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授课：焦聪聪 Advice on Writing Good CompositionsAdvice on Writing Good Compositions 2005年福建高考卷(NMET) 目前，学校存在少数学生考试试作弊现现象。某英文杂杂志社拟对拟对 此现现象向中学生 征文，标题标题 是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”请请根据下列提示用英 语语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下： 主要原因 考试试偏多、偏难难 不用功、懒懒惰 取悦父母、老师师 个人看法 作弊不对对，违违反校规规 要诚实诚实 ，努力学习习 （其他看法） 注意：1短文必须须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥发挥 ； 2短文标题标题 与开头头已为为你写好，不计计入总词总词 数； 3词词数：100左右。 4参考词汇词汇 ：作弊 cheat（v.） My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. Tables( 表格) 2006年湖北高考卷(NMET) 受某英文报报的委托，你最近对对高中生的英语阅读兴语阅读兴 趣做了一次调查调查 。请请根据以下信息，用英语语 为该报为该报 写一篇100词词左右的短文。短文的标题标题 及首句已为为你写好。 调查调查 内容：在新闻闻、故事、科普、学习习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢欢哪一种? 调查调查 范围围：湖北省的10所中学 调查对调查对 象：高中生 调查调查 人数：1200 调查调查 方式：访谈访谈 调查结调查结 果：（见见下图图） Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students Recent, survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students Charts（图表 ） 2004年湖南高考卷(NMET) 假设设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生暑假打算去乡乡村度假请请根据下面两幅图图提供 的信息，写一篇短文简简要说说明城市生活环环境的不足，重点说说明你去乡乡村度假的原因 注意：1短文应应包括图图中所提供的主要信息，井做适当发挥发挥 ，使短文内容连贯连贯 、完整； 2词词数： 100左右 Pictures 2006年全国高考卷（III） 假定你是李华, 亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办, 现 在正在招募志愿者, 你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英 文给组委会写一封申请信. 内容应包括: 个人情况：年龄、性别、学历 个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、 乐于助人、熟悉本地情况 承诺：提供最佳服务 注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 生词：申请apply (v.), application (n.)； 志愿者volunteer Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. Outline(提纲) Patterns of writing Pictures 图画作文 Charts 图表作文 Tables 表格作文 Outline 提纲作文 Divide Top sentenceTop sentence ( ( 主题句主题句 ) ) Advice on writing good compositionsAdvice on writing good compositions Top sentence Top sentence（主题句）（主题句） Coherence Coherence （连贯性连贯性） EndingEnding（opinionopinion） Top sentence Top sentence Main idea of the whole compositionMain idea of the whole composition Lead in a compositionLead in a composition Functions Ideas are clearly stated; well-organized a good composition 授课课形式一：只用英语语 优优点：有助于提高听说说能力等 缺憾：不易听懂等 结论结论： 授课课形式二：英语语、汉语汉语兼用 优优点：易于理解等 缺憾：英语语氛围围不浓浓等 结论结论： Top sentence Practice:find out the top sentence of each part 1.在英语课语课 堂上，你喜欢欢你的老师师授课时课时 只用英语语，还还是英语语、汉语汉语 兼用？某英语杂语杂 志社就此话题话题 邀请请中学生发发表看法。请请你围绕围绕 “How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”这这个 问题问题 ，参考所给给要点，选择选择 一种授课课形式，写一篇英语语短文。 I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. As we all know, a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well. Classes taught in English provide students with such an environment. When English is the only language used in the classroom, students will have more opportu- nities to practise listening and speaking. Therefore, they will be able to learn more quickly. However, there are also some problems with this teaching method. As we havent mastered enough English words, sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher. Slow learner may even lose interest in English. Practice makes perfect. To learn English well requires a lot of practice. Therefore, I like my English classes to be taught completely in English. 注意：1. 词数100120，短文开头已给出（不计词数）2. 参考词汇：atmosphere 氛围 Top sentence Practice: find out the top sentence of each part 2. 毕业前夕，你班决定给李老师送一份礼物，大家提出两条建议： (1)送影集(album)，里面有每个同学的照片；(2)送磁带，录有每个同学对老师的祝福。 请以“An Album or a Tape”为题，用英语写一篇短文。首先简述以上两条建议，然后 表明你同意其中哪一条并说明理由。 a短文必须以第一人称书写。 b词数：100词左右。 An Album or A tape How time flies! Well soon graduate and say goodbye to our dear teachers and classmates. To show our thanks to Miss Li, we have made a decision to send her a present. Will an album or a tape do? Some of us prefer an album with everyones photo inside. After graduation, there will be few chances to meet again. With an album Miss Li can see us at any time. While others think a tape will be more meaningful, on which our wishes are recorded. Each time Miss Li plays the tape, our voices will remind her of the pleasant days we have had together. In my opinion, an album is the best choice. Once Miss Li opens the album and looks at the photos one by one, the good old days are to arise in her mind. On the other hand, compared with a tape, an album will last longer. Top sentence Practice:write down the top sentence of each part (answers may vary) 1. 假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy Smith将 借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下： 上午：学校活动 下午：游览市区 晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天 注意： 1)词数：100左右 2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3)参考词汇：安排arrange Dear Andy, _ _ _ _.I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning, but in the afternoon, Ill show you around and take you to some places of interest. Well mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people. Im sure well have a wonderful time and enjoy each others company. _ Yours sincerely, Li Hua Top sentence Practice: write down the top sentence of each part(answers may vary) 2. 