中科院考博英语培训资料（作文）problemsinwriting-10,January.doc

作文题：09年12月份的作文真题1。表达“一些人。一些人。还有一些人。”Some people; some; some others.2. 词性问题：（1）Maybe diligent is not a source of joy- Maybe diligence is not a source of joy（2）Study hard must be a good choice for me to realize the dream-Studying hard study 也可以做名词，表示“学习”“书房”等，但是在这里，它后面接了副词，就不是做名词的用法了，所以应该改为动词。只有动词后面才能紧接副词。Study hard was not wrong in any cases.-Studying hard was .（3）Many people would criticize the first types lazy -laziness(4) There is more and more competitive in todays society.- There is more and more competition in todays society.（5）the interesting of learning make us concentrate on what we are doing-the interest of learning makes us .(6) From that time on, thinking became my biggest interest and brought me lots of funny.- From that time on, thinking became my biggest interest and brought me lots of fun. 3. which的用法 History，English，Politics often make me confused. Which lead a malignant instance that I work hard on some subjects I preferred while ignore some abhorred ones. -Historyconfused. This leads to such an undesirable situation that I work hard on some subjects.Malignant指肿瘤 “恶性的”，不用在这个语境里。4。冠词的用法Studying hard must be a good choice for me to realize the dream of the comfortable life. -a comfortable life先前的上下文中提到了这个事物，它再次出现时候才用the，否则，第一次出现应该用 a / an 。当然，有些专有名词即便是第一次出现，也用the 。如：I have come to the Chinese Academy of Sciences. As far as I am concerned, I am a last one.- As far as I am concerned, I am the last one. .表示顺序或者数字的时候，应该用定冠词the 。 5。what的用法Furthermore，the major what I study is agriculture. n -Furthermore，the major that I study is agriculture. What 当引导词，引导一个名词性从句，而且特别的是，what本身在这个名词性从句中还充当一个名词。这是what 和其他引导从句的引导词不一样的地方。换言之， what=the thing that它身兼双职。e.g., What he has said is true. = The thing that he has said is true. 上例的句子中已经有名词the major ，所以不再需要what 来充当一个名词了。另一个例子：They are not fond of what their study.- They are not fond of their study. 此处连从句都没有，用what引导词有何用？I have done something what I want since I became a graduated student-I have done something that I want since I became a graduated student6. only Although you may be not the top, you should try your best, and only this, would you make progress, of course, you will get more money.- Although you may not be the top person, you should try your best. Only by this way, would you make progress. Of course, you will get more money.注意及时断句。7。In conclusion, the study to my life as air and water to body.- In conclusion, the study is to my life what air and water is to the body. e.g,. Air is to human being what water is to fish.8. 句子结构紊乱：(1) There are some reasons can account for my choice.-There are some reasons that can account for my choice.(2)A majority of students who really want to study and do it well including me.- A majority of students really want to study and do it well, including me.(3) Here, a question that what kind of students am I is displayed beyond me.- Here, a question of what kind of students I am is raised before me. 宾语从句是肯定句句式，主谓语的位置还是主语在前，谓语在后。9. 专有名词 博士生 doctor-student -doctorate student 西部地区 west parts-west regions 知识爆炸 Knowledge explo