英语作文的评语.docx

英语作文的评语mynameisjinjiahong,andmyenglishnameiskaci.im14yearsold,37kg.ilikeenglish,andbooks,red,orange,pink,blue,shuttlecock,waternmelon,apple,andbananas.yesterday,iwenttozhejianguniversitytolearnenglish.oh,hereisbeautiful!imakeafriend.hernameismayun.sheisfromhangzhou,shes10yearsold,andlikesapples.today,imveryhappy.班主任评语：verygood!keepstudyinghard,andibelieveyoucanlearnalothere!mychinesenameis范依昀。myenglishnameiskate.brown.myfamilynameisbrown.myfirstnameiskate.im12yearsold.iamchinese.imfromhuzhou.ihavemanyhobbies.ilikeplayingfootball,andplayingcomputer.ilikebluebest.ihaveafriend.hernameis蒋姣姣。shelookshappy,sheislovely.ilikeherverymuch.shelikeswatchingtvandsinging.thereisthreepeopleinmyfamily,myfather,motherandme.myfatherisadoctor,mymotherisadoctortoo.ilikethemverymuch.iamhappyeveryday.mytelephonenumberis*.welcometomyhome.班主任评语：verygood!yourhand-writhingisverynice.todayisthefirstdayofthesummercamp.icouldntsleepwellyesterdayevening.maybeifeltalittleuncomfortable.iseldomlivewithothers.andthebedroomisdifferentformhome.butimetthreenewfriendshere.theyrefriendlyandlovely.afterthebeginningceremony,ihadanexam.thefirstpassagewasalittledifficultforme.somewordsihaventlearnbefore.ispentsomeminutesonit.anyway,heafternoon,isawtheforeignteacher.hernameisjane.abeautifulfirlwhocomesfromusa.sheisnotold,just22.butshehadbeentoeurope,beijing.sheletusplaysomegames,becauseshewantedustoknoweachtherquickly.butithinkthegamesisnotinteresting.sosomestudentsdontputtheirheartsinthegame.alsotheteacherspokesoquicklythaticouldntunderstandher.班主任评语：beautifulhand-writing!e