高中英语 module 2 no drugssection ⅴ writing-回复电子邮件教学案 外研版必修2

Module 2 No DrugsSection Writing-回复电子邮件一般来说，回复邮件要根据所收到的邮件具体内容进行清楚明了的答复，并附带简单的问候。语言要简洁，态度要诚恳，格式要正确。一、基本结构首先要认真阅读对方邮件的具体内容，找出对方提出的问题，然后有针对性地评价对方的观点，提出自己的观点，具体写作步骤为：第一段：收到邮件的心情、时间等。第二段：答复邮件所提的问题。评价对方的观点是否正确、合理。给出理由，可以灵活地通过举例进行论证。第三段：提出自己的观点和建议等。总结并问候。二、增分佳句1Im happy/glad/pleased to receive your email dated by May 1st.很高兴收到你五一发来的电子邮件。2Im sorry not to answer/reply to your email in time because I have been busy these days.很抱歉没有及时回复你的电子邮件，因为这些日子我一直很忙。3Im sorry to learn that you did not do well in the entrance examination.得知你在入学考试中发挥不好，我很难过。4Im glad to receive your email saying that you have been offered a good job in a big company. Congratulations to you.我很高兴收到你的邮件，邮件中说你被一家大公司聘用了，祝贺你。5In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.最后，如果你发现我的建议有用我会非常高兴。6Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.盼望很快收到你的来信。7Please give my regards to your family.请代我向你的家人问好。8If you have some more questions, please let me know.如果你还有问题，请告诉我。题目要求假如你叫周凯，你的美国笔友Paul给你发来一封电子邮件，在邮件中Paul询问你在中国关于吸烟的情况。请你给Paul回一封邮件，内容如下：1中国大部分人已认识到吸烟的危害，越来越多的人已开始戒烟；2中国还没有在公共场所禁止吸烟的法律，但有多种标志提醒人们不要吸烟；3希望政府采取措施帮助人们戒烟。要求：1.邮件需包括全部要点；2词数100左右；3可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为电子邮件的回复，属于应用文；2确定人称：本文的主要人称为第一和第三人称；3确定时态：本文主要用现在时，包括一般现在时和现在完成时。二、构思第一部分，引入：说明写邮件的目的。第二部分，阐述：介绍中国吸烟的状况。第三部分，结尾：总结全文并表达愿望或期待。第二步：核心词汇想周全1as_far_as_I_know/as_far_as_I_can_see据我所知2do/cause_harm_to/be_harmful_to/damage_for 对造成危害3all_kinds_of/a_variety_of/various 各种各样的4as_a_result/therefore/hence 结果5decide/make_up_ones_mind 决定6give_up_smoking/quit_smoking/abandon_smoking 戒烟7ban_smoking/no_smoking 禁止吸烟8in_public_places 在公共场所9take_measures/take_steps/take_action 采取措施10keep_in_touch/stay_in_touch/keep_in_contact 保持联系第三步：由词扩句雏形现1我对我们国家的吸烟情况有所了解，非常愿意回答你的问题。(and连接两个并列分句)I_have_learned_something_about_smoking_in_our_country_and_Id_like_to_answer_all_your_questions.2据我所知，越来越多的人已经意识到吸烟对健康有害。(that引导宾语从句)As_far_as_I_know,_more_and_more_people_have_realized_smoking_does_great_harm_to_health.3结果，他们决定戒烟。(主谓宾结构)As_a_result,_they_have_decided_to_give_up_smoking.4很遗憾我们没有在公共场所戒烟的法律。(that引导主语从句；which引导定语从句)It_is_a_pity_that_we_dont_have_a_law_which_bans_smoking_in_public_places.5有标志提醒人们在公共场所禁止吸烟。(现在分词作定语)There_are_signs_reminding_people_to_limit_smoking_in_public_places._6我相信政府会采取措施帮助人们这样做。(that引导宾语从句，that可省略)Im_sure_our_government_will_take_measures_to_help_people_to_do_so.7那就是我所了解的所有我们国家的吸烟状况。(that引导定语从句，that可省略)Thats_all_I_know_about_smoking_in_our_country.8我希望这会对你有所帮助。(that引导宾语从句)I_hope_that_it_will_be_helpful_to_you._第四步：句式升级造亮点1用make up ones mind改写句3As_a_result,_they_have_made_up_their_minds_to_give_up_smoking.2用现在分词短语作定语改写句4，并用but与句5连接起来It_is_a_pity_that_we_dont_have_a_law_banning_smoking_in_public_places,_but_there_are_signs_reminding_people_to_limit_smoking_in_public_places.3用主语的省略改写句8Hope/Hoping_that_it_will_be_helpful_to_you._第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear_Paul，Glad_to_hear_from_you._I_have_learned_something_about_smoking_in_our_country_and_Id_like_to_answer_all_your_questions.As_far_as_I_know,_more_and_more_people_have_realized_smoking_does_great_harm_to_health._As_a_result,_they_have_made_up_their_minds_to_give_up_smoking.It_is_a_pity_that_we_don t_have_a_law_banning_smoking_in_public_places,_but_there_are_signs_reminding_people_to_limit_smoking_in_public_places._I m_sure_our_government_will_take_measures_to_help_people_to_do_so.That s_all_I_know_about_smoking_