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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)随着人们生活水平的提高，一些人认为节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了 2)但是很多人反对这种说法 3)你的看法是，为什么? Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? _ _ _ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种观点，提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的观点，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：提出第1种观点：节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了，并说明理由;提出第2种观点：节俭和朴素仍然是一种美德，并说明理由;表明“我”对节俭的看法，并说明理由。 高分范文 Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? With the improvement of the living standards, many people are 1no longer interested in the simple life style 2and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style. 3However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesnt mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited 2and some of them even are 4on the decline. 5Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well. 6As to me, I prefer the latter opinion. I believe 7 “Waste not, want not.” The truth of this saying is 8not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. 5In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. 5Besides, there are still millions of Chinese 9living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. 5Therefore, 10it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up. 【亮点点评】 1“不再”。 2表示递进。 3引出另外一种观点。 4“在下降 想在四六级考试中写出好文章?那么用词是非常重要的一个环节。词汇使用得当，不仅使文章更生动，也是评分时的加分亮点。以下向各位四六级考生提供考试三十组考试中可频繁使用的优美词汇及例句。考试时用上它们，以替代你现有的普通词汇，可以瞬间点亮平淡无奇的文章。 1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换 eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many. 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用most, if not all ,替换most. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语，所以要加that) 7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing 8: shared 代 common 9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits ) 10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly 13.beneficial, rewarding替换helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer 15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very 16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替换 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in 18.capture ones attention替换attract ones attention. 19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect 20.be indiicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear 21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause. 22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换.reasons for sth 23.desire 替换want. 24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替换remember 26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思) 27. interaction替换communication 28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossibleDirections: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Skipping Classes on College Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)大学里逃课现象时有发生 2)分析学生逃课的原因 3)如何减少逃课现象 Skipping Classes on College Campus _ _ _ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生逃课现象及主要表现;分析大学生逃课的主要原因;说明应该如何减少逃课现象。 高分范文 Skipping Classes on College Campus In colleges and universities, the phenomenon of students skipping classes is not unusual. There are often some students who skip those classes for feeling uncomfortable or other private reasons. 1Besides, still some students are absent in classes without any reason but for they dont want to. 2There are two main reasons for college students skip classes. 1First, 3compared with in middle school, students have more freedom in college. 4It depends more on one students consciousness 4whether he will attend the class. So those students lacking self-discipline begin to skip classes. 1Second, some teachers classes could not attract students interests 5so that some students 6would rather skip classes to study what they are interested in. 7For whatever reasons, skipping classes 8does bring negative effects on students study. 1Therefore, 9it is necessary to take some effective measures to reduce this phenomenon. 1On the one hand, the school and teachers should make students realize the negative effects of skipping classes and increase their consciousness of attending the class. 1On the other hand, teachers have to improve their teaching quaality to attract students interests. 10Only in this way can the phenomenon of skipping classes be reduced as soon as possibly. 【亮点点评】 1过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 2用于引出原因。 3“和相比”。 4it充当形式主语，whether从句是真正的主语。 5so that引导结果状语从句。 6“宁愿”。 7“不管什么原因”。 8强调谓语动词。 9用于引出解决办法。 10“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。 佳句临摩 1.佳句：It depends more on one students consciousness whether he will attend the class. 临摩：在过去，一个学生只要成绩好就行，有没有好的身体不要紧。 _. 2.佳句：Some teachers classes could not attract students interests so that some students would rather skip classes to study what they are interested in. 临摩：他们的时间完全被工作占据以至于几乎没有时间和孩子们认真交流。 _. 3.佳句：For whatever reasons, skipping classes does bring negative effects on students study. 临摩：不管学习外语的原因是什么，它都能够使一个人受益。 _. 【KEY】 1. In the past, it did not matter whether a student had a strong body or not, as long as he got the top marks. 2. They are fully occupied by their work so that they have little time to talk with their children seriously. 3. To acquire another language, for whatever reasons, is very useful for a person.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力 2)大学生缓解压力的方式有 3)你一般都是如何排解压力的? How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? _ _ _ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一个问题，提纲第2点要求说明如何解决该问题，提纲第3点要求阐述“我”的做法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出当今的大学生主要面临哪些压力;列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈“我”是采取哪种方式排解压力的。 高分范文 How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? Todays college students face many pressures, mainly from parents expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition. 1Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a students confidence. 2More seriously, it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors. 3Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn to how to relieve pressure. 2First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves 4so as to 5make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages. 2Second, we should 6set a clear aim of a struggle. The aim can give us motivation, and make us become active. 