高中英语写作 素材超级资料包新人教版必修1

-精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 1 高中英语写作素材超级资料包新人 教版必修 1 高考英语书面表达分类模板 all the time. What a wonderful weekend we had! 叙事类 We enjoyed ourselves very much. 外出活动、欣赏美景 Through these out- of class activities we can We decided to go out for a picnic. learn a lot of things that cant be learned I had a pleasant outing with some of my in class. classmates today. Although we were tired, we felt very happy. Early in the morning, we set off for the farm I think its our duty to cover our country With the help of the policeman, -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 2 we found the owner of the bag. A clever idea came to his mind. Then he put his idea into practice. I left the hospital without giving my name. This may be the most unforgettable experience of my life. He felt happy because he had done a good deed. He won the first prize in the physics contest. He devoted all his life to education. He is loved and respected by us all. She is considered as one of the best teachers year by year. With his help, we have made great progress in our studies. for a visit. with green. When we reached the farm, we were given a warm 意外事故、天灾人祸 welcome. I was walking along the street when a They showed us around the farm , where we saw many kinds One day -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 3 something unpleasant happened.of plants. The girl fell off her bike and was badly hurt. We caught sight of a stream with green grass Fortunately, the injured people were sent to and beautiful flowers on both sides. hospital without delay. We were completely amazed at the wonder and An elderly man was hit by a car while he was the greatness of nature. He fell down to the ground with a cry. We jumped and shouted like innocent children. It was soon found out that the driver had Once on the top of the hill/The moment we got drunk too much wine before driving. to the top of the hill, we were deeply The accident delayed all the traffic for an struck/attracted by the beautiful scenery. hour and caused the damage of $80,000 How we enjoyed the beautiful views from the Lots of people lost their lives in the top ! floods. After being divided into groups, we -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 4 set to The big floods, which occurred in 1998, work at once. caused great losses. Some of us were getting water, some A big fire broke out in an office building cutting the meat and vegetables, and others in a busy street. The cause of the fire has sitting on the grass enjoying music. been unknown. It is being investigated.Birds were singing sweetly in the trees and The fire lasted about two hours and was butterflies were dancing gracefully in the finally put out in the afternoon. garden/fields. As a result, the three-storied building was When lunch time came, we sat on the grassland, destroyed, 50 people were killed, and more eating and drinking happily. than 200 were injured. The meal was so delicious that we enjoyed it Up to the present, the cause of the accident very much. is still unknown. We sang and danced together to the music. -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 5 助人为乐、 舍己救人 Three hours had passed before we knew it. Without thinking about her own safety, she The time passed quickly before we knew it. rushed out and pulled him back. It was time for us to go back when the sun He hurried to school, reaching the started to go down. schoolyard quite out of breath. I spent the whole afternoon with our cousins, She told the teacher what had happened to her enjoying the fine scenery and fresh air in on the way to school. the country. The blind man was out of danger, but she lost At about four oclock in the afternoon, we her life./got injured. said goodbye to them He was praised for what he had done. At four oclock in the afternoon we had to She offered us some gifts, but we refused to return. accept them. They came out to see us until we -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 6 disappeared They all thanked him for his help. in the distance. Wondering what to do, Tom saw a policeman. On the way back, we were laughing and talking We hurried to the policeman for help. It was not until then that I really understood the meaning of the proverb: “ Helping others is the source of happiness.” He will always be remembered as a hero. 人物写照、生平事迹 He was from a poor peasants family. He is about 1.72 meters in height By the age of 14, he had taught himself advanced mathematics. She is already in her fifties, but she looks younger for her age. He is short and thin with a pair of thick glasses. She is tall and slim with big dark eyes and black hair. My English teacher, Miss Zhang, is -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 7 a middle-aged woman. She often helps those who have difficulty in doing their homework. With her help, I have caught up with my classmates. At the age of eight he became a member of the diving team in Guangdong Province. A few years later, he won a gold medal at the 11th Asian Games and became a world Champion.He has his own way of teaching. He has much knowledge and good at teaching. All these years he has been working hard. Many times he has been praised for his excellent work. He gets on very well with us students. He is not only our good teacher but also our good friend. He is honest and always ready to help others. Thats why we made him monitor. We all considered her pronunciation to be the best of all. -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 8 He is a worthy person for us to learn from. He graduated from Qinghua University in 1982. An American company wanted to employ him with high pay, but he refused. He received a doctors degree in 1988. He is strict with us and careful in his work. He will always be remembered as a great leader, a wise and warm-hearted man. He is regarded as a fighter by most of the people in the world. Miss Zhang is such a good teacher that we all love her very much. Such was Elbert Einstein, a man of great achievements.议论文 规劝恶习、见解评说 Different people have got different attitudes towards failure. Different people have different opinions about smoking. Opinions are divided on the -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 9 question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged. There are always two aspects to any situation. Everything lives with opposite forces. The same can be said about modern technology, such as Internet. Some people seem to think/believe/hold the view that smoking is an enjoyment. But in fact, smoking does great harm to peoples health. We must try to persuade people to give up smoking. It is investigated that 30% of the computers are used to play games. According to a recent investigation, ?Playing games on computers can be a waste of time. -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 10 Its been proved that early rising can make people full of energy. Early rising helps to keep fit. As the English proverb says, “Early to bed and early to rise, make a man healthy, wealthy and wise.” Experts suggest that people should have regular sports every day. Study shows that cigarette smoking can cause cancers. In addition to health problems, there are other reasons to give up smoking. From the above, I come to the conclusion that smoking does great harm to our health. From now on, we ought to break away from the bad habit and form a good one. Millions of smokers die from illness caused by smoking tobacco. My suggestions are as follows. As future builders of our country, we should make full use of our -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 11 time to work hard ,and do things to benefit our country. To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer allthe questions correctly. 一二三原则领导讲话总是第一部 分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部 分、第一点? 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条 理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这 些关键性的“ 标签” 来判定你的文章是否 结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单， 只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的 几个要点前就清楚了。 