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Chinglish horse horse tiger tiger open water up street buy things give you some colour see see heart flower angry open I this morning eat breakfast. Have you eat meal? Im a larger school student. Im very like play basketball. We should hard study. But I better like listen music. Live to old, study to old. I had breakfast this morning. Good morning/afternoon/evening! Im a college student. We must work/ study hard. Its never too old to learn. But I like listening to music better. I like playing basketball very much. 高考复习 -书面表达评析及指导 By Jasmine 假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你的 英语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡，请你根据 下列要点写回信。 要点: 1. 我学英语已经六年了，在老师和同学们的帮助下 取得了一些进步； 2. 但是总觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯 用法； 3. 今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取能用 流利的英语和你写信； 4. 我的家乡发生很大的变化，盖起了许多高楼，拓 宽了道路，变得越来越漂亮和现代化； 5. 如果有时间可以到中国来，我会带领你参观我的 家乡。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。 June 8, 2008 Dear Peter, Im very glad to receive your letter. I will tell you something about my English study and hometown. . read and write find it hard fluent English to write Great changes roads have taken place in my hometown buildings widenedIt will be wonderful when you come to China if you are free show you around I will be glad to 语言不地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多，得分13分 have have 影响书面表达得分的因素： “大错误”包括时态错误、句子结构错误、中式 英语等，如： 1.My hometown had big change, build many houses, 2. 语言表达出现“大错误”及“小错误” Great changes have taken place in my hometown there. For example, many new houses have been built and roads have been widened. 2. I will welcome to you. “小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、冠 词介词使用不准确等方面,如： Under my teacher and classmates all help to me ,. Welcome to China. With the help of my teachers and classmates, 没有使用高级词汇和复杂句 1. I will visit my hometown with you. 2. If you have time, I will take you to travel around my hometown. I will show you around my hometown if you are free. 书写是否工整清晰也会影 响答卷得分。卷面不整洁， 涂改多；大小写;标点符号; 书写不清，得分会很低！ Bad sample 卷面不整洁; 涂改较多;语言错误多;层 次不清;得11分 字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。 One possible version: June 8, 2008 Dear Peter, Im very glad to receive your letter. I will tell you something about my English study and hometown. It is six years since I began to learn English. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made some progress in English. However I still find English hard to learn, such as some difficult idioms which made me confused. No matter how hard it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work. Not long ago I returned to my hometown and found great changes had taken place there. Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened. My hometown is getting modern and more and more beautiful. I hope if you have a chance to come to China and I ll show you around my hometown when you are on leave. Best wishes, Li Hua Five steps for writing (写作五步骤 ） 1. Cross-question(审题) Main idea Style Verb tense Person 2. Seize the major points /key words (抓要点)figure out the outline(提纲) 3. Sentences connection(连句成文) Words/phrases Sentences 5. Error correcting ( 查错改错) 4. Ensure the fluency (添加过渡，确保 连贯） Conjunctions/ conjunctive adverbs passage passage Writing 词汇反映你知识贮存量的 多少，也是衡量英语水平 的一个重要标志。 增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧 技 巧 1. 使用较高级的词汇 增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧 技 巧 1. 使用较高级的词汇 2. 使用较丰富的句式 词汇反映你知识贮存量的 多少，也是衡量英语水平 的一个重要标志。 运用得当的句子结构可以 给文章增色不少，从而使 整篇文章因此而生辉 。 技 巧 1. 使用较高级的词汇 3. 使用恰当的连接词 词汇反映你知识贮存量的 多少，也是衡量英语水平 的一个重要标志。 运用得当的句子结构可以 给文章增色不少，从而使 整篇文章因此而生辉 。 使用恰当连接词，对写一 篇有“英语味”的文章很重 要，能使文章上下衔接自 然、紧凑。 增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧 2. 使用较丰富的句式 1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. I. 怎样使用较高级的词汇 We all think highly of him ./we regard him as a great man. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me. 4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. Books are free for the students there. There is no need for the students to pay for their books. II. 丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构） 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增 加文章的文采。 1.感叹句 How happy I was when I received your letter! 2.强调句 It was this young boy who helped the old granny. 3.倒装句 Only in this way can you solve this problem. 4.省略句 They read while walking or riding on a bus. 5、with短语 I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand. 6、定语从句 Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library. 7、各种名词性从句 Thats what I should do. 8、各种状语从句 Time passed quickly before we knew it. 常用的连接词 1表示递进 2表示转折 3表示因果 4表示条件 5表示时间 6表示特定的顺序 7换一种方法表述 进行举例说明 8总而言之，总的来说 9其他 III.常用的连接词 1. 表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容 另外，还有：whats more; whats worse;besides;moreover; in addition, furthermore ; also;as well 2. 表示转折关系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary. 3. 表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; thanks to;owing to;result In;result from 4. 表示条件关系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否则: or else, otherwise 5. 表示时间关系 当 的时候 : when ; while;after ; before until ;notuntil;as soon as later; afterwards;lately; recently;since from then on 6. 表示特定的顺序关系 首先:firstly ;first of all 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end 7.换一种方法表述或进行举例说明 换句话说: in other words; that is to say for instance; for example; such as ; actually；and so on； believe it or not； to tell you the truth；as far as I m concerned 8. 对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word, finally, in conclusion, generally speaking, as you know 9. 其他： above all, after all, at least, at most , undoubtedly, luckily; personally; Practice 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词 或意思有联系的短语。 1. Xiao Ming was walking in the street 2. _ he heard someone cry for help. 2. It was not long _ the police came . 3._he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl. when before As soon as 4. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can pay a visit to some places of interest. 5.I shared the cost of the gas with my friends ._, I saved $80. 6. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat. In addition As a result Whats worse 用所给的词完成下面短文 finally, then, at first, after that I had a bad cold last week. _, I had a running nose, but I did not take it seriously. _I began to cough. _, I had a fever and felt weak. _, I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days. At first Then After that Finally Sing the songs together （Pay attention to the songlines in red) In younger days Ive told myself my life would be my own,and Ill leave this place where sunshine never shone ,for my life is too short for waiting when I see the rising sun and I know again that I must carry on. Smile ,an everlasting smile. A smile can bring you near to me. Dont ever let me find you wrong cause that would bring a tear to me. This world has lost its glory, lets start a brand new story .Now my love. You think that I dont even mean a single word I say.Its only words and words are all I have to take your heart away. Writing Discussion/ writing 1.Look at the requirement carefully style/Tense/ person 2. Figure out the outline: beginning/ middle/ ending key points(using some set-phrases) 3.Sentences connection 4. Form passage (using some conjunctions) 5. Error correcting. A powerful earthquake hit Wenchuan in Sichuan Province on May 12，which killed so many people. Due tothe earthquake .A large quantity of factories and firms have suffered a big loss. At the same time, tens of thousands of houses have collapsed. When the earthquake happened, I was attending class. Suddenly I with my teacher and classmates felt cont