高中英语 module 4 music section ⅴ writing-如何写关于音乐的电子邮件教学案 外研版选修6

Module 4 Music Section Writing-如何写关于音乐的电子邮件一、注意事项写email和写英文信件相差不多，主要由称呼、正文和落款三部分构成。写正文时要注意以下三点：1邮件内容从问候语开始。要根据与收件人的关系密切程度来选择适当的称呼语。2表明写作意图。在邮件开头就要澄清写作意图，这样才能更好地引出邮件的主要内容。3语言应简洁明晰。电子邮件篇幅一般不太长，因此简洁明晰的语言在表言达意中非常重要。二、增分佳句(1)邮件开头常用句式：I am glad to receive your letter.How happy I am when I know .Thanks for your letter, its my pleasure to do .(2)表达看法常用句式：As far as I am concerned .In my opinion .As for me .Personally, I prefer .My own point of view is that .(3)邮件结尾常用句式：I look forward to hearing from you.I would also like to know if you can/could .I would be grateful if you could/would .I will appreciate it if you can .题目要求现在有许多选秀活动，因此有些学生不顾学业去参加这些活动。假如你叫楚志，你的网友Mike发email给你，说他想休学一段时间去参加一个选秀节目。请回复Mike，表明你的看法。参考词汇：休学quit school偶像idolDear Mike，Ive heard that you want to quit school to attend the show SearchingforMusicTalent, _Best regards!Yours，Chu Zhi第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为应用文：电子邮件；2确定中心人称：本文的主要人称为第一、三人称；3确定主体时态：主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分：对对方的决定发表自己的否定看法；第二部分：给出否定对方的理由；第三部分：作总结，告诉对方正确的认识。第二步：核心词汇想周全1excuse借口2reasonable合理的3disagree_with不同意4be_ambitious_of/have_the_ambition_of渴望5be_designed_for为设计6in_short简言之第三步：由词扩句雏形现1我听说你想停止学习去参加音乐选秀节目，我完全不同意你。Ive heard that you want to quit school to attend the show SearchingforMusicTalent, I_disagree_with_you_totally.2我认为这不是一个很好的你放弃学习的借口。(It isn.for sb. to do sth.; give up)It_is_not_a_good_excuse_for_you_to_give_up_your_study,_I_think.3我知道现在越来越多的青少年有成为超级明星的雄心。(that宾语从句； more and more)I_know_that_nowadays_more_and_more_teenagers_have_the_ambition_of_being_superstars.4许多电视选秀节目是为能参加音乐比赛的青少年设计的。(take part in; and并列句)A_lot_of_TV_shows_are_designed_for_teenagers_and_they_can_take_part_in_lots_of_music_contests.5作为学生，我们应该做的最重要的事情是学习。(定语从句)As_students,_the_most_important_thing_we_should_be_doing_is_studying.6发展我们的业余爱好也很重要，但我们应该以一个合理的方式发展。(动名词短语作主语； but并列句)Developing_our_hobbies_is_also_important,_but_we_should_develop_them_in_a_reasonable_way.7简而言之，我们学习能懂得更多，这是很重要的。(it isadj.that .)In_short,_it_is_important_that_we_study_to_know_more.8这就是为什么我们应该关注学习。(thats why; pay attention to)That_is_why_we_should_pay_our_attention_to_our_studies.第四步：句式升级造亮点1把句2改为否定转移句I_dont_think_it_is_a_good_excuse_for_you_to_give_up_your_study.2把句4改为who引导的定语从句A_lot_of_TV_shows_are_designed_for_teenagers_who_can_take_part_in_lots_of_music_contests.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear Mike，Ive heard that you want to quit school to attend the show SearchingforMusicTalent, I_disagree_with_you_totally._I_dont_think_it_is_a_good_excuse_for_you_to_give_up_your_study.I_know_that_nowadays_more_and_more_teenagers_have_the_ambition_of_being_superstars._A_lot_of_TV_shows_are_designed_for_teenagers_who_can_take_part_in_lots_of_music_contests.As_students,_the_most_important_thing_we_should_be_doing_is_studying.Developing_our_hobbies_is_also_important,_but_we_should_develop_them_in_a_reasonable_way.In_short,_it_is_important_that_we_study_to_know_more.That_is_