高考英语临阵磨枪书面表达.doc

高考英语临阵磨枪书面表达一.考纲要求：1.字数：100字左右。低于80字或多于200字2分。在标准答卷中，有14行格子，每行写89个字，共写12行左右。已给出的首句不计数。2.作文形式：情境作文，包括提纲、图表、图画式等。3.体裁格式：记叙文、议论文、论说文、应用文等4.评分要求：1）内容要点要全；2）应用词汇、语法结构的数量和准确性；3）上下文的连贯性和语言的得体性。二.写作准备：1.平时要记写作的套，背常用短语、句型和过渡词。2.动笔前要弄清：1）体裁格式；2）主体时态；3）人称；4）分几段，用什么过渡词；5）列出内容要点。3.每段第一句话应为本段的主题句。4.用有把握的句式：用自己最熟悉、有把握的词语和句型把所规定的内容加以表达。对拿不准的表达，可采用改换另一种方式，当然不能改变原有的意思。在表达时，句子宜短不宜长，全文只用12句复合句。常用的复合句有定语从句，状语从句、并列句。三.提纲式作文：高考题2005山东假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘。请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。表示感兴趣说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历希望得到回复注意：1.词数：100左右2、可适当啬细节，以使行文连贯Dear Sir/Madam,写作示范：1、准备：1）体裁格式：书信2）人称：第一人称3）主体时态：一般现在时4）分三段写5）内容要点：（1）我是新华中学的学生李华（2）我得知你们要招聘兼职记者（3）我对这份工作很感兴趣（4）知识面（5）英语水平（6）合作精神（7）相关经历（8）希望回信2、范文：Dear Sir / Madam, Im a student from Xinhua Middle School. Im glad to learn that you want a few part-time Englsih reporters. Im quite interested in it. I think Im fit for the job.(主题句) As a student, Ive read a lot and have much knowledge in many fields. Im fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, Im easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others. Above all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station （学校广播站）. So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the position. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua3、启示：1）用适当的短语：be interested in (have interest in ), be fit for, be fond of, do well in =be good at, get along with (相处), enjoy doing, work as, look forward to 2) 重视连接词，使行文连贯：用and 3次，还用了besides（此外，还有），above all（尤其重要的是），so（所以，因此）要学会使用这些词：and, then, however, besides, also, thus（因此）,but, so, once again（再一次）, suddenly, after that, Whats moremoreover (还有)，above all, Whats worse = to make matters worse=worse still（更糟糕的是）, at the same time (同时，还有)，in addition (此外)创新题校刊“英语园地”为配合学校创建“绿色校园”的工作，开展了“创建绿色学校英语征文活动”，根据提示用英文写征文稿。要求如下：存在的问题：1、浪费水、电2.乱扔可回收的饮料瓶、旧书本等3.个人看法和建议：1、对学生进行环保教育2、从关灯、回收废物等小事做起3、注意：1、词数100左右2、适当增加细节，使行文连贯3、开头已给出The Green School Project has become part of environmental education in our school.However, there are still a lot of probems in our school.（主题句） Very often you come across an emty classroom with the lights on. Its not difficult to find evidence of wasting water, a serious problem. Besides, students dont recycle enough, throwing the soft drink bottles, used exercise papers and books. Worse still, many students use non-environmentally friendly luch boxes, causing the white pollution.These things show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness. （主题句）In my opinion, it is important to educate students to be more environmentally friendly. (students should be educated to be aware of the importance of protecting the environment.) At the same time, students can do some small things, such as turning off the lihts, collecting used things for recycling and saving water. Always remember that it is everyones duty / responsibility to proctect the environment. Only when all the students are aware of that can we build a green school.图表类一.表格提示高考题2005年湖南假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项征求你的意见。请根据下表所提供的信息用英语以书信形式给予答复。请在答题卡上作答。活动时间7月15日22日或8月15日22日活动内容参加英语角 学唱英语歌曲听英语讲座 表演英语短剧看英语电影 教外宾学中文对活动内容的建议或要求请注意：1. 选择适合你的时间，并说明理由；2. 选择两项你喜欢的活动，并说明理由；3. 对活动内容提出至少一个建议或要求；4. 词数：100左右；5. 信的开关和结尾已给出。Dear Sir or Madame, Im very glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I prefer to go in July because Ill have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But Id like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture. Its been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp? Thank you very much.Yours truly, Li Ping创新题某英文网站正在开展关于填报志愿时是首先考虑专业或是学校的讨论。根据提示用英语写一篇短文。观点理由首选选择专业1可以学习自己感兴趣的东西.2、便于将来从事自己喜爱的工作首先选择大学学习环境对人的成长很重要名牌大学的毕业生在求职时常会受到青睐你的看法注意：1、词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。2、可适当发挥，使行文连贯。Every student will be faced with the question when he passes the college entrance examination: Should I choose a good major or a good university first.范文：Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested in. Also it will make it possible for them to do their favorable job in future. However, some would choose a good university first rather than a major. They think the environment is important to ones development and that graduates from key (leading) universities are more likey to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is a good major at a good university. If we cant obtain (get/choose) both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because wherever we study, we can still achieve a lot if we try our best.创新题假设你是李华，在杂志 Panorana看到下面的广告。Dont you want a better world for you and your children?GREEN PLANETAssociation (协会) for Evironmental Protection Meetings informing you about whats happening in the world Talks given Materials, mailed to members, with up-to-date reports, maps and fact files.Then why not joinMEMBERSHIP FEE $30230 SWINDON RD你想加入这一组织，但一些具体信息不明确 (如下表)，你给该组织发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况,并提出你对活动的建议。