided to go shopping. 有很多东西要买，所以我决定去购物。 (4) with+宾语+形容词。 He left, with the door open.

18、 他离开了，门开着。,(5) with+宾语+副词。 He left, with the light on. 他离开了，灯亮着。 (6) with+宾语+介词短语。 He left, with a book in his hand. 他离开了，手里拿着一本书。,(1)With the world _(change) fast, we have something new to deal with all by ourselves every day. 【答案】changing,(2)With all the tickets _（sell）, we had to wait for the nex

19、t weeks show. 【答案】 sold out (3)With so much food _(taste), you can enjoy yourself in the Food Festival. 【答案】to taste,have trouble with sth./(in) doing sth.,I am having some trouble with my classmates at the moment. （教材P6） 现在我和班上的同学相处有些困难。 点拨：have trouble with +n. 或have trouble (in) doing sth. 在(做)方面

20、有麻烦(困难)。 I hope you wont have any trouble with the work. 我希望你在做这份工作时不会遇到什么困难。 He has much trouble in using English. 在英语运用方面他有很大困难。,have difficulty with sth./(in) doing sth. 做某事有困难 have no trouble (in) doing sth. 毫不费力地做某事,“助动词do+动词原形”强调谓语动词 I do want to change this situation, but I dont know how. （教材

21、P7） 我确实想改变这种状况，但我不知道怎么改变。 点拨：do在此用作助动词，用来强调后面的谓语动词。do和does可用来强调一般现在时的肯定谓语，does用于单数第三人称，其他人称用do；did可用来强调一般过去时的肯定谓语。 I do love you. 我真的爱你。 He does live here but he did go home last night. 他的确住在这里，但昨天晚上他的确回家了。 He did come yesterday. 他昨天确实来过。,(1)Do _(careful) when crossing the street. 【答案】be careful (2)

22、If you have a job, do _(work) and finally youll succeed. 【答案】work hard,.重点单词 根据所给的英文解释写出下列单词。 _: to decide or arrange sth. finally; to put an end to a disagreement 2. _: to be badly affected by a disease, pain, sadness etc.; to experience sth. unpleasant 3._ : to get well again after being ill 4._ :

23、 not to agree 5._ : feeling or showing thanks 6. _: a small piece of advice 7. _: to give and receive sth. in exchange 8. _: one thing on the list of things,settle suffer recover disagree grateful tip swap item,.重点短语 1. 遭受，患病 _ 2. 对厌烦 _ 3. 将（东西）装箱打包 _ 4. 与相处；进展 _ 5. 爱上某人 _ 6. 参加，加入 _ 7. 做某事有麻烦 _ 8.

24、与某人交换某物 _,suffer from get tired of pack up get along with fall in love with sb. join in have trouble (in) doing sth. swap sth. with sb.,【写作范例】 Dear Wang Li, You are so kind and considerate to care about your classmates. Yes, What you are concerned about is a very common phenomenon: More and more teenagers wear glasses nowadays, which does make parents and teachers worried a lot. As an experienced doctor, I am very happy to offer my advice as follows: First of all ,I advise you to let your eyes rest a