英语正反观点对比类作文.ppt

议论文写作指导议论文写作指导 正反观点正反观点 Discussion: What is a good writing? nStructure: Good begining and ending（好的开头和结 尾） Well organized and smoothly developed（结构 合理，行文流畅） Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.（内容要完整） nLanguage: No Chinglish（避免中文式英语） No Grammatical mistakes（没有语法错误 ） With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns （词语的准 确运用和句式的富于变化） 正反观点题型 : 要求学生从正反两个方面来论证某一观点， 对这类题型，审题时注意： 体裁：议论文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第一人称 或 第三人称 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论 。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提 供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 注意： 1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：100左右。 3、参考词汇：门票：entrance fee Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60%的同学认为40%的同学认为 1、不应收门票 2、公园是公众休闲的地方 3、如收票，需建大门、围墙 ， 会影响城市形象 1、应收门票，但票价不宜 高 2、支付园林工人工资 3、购新花木 Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks(提出问题). Opinions are divided on the question. 60of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Changing entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city. 过渡句观点一 论据一 论据二 On the other hand, 40 think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Yours truly Li Hua 可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题， 即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一，并用一系 列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点 二，继续用论据进行说明。如果需要说明自己的观 点，可接下来说明自己的观点。 观点二 论据一 论据二 文章结构 正反 观点 对比 类的 文章 提出问题 不同观点对比 说明自己观点 或者 总结 n The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Opinions are divided on this issue. Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood. As little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very easy for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning. In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet. Whats more, Whats worse, 作文模板 n _ had a discussion about whether_. Opinions are divided on this issue. _of the students think _ should _. _. Whats more, _. n But/ However/On the other hand, _ of the students think _ shouldnt _. Whats worse, _. n In short, _ have not arrived at any agreement yet. 介绍讨论的主题(开头句)： n我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是学生是否可以 We had a discussion about whether students should be allowed to n我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生是否可以 Weve had a survey on whether students should be allowed to n我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论，讨论内容是否可以 Im writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether students should be allowed to 过渡句 nOpinions are divided on this issue. nOpinions are mainly divided into two groups. nDifferent people, however, have different opinions on this matter. nDifferent people, however, think quite differently on this matter. 在这个问题上大家意见有分歧。 主要有两种不同意见。 然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。 介绍正方观点： nSixty percent of the students are for the idea. nSixty percent of the students think it necessary to nSome people think that According to them, all of us should. nSome believe that nThey are of the opinion that 介绍反方观点 nHowever, of the students think nOn the other hand, of the students think nHowever, others have different opinions. nBut of the students think nOthers argue that In their opinion, 进一步介绍正反方观点 nWhats worse nWhats more nIn addition, nBesides, nFirst, Second, Third, in my opinion/as far as I am concerned in my opinion/as far as I am concerned /personally /personally we should pay attention to. we should pay attention to. ThereforeTherefore，I am fully convinced that.I am fully convinced that. Only in this way can weOnly in this way can we We shouldWe should，which, of course, will which, of course, will benefit benefit 结尾句结尾句 In todays class, we discussed about whether the old buildings with a long history should be removed in the old city reconstruction. About 40 percent of the students agree that the old buildings should be removed. They think it more important to improve the living conditions of the citizens. Besides, many old buildings are already shabby and dangerous as well. While the othe