基础写作之正反观点对立型.doc

第三单元作文基础写作之正反观点对立型你的班级对“是否有必要穿校服” 进行了辩论，以下是正反两方所持观点。意见百分比原 因赞 同70%是学校的标志；整洁、大方；显示平等, 避免攀比；节省时间，专注学习；不盲目赶时髦。不赞同30%颜色呆板沉闷；款式单一；不能满足时尚品位，不能彰显个性.写作内容 根据以上内容, 写一篇关于 “学生是否有必要穿校服”的短文。 介绍正反两方观点； 表达自己的看法。写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 不要逐字逐句翻译所给信息。评分标准 句子结构准确, 信息完整, 篇章连贯。第一：认真审题 文体：观点对立式议论文 人称：兼顾第一和第三人称 时态：现在时或者过去时理清写作结构：1.议论主题：是否有必要穿校服？2.赞成观点：支持穿校服理由（1）整洁、大方；显示平等, 避免攀比。理由（2）节省时间, 专注学习；不盲目赶时髦。3.反对观点：反对穿校服理由（1）颜色呆板沉闷；款式单一。理由(2)不能满足时尚品位，不能彰显个性。4.我的观点：支持/反对穿校服 第二：整合信息(翻译关键词) 象征 symbol 整洁大方tidy and neat 平等，避免攀比 equal，avoid being compared 节省时间，专注学习 save time, concentrate on study 不赶时髦wont follow fashion 颜色呆板沉闷 dull and boring color 款式单一 simple and plain style 缺乏个性 lack personality 不能满足时尚品味cant satisfy taste for fashion 第三：连词成句 议论主题:是否有必要穿校服We had a discussion about/on whether its necessary to wear the school uniform. / Recently, in our class there has been a heated discussion about/on whether its necessary to wear the school uniform. 赞成观点：理由1 The school uniform is a symbol of the school. It is tidy and neat. It makes students feel equal and helps them avoid being compared to others about the clothes. The school uniform, which is tidy and neat, is a symbol of the school, makes the students feel equal and helps them avoid being compared to others about the clothes.理由2： Wearing the school uniform saves the students time on choosing what to wear to school. It makes them concentrate on study. They wont follow fashion. / They consider to follow fashion is unnecessary. Wearing the school uniform saves the students time on choosing what to wear to school, and makes them concentrate on study and consider to follow fashion is unnecessary. 反对观点：理由1 The color is dull and boring. The style is simple and plain. The color is dull and boring, and the style is simple and plain. / The color is not only dull and boring, but also the style is simple and plain. / Apart from the dull and boring color, the style is simple and plain.理由2： It lacks personality. It cant satisfy students taste for fashion. It lacks personality, so it cant satisfy students taste for fashion. / It cant satisfy students taste for fashion because of / due to lack of personality.表达个人观点 In my opinion / As far as I am concerned, it is necessary to wear the school uniform. / Personally, I prefer to the wear the school uniform./ As for me, I am for the idea that its necessary to wear the school uniform第四：连句成篇，注意关联词的使用Recently, we have had a discussion/debate about whether its necessary to wear the school uniform. 70% of my classmates are in favor of it. Because the school uniform, tidy and neat, is not only a symbol of the school, but also makes students feel equal, helping them avoid being compared to others about the clothes. Whats more, wearing the school uniform saves the students time on choosing what to wear to school, making them concentrate on study and consider it unnecessary to follow fashion. However, 30% of the students are against the idea. Because of apart from the dull and boring color, the style is simple and plain. Whats worse, it cant satisfy students taste for fashion due to lack of personality. Personally, I prefer to wear the school uniform写作模版 Recently, in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether _. Some/具体数目 students approve of it because _.Whats more/Moreover, _. However, others/具体数目are against the idea since/because _ , and worse still/Whats worse, _. As for me / In my opinion / Personally, I prefer to _.Unit 3 Homework(利用写作模版写下面的作文) 人们对于