2Third, 7attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure. 2Finally, if you find pressure is nearly 8beyond your control, youd better turn to professional psychological guidance. 2As to me, my pressure is mainly from future employment. 4In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages, and produce a more practical job object tion. 2So my employment pressure was relieved greatly. Now I become confident in my future, and I 9do believe I can get an ideal job after my graduation. 【亮点点评】 1although引导让步状语从句。 2过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 3“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。 4表示目的。 5“扬长避短”。 6“设立一个明确的奋斗目标”。 7动名词短语作主语，用不同于前两点的句式提出缓解压力的第三种方式。 8“超出范围或能力”。 9强调动词believe。 佳句临摹 1.佳句：Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. 临摹：尽管兼职工作能够带来很多好处，但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。 _. 2.佳句：Attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve 临摹：学会如何与人沟通是步入社会的第一步也是最重要的一步。 _. 3.佳句：In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages 临摹： 为了在激烈的竞争中获得优势，大学生们必须全面发展自己的能力。 _. 【KEY】 1. Although a part-time job does much good to us, we should not spend too much time on it. 2. Learning how to deal with people is the first and the most important step to enter into the society. 3. In order to get their priority in the fierce competition, college students have to develop their abilities in an all-around way. 1.表示原因 1)There are three reasons for this. 2)The reasons for this are as follows. 3)The reason for this is obvious. 4)The reason for this is not far to seek. 5)The reason for this is that. 6)We have good reason to believe that. 例如： There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly，peoples living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life. 注：如考生写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。 2.表示好处 1)It has the following advantages. 2)It does us a lot of good. 3)It benefits us quite a lot. 4)It is beneficial to us. 5)It is of great benefit to us. 例如： Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us. 3.表示坏处 1)It has more disadvantages than advantages. 2)It does us much harm. 3)It is harmful to us. 例如： However，everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television. 4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 1)It is important(necessary，difficult，convenient, possible)for sb.to do sth. 2)We think it necessary to do sth. 3)It plays an important role in our life. 例如： Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business.Soon, computers will be found in every home，too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age. 5.表示措施 1)We should take some effective measures. 2)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties. BR3)We should do our utmost in doing sth. 4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with. 例如：The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore，we must take some effective measures to solve it. 6.表示变化 1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years. 2)A great change will certainly be produced in the worlds communications. 3)The computer has brought about many changes in education. 例如： Some changes have taken place in peoples diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins. 7.表示事实、现状 1)We cannot ignore the fact that. 2)No one can deny the fact that. 3)There is no denying the fact that. 4)This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in. 5)However，thats not the case. 例如： We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems， we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment. 8.表示比较 1)Compared with A，B. 2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV. 3)There is a striking contrast between them. 例如： Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly，they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least，they contribute to peoples health by giving them due physical exercise. 9.表示数量 1)It has increased(decreased)from.to. 2)The population in this city has now increased (decreased)to 800，000. 3)The output of July in this factory increased by 15%compared with that of January. 例如： With the improvement of the livi ng standard，the proportion of peoples income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased. 再如： From the graph listed above，it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000. 注：From the graph listed above，it can be seen that见句式12。考生将句式9和句式12结合在一起，便可较好地写出2002年6月CET -4、6短文写作的第一段。 10.表示看法 1)People have(take，adopt，assume)different attitudes towards sth. 2)People have different opinions on this problem. 3)People take different views of(on)the question. 4)Some people believe that.Others argue that. 例如： People have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure leads to success.Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor.However， others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers. 再如： Dolucky numbers really bring good luck?Different people have different views on it. 注：一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始，考生应掌握这一写作方法。 11.表示结论 1)In short，it can be said that . 2)It may be briefly summed up as follows. 3)From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that . 例如： From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary，however， its method should be improved. 注：例句1可用于任何一个段落的结论句;例句3则多用文章结论段的第一句。 12.套语 1)Its well known to us that . 2)As is known to us，. 3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about. 4)From the graph(table，chart)listed above，it can be seen that . 5)As a proverb says，Where there is a will，there is a way. 例如： As is well known to us，it is important for the students to know the world outside campus. The reason for this is obvious.Nowadays，the society is changing and developing rapidly，and the campus is no longer an ivory tower.As college students，we must get in touch with the world outside the campus.Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graduate. 再如： Does it pay to be honest?This is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)目前大学生面临就业难的问题 2)分析导致该问题的原因 3)大学生应该如何应对该问题 Employment Pressure Facing College Students _ _ _ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析该问题产生的原因，提纲第3的要求说明应该如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学生就业难的问题;分析导致该问题的原因;从大学生的角度说明应该如何应对该问题。 高分范文 Employme