英语作文环保及低碳生活.pptx

Low-carbon life 环保类话题写作 青州八中 王善勤 We have only one world . 写作口诀 一审二写三修改， 意义原因把头开， 正文要点不能少， 观点愿望末尾在。 时态一致不忘怀， 加入名句高分来。 以“Saving water”为题写一篇70字左右的段文。 1. 水在我们生活中很重要。 2. 有人不关心节约用水，洗完手不关水龙头。 3. 工厂往河里排放污水，河流、湖泊的水被污染了 ，鱼死了。 4. 我们一定要采取措施保护水。 5、让我们的河流、湖泊更干净。 提示词：care about, tap, pour waste water into, do something 文体 要点 提示词 Water is very important in our lives. We cant live without it. But some people dont care about water. They dont turn off the taps after they have washed their hands .What is worse, some factories even pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Some fishes has died. In order to make rivers and lakes cleaner, We must do something to protect water. Environment protection is the duty of everybody. 开头-写明写什么，意义、原因。 have 正文-中心要点 结束-你的愿望、观点 Good beginning 1. 开门见山 揭示主题。 Water is very important in our lives. 2. 交代人物、事情、时间开头。 Last week we went to the lake and found that it was very dirty. 3. 回忆性的开头。 I still remember my first trip to the river near my hometown. Good ending 1. 首尾呼应。 We must do something to protect water in order to make the world more beautiful. 2. 重复主题句。 I love my home town, and I love its people. 3. 名句结尾。 I believe we can do better in protecting our world. Where there is a will there is a way. 写作常见基本问题： 1、要点描述是否齐全。 2、非语法错误：拼写、标点、大小写。 3、语法错误：时态、词形变化等。 4、句型多样化：过渡句、从句的使用。 5、书面整洁。 Now more and more people get to know its important to protect our living environment.As a student，its my duty to do something for the earth. From now on, Ill go to school by bike or on foot instead of in a car. Ill use fewer plastic bags 【少用塑料袋】to reduce white pollution【减少 白色污染】. In order to save energy Ill plant more trees so that the air will be fresher. Ill take less lift and reuse water【循环用水】. At last l will use second-hand books【使用二手书】,so we dont need to cut down more trees. If everyone takes action, our enivronment will be better and better. Our world will be more beautiful. 1.众所周知，环境变得越来越糟糕。 1)As we all know, the environment is getting worse and worse. (Zhangyuyue) 2)It is well-known that the environment is getting worse and worse. 2. 环境变得越来越糟糕的原因是 The reason why the environment is getting worse and worse is that (Dangmengmeng) 3.所以，必须采取有效的措施来解决 那些问题。 1)So effective measures must be taken to solve those problems(Liuwenshuang) 2)So we must take effective measures to solve those problems. 4.真的到了我们该立即采取行动保护 环境的时候了。 Its high time that we took immediate action to protect our environment. (Lijia) 1.时态问题 Our environment get worse and worse. 2.There be 句型 There had a beautiful and clear river. 3.冠词问题 The environment is a important problem. is getting was或者used to be an 4.词性混淆 The fresh air is importance to our health. 5.时态一致问题 Not only is it harmful to our life, but also it caused 6.第三人称问题 It is well-known that the earth belong to the human beings rather than individual. causes belongs important或者 of importance 信息2 信息3 信息4 开头 正文 结尾 结构 Para.1 Para.2 Para.3 信息1 信息5 水污染 树木遭砍伐 垃圾遍地 总结：人人做贡献，环境越来越 美好 各种污染的原因 污染对健康有危害 立即采取措施解决问题 环境被破坏的现状 写作大练兵 三月本应该是个美丽的季节，但是雾霾（smog）天气持 续不断再次引起了全社会对环境保护的关注。 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，根据以下要点提示写 120词左右的演讲稿，主要内容包括： 1.描述现象 2.原因及危害 3.解决措施 参考词汇： 二氧化碳carbon dioxide 环保的environmentally- friendly 注意：1. 词数：120词左右； 2. 演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡 上且该部分不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone, My name is Lihua. Im honored to give a speech here. Thank you! 概述现象 简述原因 指出危害 解决措施 总结展望 Good morning everyone, My name is Lihua.Im very glad to give a speech here. As we all know, March is supposed to be a beautiful month. But we are facing a big problem, smog which is becoming more and more serious. The whole society is paying attention to it. Actually, it is still a matter of air pollution. There are so many cars giving out carbon dioxide. Air pollution does great harm to our health. It is high time that we should take immediate action to deal with it. First of all, lets ride bicycles instead of driving cars. T