根据以下图图画，写一篇英语语短文，描述今昔通讯讯方式的变变化，以及这这些变变化给给人们们生 活带带来的影响。注意：1）词词数：100左右2）生词词：通讯讯：communication n _ _ _ _ _.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. Whats more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whe- never they like. With these changes, peoples pace of life has been quickened and peoples work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different continents. _ _ _ _ As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides, after hard study , music can bring us relaxation , which reduces the tiredness .This can help us make full preparations for the next class .Listening to music also makes us feel happy . _ In their opinion , they cant get the expected effect from playing music , for the class break time is too short .What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by music . _ _In this way students can enjoy music as well as have a good rest .Besides ,I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students. Top sentence Practice: write down the top sentence of each part (answers may vary) 3.随着科技的进步，多媒体已走进很多学校的课堂。课间休息时，有些学校利用它来播 放音乐。你班就“课间是否要播放音乐”展开讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息用英语 写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果及你个人的看法、建议 。（字数 120 词左右） 大多数同学认为认为 部分同学认为认为个人看法 能活跃跃气氛 ； 能使大脑脑得到放松，减轻轻学习习的疲劳劳，使大家在快 乐乐的氛围围中做好下一堂课课的准备备 ； 能给给大家带带来快乐乐 课间时间课间时间 太短 ，播放音 乐乐达不到预预期的效果； 课间课间需要的是安静而不是 嘈杂杂的声音 。 考生陈陈述 Coherence Coherence （连贯性）（连贯性） conjunction conjunction ( (连词连词) ) good vocabulary and good vocabulary and sentencessentences Making compositions look better (形式) Dividing and combination of contentsDividing and combination of contents ( (段中内容的分层与组合段中内容的分层与组合) ) fluent expression; good mastery of sentence structure; coherent(连贯) a good composition Coherence Coherence（连贯性）（连贯性） 一、一、过渡用语过渡用语 表示时间关系的过渡用语：表示时间关系的过渡用语： first, in the beginning, first of all, next, second, then, soon, first, in the beginning, first of all, next, second, then, soon, meanwhile, meantime, in the meantime, now, earlier, later, meanwhile, meantime, in the meantime, now, earlier, later, after that, afterward, at that moment, by that time, from then after that, afterward, at that moment, by that time, from then on, presently, eventually, at last, finally, before., after., on, presently, eventually, at last, finally, before., after., since., when., while., as soon as., once., until. since., when., while., as soon as., once., until. 表示添加的过渡用语：表示添加的过渡用语： and, also, too, again, besides, also, another, moreover, and, also, too, again, besides, also, another, moreover, furthermore, in addition, as well as, what is morefurthermore, in addition, as well as, what is more 表示比较的过渡用语：表示比较的过渡用语： like, alike, in comparison, likewise, in the same way, at the like, alike, in comparison, likewise, in the same way, at the same time, similarly, in like manner, as, as well as same time, similarly, in like manner, as, as well as Coherence Coherence（连贯性）（连贯性） 表示对照的过渡用语：表示对照的过渡用语： but, yet, still, however, unlike, instead, whereas, in spite of, but, yet, still, however, unlike, instead, whereas, in spite of, despite, on the contrary, in contrast, on the other hand, though, despite, on the contrary, in contrast, on the other hand, though, although, for one thingfor anotheralthough, for one thingfor another 表示原因的过渡用语表示原因的过渡用语 because, for, since, as, because of, due to, owing to, thanks tobecause, for, since, as, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to 表示结果的过渡用语：表示结果的过渡用语： so, thus, therefore, hence, so that, as a result, in this / that wayso, thus, therefore, hence, so that, as a result, in this / that way 表示例证的过渡用语：表示例证的过渡用语： for example, for instance, such as, that is, namely, in particular, for example, for instance, such as, that is, namely, in particular, specifically, as proof ofspecifically, as proof of 表示总结的过渡用语：表示总结的过渡用语： to sum up, to conclude, to summarize, on the whole, all in all, to sum up, to conclude, to summarize, on the whole, all in all, lastly, in short , in brief, in a word, in conclusion, in closing, in lastly, in short , in brief, in a word, in conclusion, in closing, in summary summary Coherence Coherence（连贯性）（连贯性） 表示强调的过渡用语：表示强调的过渡用语： surely, certainly, truly, undoubtedly, clearly, indeed, in fact, surely, certainly, truly, undoubtedly, clearly, indeed, in fact, after all, above all, most important, to be sure, without doubt, after all, above all, most