湖南省茶陵县高中英语Unit3Tomorrow’sWorldguidedwriting教案牛津译林版.docx

Unit 3 Tomorrows World guided writing Writing a proposal【写作要求】本单元的写作要求是Writing a proposal。【情景呈现】假定你是某国际学校的高一学生李华。请你用英语给外籍校长写一封信，就你在使用学校图书馆时遇到的问题提出建议，并说明理由。要点包括：1. 开放时间较短，建议延长时间；2. 灯光较弱，建议配置台灯；3. 书籍较旧，建议购置新书并推出电子图书馆。注意：1. 词数150左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：安装install；过时的outdatedDear sir,I am Li Hua, a student from Grade 1. _Yours sincerely,Li Hua【写作分析】根据写作内容可知，我们的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告，并说明理由，以便让对方接受自己的想法或主张，从而解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。根据题目要求，信的主体可以分为三个部分：第一，表明写作意图；第二，针对你在图书馆使用过程中遇到的问题提出具体的改进建议；第三，希望对方接受自己的建议。此类写作的主要目的是提出建议，观点要合情合理，且语气一定要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。【参考范文】Dear sir,I am Li Hua, a student from Grade 1. I am writing to express my view concerning the library service in our school. I came across some problems while using the library and Id like to make some suggestions. First of all, the library closes early. It might be a good idea for the library to stay open longer, especially on weekends. Second, the light in the reading room is not bright enough. It would be better if table lamps could be installed. Students can use the lamps when necessary. Third, I find that the books in our library are a little outdated. I suggest we buy more new books and magazines so that students can get the latest information about the world. Last but not least, I suggest an electronic library be developed so we can have a lot more reading material.I really hope you will think my suggestions useful and take them into consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【必背佳句】1. I am writing to express my view concerning the library service in our school.2. It might be a good idea for the library to stay open longer, especially on weekends.3. It would be better if table lamps could be installed.4. I suggest we buy more new books and magazines so that students can get the latest information about the world.5. I really hope you will think my suggestions useful and take them into consideration.【举一反三】假定你是李华，是一名高一学生。为了更好地为学生们服务，你校英文校报现向全体学生征求编写意见。请你根据以下要点用英语写一封信，向校英文报编辑反映你发现的问题，并提出自己的改进办法。1. 文章多以校内事务为主，建议增加关于时事或学习方法的文章；2. 版面形式不够活泼，建议增加新板块，用来展示学生自己的作品等。注意：1. 词数150左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：时事current affair；展示displayDear editor,I am Li Hua, a student from Grade 1. _Yours sincerely,Li HuaOne possible version:Dear editor,I am Li Hua, a student from Grade 1. I am writing to tell you some problems I have found while reading our school newspaper as well as my suggestions.I have read many articles in the school newspaper. I find that almost all the essays in the school newspaper are about the daily routines in our school. It is good for us to know about things that happen in our school, but I think it would be better if there were some articles about current affairs and learning methods. Reading current affairs can open students eyes so they can get to know more about the world. Sharing learning methods can help students find the best way to study effectively. Furthermore, I think the form of the newspaper can be livelier. I think it is a good idea to open a