写作范文2篇及作业.ppt

Writing N H C E 写作模式写作实践 预习课文导入小结 N H C E Back For moreFor more 预习课文导入小结 写作实践随 笔 写作模式 Pattern of Writing Such writing begins with an introduction of the writers general statement about the issue in question. This part, as the main body of writing, serves to present the specific argumentation so as to make the statement above more convincing. The writing concludes with the writers constructive advice on how to deal with the issue concerned. General Statement Specific Argumentation Conclusion N H C E Back 预习课文导入小结Pattern of Writing 写作实践随 笔 写作模式 Example abridged from the text Topic: The Tail of Fame Outlines: 1. 你对追求名气的看法； 2. 对你的观点进行深入论述； 3. 你的建议。 N H C E Back 预习课文导入小结Pattern of Writing 写作实践随 笔 写作模式 The Tail of Fame Para. 1 Any artist who seeks fame is like a dog chasing his own tail who, when he captures it, does not know what else to do but to continue chasing it. The cruelty of success is that it often leads such seekers to participate in their own destruction. Para. 2 On the one hand, the conquest of fame is difficult at best, and many end up emotionally if not financially bankrupt. On the other hand, N H C E Back 预习课文导入小结Pattern of Writing 写作实践随 笔 写作模式 those who gain fame are hard-pressed to sustain the publics favor. When they become bored, for example, their work begins to show a lack of continuity in its appeal and it becomes difficult to hold the interest of the public. Some artists who do attempt to remain current by making even minute changes to their popular style run a significant risk of losing their fans worship; whereas others who remain popular with the public have to give up the N H C E Back 预习课文导入小结Pattern of Writing 写作实践随 笔 写作模式 the freedom to express themselves with any style other than their famous one. Oddly enough, the greatest winners are those who, despite repeated failures, remain true to their quest for success, because failure has motivated them to work even harder to succeed. For most people, however, failure is the end of their struggle, not the beginning. N H C E Back 预习课文导入小结Pattern of Writing 写作实践随 笔 写作模式 Para. 3 “Good luck!” is my advice to those who seek fame. But alas, those who gain fame often find it does more harm than good. So instead of trying so hard to seek fame, try to be happy with what you do and try to do what you can be proud of in your future life. Maybe you wont be famous in your own lifetime, but you may create better art. N H C E Back 预习课文导入小结Writing Practice 写作实践随 笔 写作模式 Dynamic Writing Topic: A Heavy Price for Seeking Thrill Online Outlines: 1. 你对寻求网上刺激的看法； 2. 对你的观点进行深入论述； 3. 你的建议。 N H C E Back 预习课文导入小结Writing Practice 写作实践随 笔 写作模式 A Heavy Price for Seeking Thrill Online Para. 1 Any artist who seeks fame is like a dog chasing his own tail who, when he captures it, does not know what else to do but to continue chasing it. The cruelty of success is that it often leads such seekers to participate in their own destruction. Para. 2 On the one hand, the conquest of fame is difficult at best, and many end up emotionally if not financially bankrupt. On the other hand, Para. 1 Any student who seeks thrill online is like one taking drugs who, once addicted to it, does not know what else to do but to continue indulging in it. The cruelty of success is that it often leads such seekers to participate in their own destruction. Para. 2 On the one hand, the conquest of fame is difficult at best, and many end up emotionally if not financially bankrupt. On the other hand, Para. 1 Any student who seeks thrill online is like one taking drugs who, once addicted to it, does not know what else to do but to continue indulging in it. The cruelty of thrill seeking is that it often leads such seekers to participate in their self-battering. Para. 2 On the one hand, the conquest of fame is difficult at best, and many end up emotionally if not financially bankrupt. On the other hand, Para. 1 Any student who seeks thrill online is like one taking drugs who, once addicted to it, does not know what else to do but to continue indulging in it. The cruelty of thrill seeking is that it often leads such seekers to participate in their self-battering. Para. 2 On the one hand, the conquest of thrill is a fleeting one at best, and many end up emotionally if not mentally bankrupt. On the other hand, N H C E Back 预习课文导入小结Writing Practice 写作实践随 笔 写作模式 those who gain fame are hard-pressed to sustain the publics favor. When they become bored, for example, their work begins to show a lack of continuity in its appeal and it becomes difficult to hold the interest of the public. Some artists who do attempt to remain current by making even minute changes to their popular style run a significant risk of losing their fans