Meetings多久举行一次，地点Talks专家还是会员主持Materials是否额外收费Members fee对学生是否优惠注意：1、参考词汇： 额外收费 extra charge 2、开头已写好，不计入总词数。Dear Sir, Im writing to you with regard to your ad published in the magazine Panorana. Yours faithfully,Li Hua范文：Im interested in envrionmental protection and am considering joining Green Planet. Here I want to know more information about your organization.To begin with, Id like to know how often and where the meetings are held. I am also interested in knowing if the talks are given by experts or by members of your association. As for the materials, do they need extra charge? In addition, Id like to know if you have have any special price for students.Besides, I hope that you can organize some activities suitable for us students, especially the outdoors.二.图例提示写作模板第一段：描述图例内容1.As the chart shows / As cam be seem from the chart, great changes have been taking place in (在方面). In 2000, there were (多少人做). By the year 2006, the number of (做某事) has reached up to(达到) (多少). 2.The average number increased by 20% in the past 5 years.3.The number of people who has dropped / increased / risen from to 4. 表示上升：increase / go up / rise to (by) (to 表示数量到了多少，by 表示数量增加的程度)表示下降：decrease / come down / reduce / drop 第二段：说明原因1 There are two main factors leading to this change. (主要有两个方面的原因导致了这种变化。) For one thing, . For another thing, .2. Several factors / reasons contribute to / lead to / result in / cause such changes. For one thing, . For another thing, . Besides, .第三段：陈述自己的看法1.In my opinion, 2.Therefore, my opinion is that.创新题 请你根据以下图表和提示，用英语写一篇关于我国手机拥有量变化的报道，并阐述手机给人们生活所带来的利与弊。million1.方便，随时随地联系2.许多功能满足不同要求，如发短信，上网等3.接到打错电话并为之付费4.电磁辐射（radiation）有害健康注意：词数100字左右。范文：As can be seen from the chart, great changes have been taking place in the ownership of mobile phones in China. At the end of 2002, there were 20 million mobile phone users. By the year 2005, the number had reached up to 30 million.People have found mobile phones very convenient. They can get in touch with each other whenever and wherever they like. There are many different functions for different needs, such as sending short messages and surfing the Internet. However, it may also bring us some trouble. For example, you will have to pay for a wrong number, and the radiation from the phone may do harm to our health. In spite of this, the number of people having mobile phones is still increasing greatly.议论文一.观点对比第一段：引出主题1. Im writing to tell you the discussion weve had about whether (我写信告诉你我班关于某事的讨论) Opinions are divided on this matter.(There are two different viewpoints about it . / Among them there are two types of attitude in.在方面有两种态度)2. Recently I have made a survey about whether (最近我对是否作了一次调查). 100 people accepted my survey. Among them there are two types of attitude.第二段：观点对比(展开)1. 60% of the students are for the idea of doing 60%的同学赞成做某事的想法). They believe that Besides, Above all, However / On the other hand, 40% of them dont think so / dont agree with them. In their opinion, They suggest that2. 30% of them think that and that Athother 30% are agaisnt the idea of doing they believe that The rest / other 40% dont agree either of the ideas above.(其余的40%不赞成以上任一种观点) In their opinion, 第三段：陈述自己的看法1. in my opinion / From my point of view, 2. As far as I know, .结尾句：Only when we can we do Only in this way can we do模板2： The topic about is becoming more and more popular in our school recently. There are two sides of opinion about it. Some students prefer to consider doing sth.(或 Some students say is their favorite.) they think that (理由一). Whats more, (理由二). Moreover, (理由三) However, others believe is a better choice for three reasons. (然而，其余的人认为做某事是一种较好的选择，有三个方面的理由) to begin with, (理由一). Next, . In addition, From my point of view, the former is surely a wise choice. The reason is that(或者用：As far as I am concerned, I firmly surport the view that(依我来看，我坚决支持这种观点 that引导同位语从句)模板3：好处与坏处的对比 1. In recent years, has been popular.There are many advantages in. First, Second, . Third, However, therere some disadvantages. . (之一). Besides, .(之二). Also, . (之三)In my opinion, it is true that advantages are more than disadvantages.(依我看，的确是好处多于坏处) I think2.One big advantage of is that. / One obvious advantage of is . / Finally, While it is true that . has many advantages, it is also important to realise that.(虽然某事确实有许多好处，但是意识到也很重要。模板4: 问题与建议1. In recent days, we have to face a problem that (近来，我们面临这样一个问题 that 引导同位语从句). 解决办法：With the help of modern technology, we now have many means to solve it. By doing ., we can Whats the most important is that结论：in a word, it is clear / obvious that Only when can we .创新题目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。 内容要点如下： 主要原因考试偏多、偏难不用功、懒惰取悦父母、老师个人看法作弊不对，违反校规请你至少谈两点看法It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. There are some reasons for such a phenomenon.