高二基础英语作文练习与评讲.ppt

高考作文之一 基础性作文,第一节 基础写作（共1小题；满分15分） 【写作内容】 你收到一位笔友的电子邮件，你要给他写一封回信。 【写作内容】 请根据以下信息写一封回信。 1得知笔友所在的小镇现正流行禽流感，你对此感到非常遗撼； 2提出你的建议，包括： (1)勤洗手，避免到家禽(poultry)较多的地方去。 (2)最好不要食用当地的鸡、鸭，如果要食用，需将其充分煮熟后再食用，以免感染病毒。 (3)如果发现自己有感冒、发烧等症状，及时就医。 【写作要求】 1只能用5个句子表达全部内容； 2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数。 Dear Tom,1得知笔友所在的小镇现正流行禽流感，你对此感到非常遗撼； It is a pity for you because I heard that the bird flu is attacking your hometown . I feel sorry for you because I heard that the bird flu is attacking your hometown .,2提出你的建议，包括： 勤洗手，避免到家禽(poultry)较多的地方去。 To ensure your health, I suggest washing your hands frequently and avoiding going to places where there are a lot of poultry.,3.最好不要食用当地的鸡、鸭， Besides, its best not to eat the local chicken or duck when the bird flu is going around,4.如果要食用，需将其充分煮熟后再食用，以免感染病 毒。 Even if you want to eat it, you shouldnt eat it until it is well cooked so that you wont be affected by its virus.,5.如果发现自己有感冒、发烧等症状，及时就医 If you have a cold or fever, you should see a doctor immediately.,Dear Tom, I feel sorry for you because I heard that bird flu is attacking(侵袭，袭击) your hometown.,Dear Tom, I feel sorry for you because I heard that bird flu is attacking your hometown. To ensure your health, I suggest washing your hands frequently and avoiding going to places where there are a lot of poultry.,Dear Tom, I feel sorry for you because I heard that bird flu is attacking your hometown. To ensure your health, I suggest washing your hands frequently and avoiding going to places where there are a lot of poultry. Besides, its best not to eat the local chicken or duck when the bird flu is going around.,Dear Tom, I feel sorry for you because I heard that bird flu is attacking your hometown. To ensure your health, I suggest washing your hands frequently and avoiding going to places where there are a lot of poultry. Besides, its best not to eat the local chicken or duck when the bird flu is going around. Even if you want to eat it, you shouldnt eat it until it is well cooked so that you wont be affected by its virus.,Dear Tom, I feel sorry for you because I heard that bird flu is attacking your hometown. To ensure your health, I suggest washing your hands frequently and avoiding going to places where there are a lot of poultry. Besides, its best not to eat the local chicken or duck when the bird flu is going around. Even if you want to eat it, you shouldnt eat it until it is well cooked so that you wont be affected by its virus. If you have a cold or fever, you should see a doctor immediately. Yours,The passage mainly tells us that +第一段第一句和最后一段最后一句,第一段 概括,US experts call for great attention to the girls maths and science education. From high school to college, there are fewer and fewer girls learning maths and science. So parents are warned to pay more attention to their daughters learning them.,第二段. (评价),As far as I am concerned, at school, most of girls dont like maths and science. They think maths and science are difficult subjects. Whats more, some parents think girls are born to be poor at them, which, in some way, will make many girls afraid of studying them!,第三段.经历感受,On reading the story, my mind began its search for a similar experience. Immediately it occurred to me that 自己或者别人的例子 读了这个故事，我的头脑开始搜索类似的经历，很快，我就想起了.,I dont agree to the above. It is true that girls are not good at maths and science at school. But great women scientists have proved that girls can do as well in them as boys do. For instance, Madam Curie, a Nobel Prize winner, set a good example to us.,第四段. (总结),1.In summary ,.+谚语 总之， 2.we can safely draw a conclusion that.+谚语 综上所述,If girls want to learn maths and science well, they should make up their minds at the beginning, and their parents and teachers should often encourage them and give them time