first, second, third, last 附加但是 小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room 如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的 情况，当你再讲 小姐走出房间应该说： sail out of the room 某个人的时候，她会 插一句说，我昨天见过他；小孩走出房 间应该说：dance out of the room 或者说， -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 12 就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我 老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room 们的话里面，那就是定语从句和 同位语从句或者 所以多用实词，少用 虚词，文章将会大放异彩！是插入语。 多变句式原则 The man whom you met yesterday is a friend 加法 of mine. 都希望写下很长的句子，像个老 外似的，可就是 I dont enjoy that book you are reading.怕写错，怎么办，最保 险的写长句的方法就是这 Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is 些，可以在任何 句子之间加 and,但最好是前后的 easy- going.句子又先后关系或者并列关系。 比如说：其实很简单，同位语-要解释 的东西删除后不影 As we all know, spending too much time on TV may have bad effects on our work and health, especially on our eyes. Therefore, we should be aware of when to watch, how to watch, and what to watch. There are many ways of keeping -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 13 good health. Nowadays, taxies bring people a lot of convenience, but also cause a lot of trouble. Regulations should be laid down for taxi drivers. Now more and more students are getting near-sighted in schools, because they have paid little attention to the care of their eyes. 写作的 七项基本原则 一、长短句原则工作还得一张一 驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一 个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到 画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句 放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题： As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿 挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！ 强烈建议：在文章第一段用一长 -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 14 一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分， 要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在 阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句 群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文 章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。主题 句原则国有其君，家有其主，文章也要 有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首” 之 感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意 把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们 稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一 定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头或 者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无 事！ 特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒 险的！俗） firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally the first, the second, the third, the last in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly 5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 6）to start with, next, in addition, -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 15 finally 7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least 8）most important of all, moreover, finally 9）on the one hand, on the other hand 10）for one thing, for another thing 建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平 时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！短语优 先原则 写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果 使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语 会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你 的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识 的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如 果发现亮点精彩的短语，那么你的文 章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维 短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是 一个办法！比如：I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it. I want it. 可以用短语表达：I am -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 16 looking forward to it. 这样字数明显增加， 表达也更准确。 五、多实少虚原则原因很简单， 写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不 要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词， 少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那 些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的 时候，不应该之说 nice 这样空洞的词， 应该使用一些诸如 generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类 I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我 们可以用一个超级句式： Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的 短语可以用：besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover 转折 批评某人缺点 的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他 的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这 种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容 易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候， 只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者 之间用个专这次就够了。Thecar was -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 17 quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语：despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 因果昨天在街上我看到 了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我 们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我 们成为了朋友? 可见，讲故事的时候我 们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么， 所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实 这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！The snow began to fall, so we went home. 更 多短语：then, therefore, consequently, accordingly,hence, as a result, for this reason, so that 失衡句有些人脑袋大，身 体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽 然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真 的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注 意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就 更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其 实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句 的变形。举例：This is what I can -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 18 do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成 如下的复杂成分： 响整个句子的构成； 定语从句借用之前的关键词并且用其 重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是 whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行 词之前。6）排比文学作品中最吸引人 的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章 更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一 个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个 个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短 语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之 势！ Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.要 -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 19 想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不 可！挑战极限原则既然十挑战极限，必 然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！ 原理：在学生的文章中，很少发 现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单， 只要花上 5 分钟的时间看看就可以领会， 它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求 主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如： The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that ofChina.如果您可一些出这样的句子， 不得高分才怪！ 三、文章主体段落的 三大杀手锏一、举实例思维短路，举实 例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个 方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示一 个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要 我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一， 尽管举例子！In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possiblesimulative factor in making ads, -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 20 such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型：To take?as an example, One example is?, Another exampleis?, for example 做比较 方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的； 又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的； 世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树 叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会 发现二者的相同点 2)表转折； in next yearin daughter？What things are in other homes，by contrast although though yet First，let me tell you somethingmore I wonderHowat the same time but despite the fact that about myselfmoreEvening came down downWe practise for three times every week 为需删去的词） in contrast nevertheless even though for all -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 21 and often watch football match on TV 连 词及与并置问题 that togetherfor 连词 连接的前后两部分是否合乎逻辑；并列 连词 notwithstanding on the contrary however in Now I cant watch much television，but 所连接的前后两部分结 构是否等同。这两点是解 spite of a few years ago I was used to watch it every 答 与连词及其相关问题的高考英语改错题 的关 on the other hand otherwise instead still ni