important, to be sure, without doubt, without a question, as a matter of factwithout a question, as a matter of fact 表示重述的过渡用语：表示重述的过渡用语： in other words, that is to say, in simpler terms, simply stated, in other words, that is to say, in simpler terms, simply stated, to put it differently to put it differently 表示综述的过渡用语表示综述的过渡用语： generally, generally speaking, in general, in a word, in short, generally, generally speaking, in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, as a rule, for the most parton the whole, as a rule, for the most part 表示让步的过渡用语：表示让步的过渡用语： anyhow, anyway, of course, however, in any case, at any rate anyhow, anyway, of course, however, in any case, at any rate Coherence Coherence（连贯性）（连贯性） 二、启、承、转、合二、启、承、转、合 （1 1）启：用于引导主题句，或用于主题句的后面，引导第一个发展句。）启：用于引导主题句，或用于主题句的后面，引导第一个发展句。 first(ly) , at first, first of all, in the beginning, at present, to begin with, lately, first(ly) , at first, first of all, in the beginning, at present, to begin with, lately, for one thing, now, recently, in general, generally speaking, in my opinion, for one thing, now, recently, in general, generally speaking, in my opinion, obviously obviously。 （2 2）承：用于承接主题句或第一个（或前一个）发展句）承：用于承接主题句或第一个（或前一个）发展句 Second, third, besides, furthermore, in addition, moreover, what is more, Second, third, besides, furthermore, in addition, moreover, what is more, what is worse, for example, for instance what is worse, for example, for instance（例如）（例如）, in other words, in pa-, in other words, in pa- rticular, in the same way, after a while, from now on, meanwhile, at the rticular, in the same way, after a while, from now on, meanwhile, at the same time, by the time, of course, for the purpose, in fact, in reality, no same time, by the time, of course, for the purpose, in fact, in reality, no doubt, certainly, surely, obviously. doubt, certainly, surely, obviously. （3 3）转：用来表示不同或相反的情况）转：用来表示不同或相反的情况 After all, but, yet, however, although, though, in spite of, on the contrary, After all, but, yet, however, although, though, in spite of, on the contrary, in contrast, on the other hand, in fact, as a matter of fact, otherwise, in contrast, on the other hand, in fact, as a matter of fact, otherwise, or else, instead or else, instead （4 4）合：用于总结段落中上文的内容，引导一个发展句或结论句，或用于文章）合：用于总结段落中上文的内容，引导一个发展句或结论句，或用于文章 的最后一句的最后一句 Finally, in conclusion, in brief, in short, in summary, therefore, to conclude, Finally, in conclusion, in brief, in short, in summary, therefore, to conclude, above all, as a result, at last, in general, in a word, on the whole. above all, as a result, at last, in general, in a word, on the whole. Find out all the conjunctions in the passage Homework (1)2005年福建高考卷(NMET) 目前，学校存在少数学生考试试作弊现现象。某英文杂杂志社拟对拟对 此现现象向中学生 征文，标题标题 是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”请请根据下列提示用英 语语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下： Coherence（连贯性） 主要原因 考试试偏多、偏难难 不用功、懒懒惰 取悦父母、老师师 个人看法作弊不对对，违违反校规规 要诚实诚实 ，努力学习习 （其他看法） 注意：1短文必须须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥发挥 ； 2短文标题标题 与开头头已为为你写好，不计计入总词总词 数； 3词词数：100左右。 4参考词汇词汇 ：作弊 cheat（v.） My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. 1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式） 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句 ） 3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句) 4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用强调句型) 5.As a result, the plan was a failure. On his arriving, please give me an e-mail. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. Coherence Coherence（连贯性）（连贯性） Appreciate the following sentences Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. The plan turned out to be a failure. Coherence Coherence（连贯性）（连贯性） rewrite the following sentences 6.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去 分词) 7.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) 8.I wont believe what he says. （使用状语从句） 9.We all think he is a great man. 10. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms. Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. Singing and laughing, they went back to school. No matter what he says, I wont believe. We all think highly of him . Advice on writing good compositionsAdvice on writing good compositions Top sentence Top sentence（主题句）（主题句） Coherence Coherence （连贯性）（连贯性） conjunction (conjunction (连词连词) ) good vocabulary and sentencesgood vocabulary and sentences Dividing and combination of contentsDividing and combination of contents ( (段中内容的分层与组合段中内容的分层与组合) ) Ending Ending（opinionopinion） Excellent Ideas are clearly stated/supported; to the point; well-organized;fluent expression; good mastery of sentence structure ;coherent(连贯) 2125 Good cover all the information given in the outline; smooth ; no