worship; whereas others who remain popular with the public have to give up the those who seek endless thrill this way are hard- pressed to sustain their normal life as ever. When they become bored, for example, their work begins to show a lack of continuity in its appeal and it becomes difficult to hold the interest of the public. Some artists who do attempt to remain current by making even minute changes to their popular style run a significant risk of losing their fans worship; whereas others who remain popular with the public have to give up the freedom to express those who seeks endless thrill this way are hard- pressed to sustain their normal life as ever. When they become crazy for it, for example, their school life begins to show a lack of continuity in its vigor and it becomes difficult to focus as much of their minds on lessons as usual. Some artists who do attempt to remain current by making even minute changes to their popular style run a significant risk of losing their fans worship; whereas others who remain popular with the public have to give up the those who seeks endless thrill this way are hard- pressed to sustain their normal life as ever. When they become crazy for it, for example, their school life begins to show a lack of continuity in its vigor and it becomes difficult to focus as much of their minds on lessons as usual. Some students who do attempt to enrich their college life by playing online games from time to time run a significant risk of drowning in it; whereas others who are forced to stay away from whatever is online have to give up N H C E the freedom to express themselves with any style other than their famous one. Oddly enough, the greatest winners are those who, despite repeated failures, remain true to their quest for success, because failure has motivated them to work even harder to succeed. For most people, however, failure is the end of their struggle, not the beginning. Back 预习课文导入小结Writing Practice 写作实践随 笔 写作模式 the freedom to scanning online for information necessary to their study. Oddly enough, the greatest winners are those who, despite repeated failures, remain true to their quest for success, because failure has motivated them to work even harder to succeed. For most people, however, failure is the end of their struggle, not the beginning. the freedom to scanning online for information necessary to their study. Oddly enough, the greatest winners are those who, despite more pressure from lessons, remain true to their quest for knowledge, because their hunger for knowledge has motivated them to work even harder to reach new peaks of excellence. For most people, however, failure is the end of their struggle, not the beginning. the freedom to scanning online for information necessary to their study. Oddly enough, the greatest winners are those who, despite more pressure from lessons, remain true to their quest for knowledge, because their hunger for knowledge has motivated them to work even harder to reach new peaks of excellence. For many other students, however, seeking thrill online is the end of their life, not the beginning. N H C E Back 预习课文导入小结Writing Practice 写作实践随 笔 写作模式 Para. 3 “Good luck!” is my advice to those who seek fame. But alas, those who gain fame often find it does more harm than good. So instead of trying so hard to seek fame, try to be happy with what you do and try to do what you can be proud of in your future life. Maybe you wont be famous in your own lifetime, but you may create better art. Para. 3 “It is high time to wake up to your way of self-battering!” is my advice to those who seek thrill online without any awareness of its danger. But alas, those who gain fame often find it does more harm than good. So instead of trying so hard to seek fame, try to be happy with what you do and try to do what you can be proud of in your future life. Maybe you wont be famous in your own lifetime, but you may create better art. Para. 3 “It is high time to wake up to your way of self-battering!” is my advice to those who seek thrill online without any awareness of its danger. But alas, those who stop to realize it often find it too late to turn a new leaf. So instead of trying so hard to seek fame, try to be happy with what you do and try to do what you can be proud of in your future life. Maybe you wont be famous in your own lifetime, but you may create better art. Para. 3 “It is high time to wake up to your way of self-battering!” is my advice to those who seek thrill online without any awareness of its danger. But alas, those who stop to realize it often find it too late to turn a new leaf. So instead of trying so hard to seek thrill from the virtual world, try to be happy with