高中英语 module 6 the world’s cultural heritage section ⅴ writing-介绍文化遗产教学案 外研版选修7

Module 6 The Worlds Cultural Heritage Section Writing-介绍文化遗产一、基本结构介绍文化遗产时，一般会涉及以下几个方面：1遗产的名称、地点；2其基本历史情况；3其作为文化遗产的地位及特点；4对文化遗产进行的保护等。二、注意事项写作时要注意以下几个方面：1整理材料时，要进行综合分析，把握素材，分清主次，敢于取舍，不求面面俱到；2时态的转换：以一般现在时为主，辅以一般过去时、一般将来时等；3行文时，力求通篇连贯，表达简明扼要，语言规范；4注意使用恰当的关联词及一些常用句子。三、增分佳句1表方位There is a tall shelf on the left of my room.(on the right of, in the front of, near the window)Above the bed, there is a large painting of the blue sea.(on the right of the room)2描述国家、城市等China is located in Asia.(be situated . , be surrounded by, lie to the east of)It covers a huge area of 9,600,000 square kilometers.3描述路线When you come out of . (get to . , reach . )Take the first turning on your left.(take the path which crosses the river)Go straight on to the traffic lights and then turn right.题目要求阅读下面文字，按要求写一篇100词左右的英语短文。没有人可以相信在不久的将来我国的万里长城会消失。但目前这是一个不容置疑的事实，目前只有百分之二十的明长城还保存完好，剩下的百分之八十已经岌岌可危。如果我们不采取措施来挽救我们的长城，它将变为一片荒芜。由于对文化遗产保护意识的匮乏，很多农民将古长城的砖拆下来用于搭建别的建筑。内容包括：1简要概括短文的要点；2就“如何保护我国的文化遗产”的主题发表看法。要点包括：(1)你是如何看待我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的这种现象的；(2)保护文化遗产有何意义；(3)你对保护我国的文化遗产的建议。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为一篇说明文；2确定人称：本文主要人称为第一、三人称；3确定时态：主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一步：点出长城是中国古代文明的象征，然而现在它处于危险之中。第二步：简要叙述我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的现象，点出保护文化遗产的意义。第三步：提出保护我国文化遗产的建议。第二步：核心词汇想周全1symbol象征2civilization文明3preserve保护4existence存在5precious宝贵的6in_danger处于危险中7apart_from/besides除之外(还)8take_some_measures_to_do_sth.采取措施做某事第三步：由词扩句雏形现1长城是中国古代文明的象征，然而现在它处于危险之中，因为一些人的破坏，有一天它可能不会存在。The Great Wall is a_symbol_of_the_ancient_Chinese_civilization;_however, now it is in danger and some day there may_not_be_the_existence_of_it because of some peoples destruction.2正如我们所看到的，除了长城，其他一些珍贵的和重要的文物在我们的国家已被摧毁了。As we can see, apart_from_the_Great_Wall,_some other precious_and_important_relics in our country have been destroyed.3文化遗产是我们祖先留给我们的，也是他们智慧的象征。文化遗产在历史上发挥了非常重要的作用。Cultural heritage is left to us by our ancestors and is also a_symbol_of_their_wisdom.And it played_a_very_important_role in history.4在我看来，我们应该使一些缺乏文化知识的人知道这些历史文物的重要性。In my opinion, we should make some people who_lack_cultural_knowledge_know_about_the_importance of the historic relics.5政府应该采取措施保护它们。如果必要的话，制定法律惩罚那些故意破坏的人。The government should take_some_measures_to_preserve_them and if necessary, laws will be made to_punish_those_who_destroy_them_on_purpose.6只有这样，我们才能使我们的历史越来越丰富。We can make_our_history_richer_and_richer only in this way.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写句3Cultural_heritage_is_left_to_us_by_our_ancestors_and_is_also_a_symbol_of_their_wisdom,_which_played_a_very_important_role_in_history.2用“on the one hand . on the other hand .”连接句4和句5In_my_opinion,_on_the_one_hand,_we_should_make_some_people_who_lack_cultural_knowledge_know_about_the_importance_of_the_historic_relics._On_the_other_hand,_the_government_should_take_some_measures_to_preserve_them_and_if_necessary,_laws_will_be_made_to_punish_those_who_destroy_them_on_purpose.3用倒装句改写句6Only_in_this_way_can_we_make_our_history_richer_and_richer.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇How to preserve the cultural heritage of our country?The_Great_Wall_is_a_symbol_of_the_ancient_Chinese_civilization;_however,_now_it_is_in_danger_and_some_day_there_may_not_be_the_existence_of_it_because_of_some_peoples_destruction.What_a_pity!_As_we_can_see,_apart_from_the_Great_Wall,_some_other_precious_and_important_relics_in_our_country_have_been_destroyed._Why_are_some_people_doing_that_so_foolishly?_Because_the_local_people_are_not_aware_of_their_importance._Cultural_heritage_is_left_to_us_by_our_ancestors_and_is_also_a_symbol_of_their_wisdom,_which_played_a_very_important_role_in_history.How_should_we_preserve_our_cultural_heritage?_In_my_opinion,_on_the_one_hand,_We_should_make_some_people_who_lack_cultural_knowledge_know_about_the_importance_of_the_historic_relics._Destroying_them_means_destroying_ourselves._On_the_other_hand,_the_government_should_take_some_measures_to_preserve_them_and_if_necessary