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广州六中 英 语 科 高 三 级英语写作用词原则Polish your words in writing2011.12一教学目标1. 牢记英语作文在词汇上的高分标准2. 掌握英语写作过程中的遣词原则和技巧3. 有意识地运用英语写作用词原则提高写作水平二 学情分析写作能力是高中生必须具备的一项重要能力，是高中教学和语言训练的重要内容，也是新课程语言学习评价的重要项目。学生从上高中以来，英语写作已经成为教学中的重要内容，备受重视。但即使经过高一高二的写作训练，高三学生的写作水平仍处于比较低的水平，失分严重。原因是多方面的，其中在词汇层面上有以下原因：平时词汇积累不到位、没能使用高级词汇、受汉语思维干扰，生搬硬套英语词汇、碰到生疏的表达不懂转换等。三教学内容分析本节课的教学内容是指导学生在英语写作中学会运用弃旧用新、多实少虚、避免重复、短语优先、添形（形容词）加副（副词），曲线救国（转换思路）等原则来提升表达水平。通过让学生尝试润色一篇习作，让学生体会用词不同给书面表达带来的变化。同时，通过拓展练习，让学生学习如何提升平时写作中常出现的一些词汇。四教学重难点1. 重点：弃旧用新、短语优先原则2. 难点：添形加副，曲线救国原则五教学过程Step I. Leading in1. Have students translate the following sentence into English. (choose one or two students to write their translations on the blackboard.)一项调查表明很多大学毕业生都想在大城市寻找一份好工作。普通用词：A survey shows that many graduates want to look for a good job in big cities高级用词：A survey reveals that a great number of graduates look forward to hunting for a satisfying occupation in big cities Changes:(1) shows reveals ; job occupation; look for hunt for (弃旧用新原则)(2) want to look forward to; many a great number of (短语优先原则)(3) good satisfying （多实少虚原则）2. Teachers words 当数以万计的考生千军万马千篇一律千人一面都用look for a good job来表达“寻找一份好工作”而你不幸是其中一个时，你的作文注定“杯具”，分数注定“悲催”！高级用词能给评卷人“打鸡血”，使评卷眼前一亮，对你的文章赞不绝口爱不释手！你的作文也就很“给力”了！3. The criteria of a good composition 要点齐全、主题突出、 条理分明、行文连贯、 词汇丰富、句式多样、 语言地道、表达得体、 结构清晰、书写美观。Your choice of words counts.Step 2. Improving the writing on the word level by using the following principles. 1. Have students work in groups, go through the writing and work together to upgrade some words. (show the principles) Principles: 弃旧用新、多实少虚、避免重复、短语优先基础写作假设你最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，下表是这次活动的时间安排和活动内容。活动时间7月15日-22日或8月15日-22日活动内容参加英语角 学唱英语歌曲 听英语讲座 表演英语短剧 看英语电影 教外宾学中文 写作内容电视台现就活动时间和活动内容征求你的意见。请按以下要求以书信形式给予答复。1.选择适合你的时间并说明理由；2.解释你只能参加听英语讲座和教外宾学中文这两项活动（因为你要做一个研究项目），虽然你认为所有的活动都很不错；3.说明你选择的理由：听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息；教外宾中文因为越来越多的外宾想了解中国。Dear Sir or Madame,Im glad to be invited to the English summer camp. Thank you so much for having so many good activities, such as English corner, English lectures, English films, English songs, English plays and helping foreigners learn Chinese. I think all the activities are good to students. However it is a pity that I can only join in two of them, because I will have to spend some time in doing my research project. I want to listen to the lectures, by which I will learn some about western culture, and help foreigners learn Chinese, as more and more foreigners want to know about China. I want to see my grandparents in the country right after our school finishes in mid July, so I am going to take part in the camp from August 15th to 22nd.Thank you very much. Yours truly, Li Ping2. Check how well students improve the wording. Discuss the principles and show more examples.III. Rules to improve vocabularyRule I. 弃旧用新(1) Although the majority of students are aware of our parents tender love, they are not used to saying “Thank you”.are not used to _(2) Many people agree with this practice.agree with _(3) There is a heated discussion as to whether a nuclear power plant should be built in our city.is _Rule II: 短语优先(1) He likes pop music very much. likes _（2）Nowadays people think education more and more important. think . important. _(3) We should consider many factors when we decide to study abroad.consider _Rule III: 多实少虚(1) He is a nice man. He is always helping others when they are in trouble. nice _(2) It is really a good idea to go climbing this weekend. good _(3) By traveling outside, people are close to nature, which is good to their health. good _Rule IV: 避免重复The interesting teacher knows how to make an uninteresting class interesting. _ _ _Rule V: 添形（adj.)加副（adv.)(1) To be a good student is easier said than done, for it calls for a students _ efforts.(2) I _ agree with the authors opinion on this issue.1. 