高中英语基础写作——调查报告.ppt

基础写作图表类 By Tracy 09广东高考 你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。 时间：上周末对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor) 王教授 主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题 基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50%；(2)人数：世 界第一 专家解读：(1) 原因：很复杂；(2) 治疗：没有哪 一种药物能治愈近视；(3) 建议：不要过度用眼 ；多参加户外活动；(4) 特别提示：如何握笔也 和近视有关 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，包括如下内容 ： （1）采访的时间、对象和主题；（2）中小学 生近视的发生率及人数；（3）专家解读 Last weekend I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, about the problem short- sightedness. According to Prof. Wang, a little more than half of the students in middle and primary schools are suffering from it, rating the first in the world consequently. Related experts say that the causes leading to it are very complicated and up till now no medicine has been found to cure for it. It is suggested that we students not overuse their eyes and its of great help to our eye health to participate in more outdoor activities. Meanwhile another tip from the experts is that the problem has business with how we hold the pen while writing. 2011年深一模 你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。 时间：上周星期三 对象：王老师 主题：中学生英语单词拼写的问题 基本信息：（1）约54%高中同学英语书法很差； （2）约45%的英语词汇只会说而不会写 老师解读：（1）原因：考试未设拼写题型； 平时训练不够；学生懒于记忆 （2）建议：提高认识，引起重视；加强训练 ，掌握方法 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，包括如下内容： 1采访的时间、对象和主题；2中学生英语单 词拼写的现状；3老师解读。 oLast weekend I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, about the problem short- sightedness. o时间：上周星期三 对象：王老师 主题：中学生英语单词拼写的问题 oLast Wednesday, I had an interview with Mr. Wang, an English teacher, about the problem of English word spelling among middle school students. concerning the issue of oAccording to Prof. Wang, a little more than half of the students in middle and primary schools are suffering from it, rating the first in the world consequently. o基本信息：（1）约54%高中同学英语书法很差 ；（2）约45%的英语词汇只会说而不会写 oAccording to Mr. Wang, a little more than half of the senior middle school students English handwriting are very poor, and the percentage of the words which they can not spell correctly although they are able to speak is 45. slightly oRelated experts say that the causes leading to it are very complicated and up till now no medicine has been found to cure for it. o老师解读：（1）原因：考试未设拼写题型； 平时训练不够； 学生懒于记忆 oHe said that the causes leading to it are that there are no specific word spelling checks in exams, and there are no enough training. The students are lazy to memorize. for spelling problemsalso pointed out Worse still, oIt is suggested that we students not overuse their eyes and its of great help to our eye health to participate in more outdoor activities. o（2）建议：提高认识，引起重视；加强训 练，掌握方法 He suggested that we (should) raise the awareness and place great emphasis on that, and above all, we should master skills while we are training ourselves. Last Wednesday, I had an interview with Mr. Wang, an English teacher, concerning the issue of English word spelling among middle school students. According to Mr. Wang, slightly more than half of the senior middle school students English handwriting are very poor, and the percentage of the words which they can not spell correctly although they are able to speak is 45. He also pointed out that the causes for spelling problems are that there are no specific word spelling checks in exams, and there are no enough training. Worse still, the students are lazy to memorize. He suggested that we should raise the awareness and place great emphasis on that, and above all, we should master skills while we are training ourselves. 07-10年广东高考基础写作题目统计 年份 命题形式主要内容体裁题材 07表格谁是你的偶像 调查报 告 学校生 活 08中文提纲 奥运比赛项目 射击 介绍体育/热 点话题 09中文提纲 中小学生近视 问题 采访报 道 健康 10中文提纲禁烟决定通讯报 道 热点话 题 Structure of the article oGeneral idea (conclusion / tendency)（ 图表反映的问题或总体 趋势） oFacts (to support the idea)（具 体数据或事实） oReasons （原因分析） oSolutions or personal opinion / suggestions (if needed) （解 决问题的方法或建议） 必备词句 o点明主题的常用词句： 上周，我们对人进行了关于的调查 。 Last week, we made / did / carried out a survey on among people. e.g. 上周，你市的一家报社对国庆长假期间市 民的休闲方式进行了一项调查。 A survey was carried out by an evening post in our city among the citizens on how they spent their last national holidays. Practice o受某英文报的委托，你最近就英语阅读兴趣 以访谈的方式对某市10所高中的1000名学生 进行了调查。 Recently, we did a survey among 1000 senior middle school students from ten schools on their reading interests. o最近我国的教育专家对我国中学生所喜爱的 节日进行了一项调查。 Recently some Chinese educational experts did a survey to find out which festivals are the most favorite ones among middle school students. o图表反映的问题或总体趋势的常用词句： o从以上表格中我们可以明显地看出，中国人 口在高速增长。 From the graph / table / diagram / chart above, we can see obviously that the population of China is increasing fast. o正如能够从图表中所看到的， As can been seen from the table, . As we can see clearly from the table, . 必备词句 p图表内容描述的常用词句： p表赞成的动词短语： p表不赞成的 动词短语： 的人数是(数字) the number of people who is(数字) the number of people who takes up X% e.g.反对该观点的人超过5千。 The number of people who are opposed to this idea is over 5,000. 