漫画作文写作指导ppt课件

,湘阴一中,Welcome to our school!,2013届高三英语写作指导 漫画作文,1. 近几年高考英语写作对写作内容限制越来越少，开放式、半开放式的命题已成为高考命题的发展趋势。 2. 该类题目往往不要求千篇一律，有利于发挥学生的主观能动性。 3. 但是对考生的能力要求越来越高。要求考生做到内容符合要求，语句通顺，条理清楚。高分作文除了需要语法正确外，还必须能运用较复杂的句子结构，较高级的词语及一些过渡性词语。,高考写作命题透视,湘阴一中,湘阴一中,近三年湖南高考英语写作一览表,湘阴一中,Task: 漫画类作文 写作指导,漫画类题型解读,漫画作文属于通过对画面的描述，揭示画面所蕴含的实质，并与现实生活联系起来，从而达到讽刺和教育的目的。,湘阴一中,仔细观察下面的图画，理解其含义，请按要求完成一篇短文。 请简要描述图画的内容，并点明主题。 2. 结合现实生活，就图片所反映的主题谈谈自己的感想。 注意：词数不少于120个；不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。,湘阴一中,How to describe: characters and their relationship tools what is happening the exaggerating points,Step 1,湘阴一中,1. characters:_ 2. tools:_ 3. what is happening:_ 4. the exaggerating points:_,湘阴一中,a girl, her parents, her grandma,a bike / bicycle; a first-aid kid,learn to ride a bike,in a sweat;,As is shown in the picture, a girl is learning to ride. And her parents and her grandma are trying hard to help her. Her mother carries a first-aid kit . ,连词成句1,湘阴一中,As is shown in the picture, a girl is learning to ride with her parents and her grandma helping her. Its ridiculous that her mother is carrying a first-aid kit .,Part 1： Describe the picture,温馨提示： 第三人称，现在时为主,描述图画内容,As is seen/ shown described in the picture, From the picture ,we can see In the picture, there are/is (are) doing The picture above is about ,【Tips】,湘阴一中,How to interpret the its meaning Whats your understanding of it? Whats the common social phenomenon and its reason of existence?,Step 2,湘阴一中,1.Understanding of the cartoon: 2.Social phenomenon:,Parents are trying their best to protect their child from being hurt.,over-spoiled love,The picture reflects a common phenomenon. In our daily life, many parents act like Xiao Huas. They have only one child, so they spare no efforts to help their only children. They think their children can achieve what they expect.,连词成句2,湘阴一中,(reality),(reason),Part 2 Interpret the picture,湘阴一中,It is true that The picture reflects a common phenomenon that The picture indicates that This is an ironic (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among,【Tips】,How to give your opinions state your position(立场) give your reason make suggestions,Step3,湘阴一中,1.State your position: 2.Give your reasons: 3.Make suggestions:,湘阴一中,In my opinion, it is wrong for parents to do so.,Its time for parents to,( various reasons ),In my opinion, it is wrong for parents to do so because children should learn to do things on their own. If they have the habit of being dependent, how can they succeed in life? So its time for parents to reflect on what they have done. (reason and suggestion),连词成句3,Part 3 Give your opinions,I think/believe that As far as Im concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view,must have to Do/Dont,should It is better/advisable to I consider it necessary,Only in this way can.,湘阴一中,【Tips】,Step 4,湘阴一中,Possible version,连句成文,In my opinion, it is wrong for parents to do so because children should learn to do things on their own. If they have the habit of being dependent, how can they succeed in life? So its time for parents to reflect on what they have done. (reason and suggestion),(Description),(Interpretation),(Suggestion),As is shown in the picture, Xia Hua is riding a bicycle with her parents and grandma helping her. They are so tired that all of them are in a sweat. Xia Hua is wondering why. (details),The picture seems to be reflecting a kind of social phenomenon. In our daily life, many parents act like Xiao Huas. (reality) They have only one child ,so they spare no efforts to help their only children. They think their children can achieve what they expect. (reason),湘阴一中,It s time to show the students works.,湘阴一中,As is shown in the picture, a girl is learning to ride a bike and her parents and grandma are helping her. Its ridiculous that her mother is carrying a first-aid kit because she fears that her daughter may get hurt. This phenomenon is common in our society. There is only one child in many Chinese families, so parents and other family members,第四档（2025),湘阴一中,Students Sample 1,always put all of their love on their child. They prepare everything for the child, which tends to result in the lack of the basic abilities. Therefore, I think it is time for parents to give child more free room. Only by giving children enough room can they enrich themselves.,第四档（2025),湘阴一中,湘阴一中,审题清楚 语句通顺，条理清楚 运用较复杂的句子结构，较高级的词语。 过渡自然。,Advantages,湘阴一中,Students Sample 2,As is described in the picture, a little girl is learning to recycle with the company of her family. The women with a first-aid kit is running beside her. However, the little girl wants to ride by herself. The picture is both special and meaningful, which conveys the message that over-spoiled love will make children more dependent and fear to challenge themselves. Therefore, parents should loosen your hands to let them grow up independently. Please have confidence in us, we can face difficulties bravely. Only in this way can we lay a solid basis for our future.,湘阴一中, 单词拼写错误 人物关系不清楚 人称前后不一致 语言繁冗,Disadvantages,湘阴一中,Lets practice,湘阴一中,阅读下面漫画，先对漫画的内容进行描述，然后对这一现象发表自己的看法。（120词左右） 参考词汇： 西瓜皮：water-melon skin 长凳：bench,湘阴一中,总的评分标准：7+7+5+4+2=25 1.描述图片，点明主题，给7分 2.联系实际，写出启示，给7分 3.语法正确，用词得当，给5分 4.内容连贯，层次清楚，给4分 5.书写工整，卷面干净，给2分,湘阴一中,【参考范文】,From the picture, we can see a pair of lovers has just eaten up a water-melon on a bench. They are wearing fashionably and look very happy. However, when they are leaving, they leave the melons skin on the bench, making it very dirty. They are lazy to throw it into the dustbin although it is v