弃旧用新原则However it is a pity that I can only join in two of them, because I will have to spend some time in doing my research project.join in participate in/take part in拓展(1) The fast developing society presses to do our best to work hard.do our best spare no effort (2) We should do our best to keep good health.keep maintain(3) Our parents have done all they could to bring us up, but have never been rewarded with our thanks.thanks gratitude/appreciation(4) Although the majority of students are aware of our parents tender love, they are not used to saying “Thank you”.are not used to are not accustomed to(5) Tickets can be bought in advance from the box office.bought purchased(6) Many people agree with this practice.agree with approve of/subscribe to(7) In my opinion, a qualified graduate should have a sense of responsibility.In my opinion From my perspective(8) Scientific reports have proved that certain materials in a hair colorant will harm ones hair if it is often used.often frequently(9) There is a heated discussion as to whether a nuclear power plant should be built in our city.is appears(10). There are 2 main teaching buildings in our school.are stand(11). Managing a blog takes too much of students time.takes occupiesmore exampleswith the help of with the assistance ofluckily fortunatelydecide determinechance opportunityas a result as a consequencesome severalrich wealthyhardworking diligenthappy delighted/pleasedbuild constructfinally eventually2. 多实少虚原则 Thank you so much for arranging so many good activities, such as English corner, English lectures, English films, English songs, English plays and helping foreigners learn Chinese. I think all the activities are good to students. good attractive/wonderful/excellent. good meaningful/beneficial拓展(1)We are supposed to stay in a good mood if we hope to keep fit.good cheerful(2) By traveling outside, people are close to nature, which is good to their health.good beneficial(3) He is a nice man. He is always helping others when they are in trouble.nice warm-hearted(4) After the thief stole a lot of money, he walked out of the room.walked slipped/sneaked(5) He is good child at home and a good student at school.good obedient/well-behaved good hardworking (6) It is really a good idea to go climbing this weekend.good fantastic/excellent/splendid/marvelous/wonderful3. 避免重复原则（4）I want to listen to the lectures, by which I will learn some about western culture, and help foreigners learn Chinese, as more and more foreigners want to know about China. (4) want to would like to want to be eager to拓展(1) The interesting teacher knows how to make an uninteresting class interesting. The humorous teacher knows how to make a dull/boring class enjoyable.(2) We were greatly surprised to see so great a crowd of people visiting the Great Wall We were extremely surprised to see so large a crowd of people visiting the Great Wall4. 短语优先原则（5）I want to see my grandparents in the country right after our school finishes in mid July, so I am going to take part in the camp from August 15th to 22nd.want to look forward to拓展(1) He likes pop music very much.Like be fond of/be keen on/be interested in/take an interest in(2) Nowadays people think education more and more important.think education more and more important attach greater importance to education(3) Some books will harm the psychological and spiritual health of readers.harm do harm to/cause harm to(4) We should consider many factors when we decide to study abroad.consider takeinto consideration(5) Suddenly I realized that there was someone following me.suddenly all of a sudden (7) I cannot bear his bad temper.bear put up with/tolerate5. 曲线救国原则我们应该根据自己的实际饭量打饭，避免造成浪费。We should get our meals according to our appetite/how much we can have so as not to cause waste.6. 添形加副原则（温暖陪伴原则）(1)To be a good student is easier said than done, for it calls for a students (consistent/ceaseless) efforts.(2) There are three (principal) suggestions for us to follow.(3) In 1990, 63% of the people spent their holidays at home, while the figure decreased (considerably) to 24%in 2000.Is Failure a Bad Thing Failure is a common thing in our life. If we do things, we will meet difficulties. Of course we should do our best to overcome them. However, in many cases，it is not so easy，or even impossible. Then how should we face failure？ Different people have different attitudes towards failure. Faced with failure，some people become sad and lose their self-confidence. They refuse to try again. These people will never achieve anything in life. However, some people are not afraid of failure. Instead they believe that failure is the mother of success. As a result，they learn from it and try harder. Such people will succeed some day. As for me，I dont think failure is a bad thing. Never will failure make me sad. It gives me chances to enrich my experience and steel my will. With this attitude，I will try hard in anything I decide to accomplish and get success in the end.Is Failure a Bad Thing Failure is a common thing in our life. If we do things, we will probably encoun