代老师1-5小学英语作文入门与提高.pptx

小学英语作文入门入门与提高提高 主讲人：代老师 习作一 About me 介绍我自己 写作要点 1、可以写自己的姓名、年龄、外貌特点。 示例：My name is Bill and I am ten years old. 2、可以写自己就读的学校、年级、班级等。 示例：I am in Dongfang primary school.Im in Grade 3. 3、可以写自己喜欢的课程、爱好等。 示例：I like English because its interesting.My hobby is playing ping-pong. 写作步骤 1、如何写好开头 （1）可以直接介绍自己的姓名、年龄。 示例：My name is Lily. （2）可以以打招呼的方式，用疑问句开头。 示例：Hello everyone.Do you know me? Im Lily. 2、如何写好中间 （1）可以开篇点题后，介绍自己的学校 、班级。 示例：Im in Dongfang Primary School.Im in Class 1,Grade 3. （2）可以写自己有哪些课程，喜欢什么课。 示例：In my school,I have maths,English,Chinese,art,and music. I like English very much. （3）可以写自己放学后喜欢什么活动。 示例：I often draw pictures after school. （4）可以介绍自己的家人、朋友。 示例：There are three people in my family:my father,my mother and me. 3、如何写好结尾 （1）以邀请作者作为自己的朋友来结尾。 示例：Do you want to be my friend? （2）总结一下，然后以询问读者的方式来结尾。 示例：This is me.How about you? 佳作示范 Im Joy My name is Joy.I am from London,but now I live in Beijing.I am in Dongfang Primary School. I am tall with long hair and big eyes.My favourite colour is pink.My favourite food is chocolate.And I have a pet dog.Its name is Xiaobai. I always play with him.My hobby is drawing.What about you? 习作二 I love my family 我爱我家 写作要点 1、可以介绍家庭成员有哪些人。 示例：In my family,there are three people:my father,my mother and me. 2、可以介绍家庭成员的工作。 示例：My father is a doctor.My mother us a teacher. 3、可以写家庭成员都有哪些爱好，平时有什么活动。 示例：My father likes reading newspapers.My mother likes wathcing TV. 写作步骤 1、如何写好开头 （1）首先介绍 自己姓名，接着介绍家里有几口人。 示例：I am Lily.There are four people in my family. （2）可以从照片入手，通过全家福照片介绍家人。 示例：Look at the photo.This is my family. （3）用疑问句开头，引出家庭。 示例：How many people are there in your family? 2、如何写好中间 （1）介绍家庭成员有什么爱好。 示例：My father likes reading newspapers.My mother likes listening to music. （2）描写家庭成员 外貌特征。 示例：My father is tall and thin.My mother is pretty. （3）介绍家庭成员工作。 示例：My father is a policeman.My mother is a doctor. 3、如何写好结尾 （1）表达自己对家庭的热爱 。 示例：I love my family. （2）用疑问句问问别人对家庭的看法。 示例：My family is happy.What about yours? 佳作示范 we are a happy family There are four people in my family:my father,my mother,my sister and I. My father is a doctor.He goes to work by car.My mother is a teacher.She goes to chool by bus.My sister and I are students.We are in the same school. We ride bikes to our school.We are a happy family. 习作三 My hobby 我的爱好 写作要点 1、可以写自己的爱好是什么，为什么有这样的爱好。 示例：My hobby is playing football,because its exciting. 2、可以写自己是如何坚持这一爱好的。 示例：Every morning I play basketball for one hour. 写作步骤1、如何写好开头 （1）可以直接点题，说明自己的爱好。 示例：My hobby is listening to music. （2）可以以特殊疑问句开头。 示例：Whats your hobby?Do you know what my hobby is?My hobby is collecting stamps 2、如何写好中间 （1）开篇点题后，讲一讲自己 为什么会有这样的爱好。 示例：I like collecting stamps because stamps are very beautiful. （2）可以围绕爱好讲讲发生的事情。 示例：One day,I received a letter from my pen pal and there was a beautiful stamp on it. 3、如何写好结尾 （1）写写从这个爱好中有哪些收获。 示例：I learn a lot from collecting stamps. （2）再次呼应全文，表达自己对这一爱好的感情 。 示例：I like collecting stamps. 佳作示范 My hobby Do you like swimming?I like swimming very much.I like swimming becauseits good for my health.Every day I go swimming and I am in a swimming club.I can swim very fast.In the swimming competitions,I always come in first.It makes me very happy.I like swimming very much.Do you like swimming too? 习作四 A school day 学校的一天 写作要点 1、可以写一写学校生活的作息时间。 示例：School starts at 8:00 in the morning.Students can go home at 4:30 in the afternoon. 2、可以写一写每天所上的课程。 示例：We have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. 3、可以写一写学校都有哪些活动。 示例：There is a sports meeting in our school. 写作步骤 1、如何写好开头 （1）可以开门见山，写出自己对学校生活的感受。 示例：My school day is very happy. （2）可以介绍一下自己学校的基本情况。 示例：Im in No.3 Primary School.My school is big and nice. （3）可以对自己先进行简单介绍。 示例：My name is Linda. Im ten.Im in Grade Three. 2、如何写好中间 （1）对学校的一天生活的描写要注意时间顺序。 示例：The first class starts at 8:00 a.m.The last class ends at 5:00p.m. （2）可以描述一下自己喜欢的老师和科目。 示例：I like Chinese very much.Our Chinese teacher is funny.His classes are interesting. 3、如何写好结尾 （1）和开头照应，再次表达自己的感情。 示例：I have a happy school day. （2）可以问问别人的学校生活。 示例：How about your school day? 佳作示范 A day at school I go to school from Monday to Friday.My school day is busy. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon.The first class starts at 8:00 a.m.The last class ends at 4:30p.m.I have many good teachers in school.I always play with my classmates after school.Thats my day at school. 习作五 My favourite animal 我最喜欢的动物 写作要点 1、可以描写小动物的外貌、习性等。 示例：My favourite animal is a dog.My dog is white. 2、可以写自己和小动物之间发生的事情。 示例：One day,my dog went missing. 写作步骤 1、如何写好开头 （1）可以直接点题，说出自己喜欢的动物。 示例：My favourite animal is a monkey. （2）可以以特殊疑问句开头。 示例：What is your favourite animal? My favourite animal is a monkey. 2、如何写好中间 （1）开篇点题后，可以描述小动物的 外貌特征，生活习性。 示例：The monkey is brown.It likes to eat bananas and peaches. （2）可以说一说自己喜欢的原因。 示例：I like monkeys because monkeys are cute and smart. 3、如何写好结尾 （1）最后可以呼应前文。 示例：I like monkeys very much. （2）可以问问别人喜欢不喜欢。 示例：Do you like monkeys? 佳作示范 Lovely pandas Whats your favourite animal?Panda is my favourite animal. Pandas look like bears,but they are not.They liv