最新高考英语专题辅导--书面表达方法步骤.ppt

,语句结构运用准确，词汇运用恰当,扬长避短，避难就易 善用熟悉的单词或语法结构，不用无把握的表达法（例如，正华反说，拐弯抹角） 用确信正确的句式和词汇,句式多样，简单复杂交错 善用过渡词、关联词或词组连接语句（如并列、递进、转折、因果等） 结构紧凑、过渡自然、意思连贯,认真检查,人称（不要暴露自己） 时态 主谓一致 短语 大小写 拼写 格式 要点疏漏否,书写得当 标点 字体端正清晰 规定笔 答题范围 词数,绍兴调测,1. 俱乐部计划的主要活动和内容 2. 我喜欢的其他两种活动形式及理由,开始写：,as everyone knows, for a high school student, the first thing to do is studying.we must spend as much time as we can to do the countless homework. so it is easy for one to get anxious or worried sometimes. if you are one of whom suffering the problem above, you can go to the youth club for help.,1. 要开门见山，细节铺垫过多，与开头nowadays with more feeling stressed out, 有重复的感觉。,make corrections,病症：不会过渡， 自然引出要点,第二个要点的过渡,then comes my advice if they can be adopted , itll be the best.,病症： 语气不当。是表明喜欢的其他两活动，不是你要提建议。,personally, id prefer to seize the opportunity to exchange emotions with experts face to face .its truly good access to ease students heavy burdens.,1. 只涉及另一种活动，少一点。 2. access to 表示“取得方法，可接近的权利”。to 是介词。改为 truly a practical approach to easing students heavy burdens.,病症： 1. 要点漏，2. 用词欠准确；,结尾：if youd like to get help from it, please pay attention to the youth club.,病症：语气也不妥。看信人是编辑，怎么感觉像poster（海报），吆喝大家来参加俱乐部。,语病,1. it will gain great popularity if the student union could set aside some time to organize a trip once a month, not only to appreciate the nature, but to help to get rid of stress.,1. not only to but to的逻辑主语不是student union，故主语不一致，动词不定式要添加自己的主语； 2. not only to encourage the students to appreciate but get rid of ,organizing freqent disscussion to provide a stage for students to communicate and learn others experience has been settled too.,病症：主语太长， 头重脚轻。 改为：discussions will be organized frequently to provide a stage for students where they are able to exchange learning experience as well as gain and loss in their school life.,好词,1.experts are to be invited on a regular basis to help students put hands on the solutions to their own psychological problems. 2. stressful high school life 3.aim at 4. serve as a platfor where students 5. i believe that travelling, to some degress,can also help us relax ourselves. 6. there is no denying that the club deserves a success.,好过渡句,第二段 to do it well, the club will regularly invite the aim of setting up the club is to youth club is expcted to solve the main activies go as follows.,第三段 1. in my opinion, the club can become more interesting with more plans. for example, 2. it is worth mentioning that there are many other excellent activities . 3. personally, im fond of the arrangement and also have some good ideas. 4. if more activies are needed, watching inspiring movies seems to be a good alternative.,nowadaysto set up youth club to help them _ the problems and challenges_. _ the club will regularly invite some experts to our school to give lectures on some of the _psychological problems. in addition, the club will often organize some discussions, _students can exchange their _learning methods as well as the experience_ _.,handle,they meet,according to the plan,major,where,successful,about how to deal with failures.,and stressed feelings,personally , we can also have plans to make our club active and appealing .for example, we can hold an english corner and some interesting entertaining activities, through which we may remove anxiety and improve personal relationship. whats more, we can also join in various social surverys to gain more knowledge about society. i really hope the club will be great benefit to the students of our school.,1.我一辈子从未去过那么美丽的地方。（never） never in my life have i been to such a beautiful place. 2.如果你坚持体育锻炼并均衡饮食，你的病很快就会好的。（recover） if you keep doing physical exercise and eating a balanced diet, you will recover from your illness soon. 3.你务必要养成每天读英文报纸的好习惯。（form） you must form the good habit of reading english newspapers every day.,4.科学家们普遍认为亚洲人的饮食更有利于健康。（opinion） scientists generally hold the opinion that the asians diet is better for h