必备词句 agree with, approve of, be in favor of, be for disagree with, disapprove of, be opposed to, be against 吸烟人数：约3.5亿;分布：男性75%女性25% oThe number of people who smoke is about 350,000,000. oThe number of men who smoke takes up 75%. The number of women who smoke takes up 25%. o The number of people who smoke is about 350,000,000，and 75% are male while 25% are female. Practice 受二手烟影响人数约5.4亿; 因二手烟死亡人数超过10万人/年 oThe number of people who are affected by second-hand smoke is about 540 million. oThe number of people who died from second-hand smoke is over 100,000 every year. Practice What is the worst, 分数、倍数、排序的常用词句： o直接表达：18% of , two fifths of . o变换表达：50% of = half of 25% of =one fourth of =one quarter of ; o倍数+（形容词/副词）比较级+ than； 倍数+ as+（形容词/副词）+as The number of students in our school is three times larger than that in theirs. (4) 排序：sb. / sth. rank the first place. sb. / sth. is in the second place. A put B in the first place. 必备词句 呈现数据的常用词句： o表示对比、转折： on the contrary, in contrast to, compared to / with, while, but, however o表示比较： as as; twice the amount of; more than; less than; the same as; similar to; different from o表示升、降： rise, on the rise, go up, climb, rocket, increase, double; go down, fall, drop, decline, decrease/reduce, on the decrease 必备词句 上周，你对全班50人就学校取消周六第二 课堂(extracurricular classes)的决定进行了一 次调查，调查结果如下： I made a survey last week among 50 classmates about their views on our schools decision to cancel the extracurricular classes on Saturday. The survey shows that 86% of my classmates agree to the decision while 12% dont agree but 2% dont voice their opinion. Practice o分析原因的常用词句： o的原因是。 The reason for is that . o有两个原因可以解释这样一种现象。 There are two reasons that account for this phenomenon. o许多因素可以说明/导致/引起这个变化/成功/增 长。 A number of factors could account for (contribute to / lead to / result in) the change (success / increase). 必备词句 Practice 上周，你市的一家报社对国庆长假期间市 民的休闲方式进行了一项调查。以下是调查结 果的原因分析： 1. 大多数市民觉得物价太高，生活压力大， 没有太多的钱出游。 2. 一部分市民认为国庆期间游客太多，太拥 挤。 3. 一部分市民则认为，可利用国庆放假好好 地休息一下，以放松自己。 The reason for such a situation is that most citizens hold the view that they dont have too much extra money for tour due to high living expense and pressures in their lives. Meanwhile, a portion of the citizens think that most of the places of interest are usually over crowded during the national holidays. However, some others believe that it is the right time for them to take a good rest and relax themselves during the holidays. o归纳总结或发表评论的常用词句： o归纳总结： in a word, in short, to conclude, in conclusion, generally speaking; personally, in my opinion, as far as Im concerned, from my point of view o我们可以得出这样的结论： We can draw the conclusion that . We can learn / know . From the changes in the charts, we can predict that . 必备词句 Practice 最近你对你们学校高三学生的体育锻炼情况做 了一次调查，结果如下： 坚持锻炼的同学主要参加以下体育活动： 70%同学坚持体育锻 炼 30%的同学基本上不锻炼 1. 一种放松 2. 有利于学习 1. 时间； 2. 运动受伤或过度疲劳会影响学 习 【写作内容】根据调查结果，写一篇短文， 包括以下内容： o有多大比例的同学认为不锻炼好及其理由 ； o有多大比例的同学认为要进行体育锻炼及 其理由； o坚持锻炼的同学主要参加的体育活动项目 。 One possible version: 30% of the students questioned say they think it better not to have physical exercise. They believe theres no time to spare for sports for Senior 3 students and it will have a bad effect on study if the students get hurt or too tired in it. While 70% students think we should do necessary physical exercise. They hold the view that it is a good relaxation and will surely do good to our study. Half of them stick to running every day, and others prefer to play basketball, table tennis, badminton or do something else. 必备词句 p有关采取措施的词或句型： make efforts to do take measures take steps take action Its time to do . Its about / high time that sb. should do sth. sb. did sth. Appreciation Here are some suggestions on how to build a harmonious relationship between students and teachers. Above all, students and teachers should trust each other, which may result in better communication and understanding. Whats more, students should respect teachers while teachers treat every student fairly. Only by trusting and respecting each other can they achieve their goal. 提出建议或措施的常用句型： o对我提出以下可能的解决方法。一方面， ；另一方面， I suggest some possible solutions to . For one thing, . For another, . o对可采取一些切实可行的措施。首先， ；另外，；能成功解决这个问题的方 法还有 Some workable advice may be taken to . First of all, . In addition, another way contributing to success of solving the problem is . 必备词句 提出建议或措施的常用句型： o下面是对于如何处理的方法。第一， ；此外，最后。 Here are some suggestions on how to deal with . To begin with, . Moreover, . Finally, . o我们应当采取一系列有效措施来处理这种情况 。第一；第二，；最后。 We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. Firstly, .Secondly,. Finally, . 必备词句 Practice Health Magazine 做了一项调查，了解到 现在人们的健康状况在下滑，主要原因如下 ： 1工作忙碌，压力过大，缺少锻炼； 2生活没有规律，熬夜，休息不够； 3不少人有抽烟、喝酒的习惯； 4建议：培养良好的生活习惯，戒烟，戒酒， 多运动。 According to the survey made by Health Magazine, compared with the past, people are in poorer health. One of the main reasons is that people are living a busy life without taking enough exercise and suffer lots of stress. Besides, most of them have to stay up late at night with so little time to rest, making their life become quite irregular. Worse still, a number of these people have got into the habit of smoking and drinking alcohol. To change this situation, one should