2016-2017学年高一英语公开课：短文改错 （全国一等奖）

短文改错 Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Learn from mistakes. 高考短文改错的考察方式 Unnecessary word 1. I can go to home now. 2. I like playing piano. 3. I am fond at English. Missing word Wrong word the of 注意： 每句中最多两处错。 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 多词 、 缺词 、 错词 比例通常为： 1 ： 1 ： 8 1.通读全文 ,掌握大意。 2.细读理解 ,逐句分析。 3.复读全文 ,验证答案。 四不改原则 1. 单词拼写不改 2. 大小写不改 3. 词序不改 4. 标点符号不改 做题步骤 动词形 ， 名词数 ； 还要注意 形 和 副 ； 代词格 ，细领悟； 介词短语 须关注； 习惯用法 要记住； 冠词连词 常光顾。 改错口诀 请先念一遍 “咒语 ”吧！ 一、 动词形 1. 动词的 时态 和 语态 错误 Yesterday I go to see a film. went The thief was catch by a policeman. caught 2. 主谓不一致 的错误 My dream school look like a big garden. looks 非谓语动词 doing done to do 3. 非谓语动词 错误 主动、正在进行 被动、已完成 目的、将来 I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing. to Swim is good for our health. Swimming After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. (2013四川 ) thinking I was really disappointing at the result of the game. (2011陕西卷 ) disappointed 人感到 的 令人 的adj. -ed -ing practice 1.She was scared and begin to cry. 2.I am looking forward to see you soon. 3.I found the game excited. 4.Do sports is good for our health. 5.He went home with all the work finish. began seeing exciting Doing finished 指 名词单、复数形式 的用法错误。 二、 名词数 I made three new friend here. (2015四川 ) friends I need some more informations. information 常考的不可数名词有： information, advice, knowledge, progress, furniture, news, fun Air pollution has already become a very seriously problem. serious Dad and I were extreme worried. extremely 三、还要注意 形 和 副 1. 形容词 和 副词 的误用 。 2. 比较级 和 最高级 的混用或误用 。 Tom is tallest than John. taller adj.的用法 ： 作定语 (修饰名词 ), 表语 (放在 be 动词、感观动词等后 ), 宾补 adv.的用法 ： 作状语 (修饰 v./ adj./adv./整 个句子 ) Unfortunately, all the people on the car died. 1.The teachers are kind and helpfully. 2.I found the test difficult, but I tried hardly to do it. 3.He asked angry who had broken the bottle. 4.The patient is recovering fast than expected. helpful Practice hard angrily faster 四 、 代词格 ，细领悟 1.人称代词，物主代词，反身代词 oneself的使用 (指代的人或事物前后 不一致的错误 )。 2.人称代词的主格和宾格。 3.it作形式主语、形式宾语或指代时 有缺漏。 4.不定代词 both, all, either, neither, none等的使用。 We must find ways to protect your environment. (2015全国 1卷 ) our /the Five minutes later, Tony saw him parents. (2015全国 2卷 ) his He found difficult to learn math well. it 五 、 介词短语 须关注 ， 习惯用法 要记住 。 主要考查 固定短语 ， 固定介词 的搭配。 Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.(2015全国 1卷 ) with Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm goes off. (2014四川 ) about He visited his grandfather on last Sunday. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in. (2014浙江 )in 六 、 冠词连词 常光顾 English is important language in communication. an The teacher was angry because we had a same answers in the test. the 1. 冠词 a, an和 the的用法错误。 2. 连词 but, and, or, so和 although的逻 辑性用法错误。 There the air is clean or the mountains are green. and I like the coat so I cant afford it. but This is my cousin Tom, that is a doctor. who Yesterday we discussed when we can do to keep fit. what 3. 状语从句 、 定语从句 和 名词性从句 引导词 的使用。 practice 1.Soon the firefighters came and put out a fire. 2.English is the widely used language in the world. 3. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. 4. Though I tried hard, but I failed. the a or 动词形 ， 名词数 ； 还要注意 形 和 副 ； 代词格 ，细领悟； 介词短语 须关注； 习惯用法 要记住； 冠词连词 常光顾。 改错口诀 Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teachers office. 实战演练 difficult hard asked thinking both The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didnt chea